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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Wonderful OS :)

Beautifully written :)

Loved it :)

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
Wonderful OS :)
Beautifully written :)
Loved it :)

Thanks so much Sumana. 🤗 Glad that you liked it.

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

the last part of the series...air...
fantastically demonstrated viji...lakshya truly compliments air..
unlike the show...here it gives proper insight on what makes lakshya..lakshya...
he had his fair share of misdeeds...but out of impulse nd not sm planned calculative moves..which shows he is not evil...but a very humanly trait present almost in everyone...
the maturity came to him after the storm justifies lakshya.. nd yes if their is a will...we can truly bring changes to our soul. nd we yourself are responsible for our actions.
really loved how lakshya stood by his brother in time of need. the true brotherly feel.
highlight of the is was the incoherent mumbling nd what it meant to both.
for sanskar it was just rambling which he has no idea what it was.
for lakshya it was that bridge that crossed the gap between brothers finally.
also loved his reaction to ragini's facade.
the girl is pure evil nd I still can't come to terms of her supposed change of heart...
okay that was off topic...
I honestly loved this air part the best out of the whole series and that is something considering ur each work surpasses the other...
u are fantBulous...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi
the last part of the series...air...
fantastically demonstrated viji...lakshya truly compliments air..
unlike the show...here it gives proper insight on what makes lakshya..lakshya...
he had his fair share of misdeeds...but out of impulse nd not sm planned calculative moves..which shows he is not evil...but a very humanly trait present almost in everyone...
the maturity came to him after the storm justifies lakshya.. nd yes if their is a will...we can truly bring changes to our soul. nd we yourself are responsible for our actions.
really loved how lakshya stood by his brother in time of need. the true brotherly feel.
highlight of the is was the incoherent mumbling nd what it meant to both.
for sanskar it was just rambling which he has no idea what it was.
for lakshya it was that bridge that crossed the gap between brothers finally.
also loved his reaction to ragini's facade.
the girl is pure evil nd I still can't come to terms of her supposed change of heart...
okay that was off topic...
I honestly loved this air part the best out of the whole series and that is something considering ur each work surpasses the other...
u are fantBulous...

Hey Akku 🤗 🤗

Your comments always make me feel so very touched and blessed yaar. I was just so happy to read your feedback on 3 of my Elements series OS'S today, it really made my day. 😊

Yeah, in this OS I wanted to show Lakshya's inherent nature which is mostly well meaning. He had definitely caused lot of issues due to his own impulsive and sometimes fickle character. But having realized how his own actions brought him and his family to these dire straits, he now sincerely repents and wants to redeem himself.

That's very true, what you wrote in your comment. Lakshya's fault was more his lack of stability and resolve. He was not really evil. And having repented, he wants to take responsibility for his actions and support his loved ones.

I really wanted to show the SanLak brotherly bond, and I am so very happy that you loved it. Lakshya decides he needs to be there for Sanskaar in this hour of crisis, just as Sanskaar was always there for him throughout their childhood and teens.

I agree with you: I also feel the serial has not shown Ragini's redemption convincingly. Ragini's character is quite fascinating actually, with so many layers and shades of grey. But to redeem her, they needed to show a lot more of realization and repentance. I guess, they missed a golden opportunity for this around the kidnapping track. Or even earlier, they could have shown Ragini genuinely having memory loss rather than faking it. And then feeling gut wrenching remorse when she realizes/recollects what she had done. 😊

Thanks for this lovely comment Akku. 🤗

Love,

Viji

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