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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
Wow superb OS Viji...came as quite a surprise...was ages ago tht u wrote the Elements series...will reply in detail soon!

Love Tas

Hey Tas..🤗 🤗

Thanks a lot sweetie. Glad you loved this. Yeah, I had earlier concluded the Elements series as a quartet, omitted Air since I was too irritated with Lakshya to write such a lovely element on him. 😊 But now that he has become more mature, more responsible, I decided to make it a 5 OS series.

Cheers

Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: lucky.m
oh viji .;.this is awesome👏 👏..I so wish Cv's could have shown some intense scene b/w swasan like in OS...and laksh ...you can make us like him as well😆
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Hey dear...🤗 🤗

Thanks so very much for those warm words. I really wanted to show an intense yet tender scene between Swasan, on the theme of the manjha mishap. So very happy that you loved this.

About Lakshya. 😆 Usually I also portray him as an antagonist in most of my works. But I felt of late, he has been more mature, and has begun to understand that SwaSan belong together. So I wanted to show him redeeming himself a little bit, supporting SwaSan. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi
Awesome update Viji
Loved it
The elements series is one of my favorite writings by you
Sorry no time for long comments
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

Hey Mansi...🤗 🤗

Thanks so very much yaar. So happy that you loved this OS. Thanks for those warm words about my entire Elements series as well.

Love,

Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

hi viji😛

nice work buddy👍🏼

smooth and beautifully written.👏

and yeah i have read all your element series loved them all❤️

thanks for the pm buddy😊🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: _akaur_
What a wonderful OS!!

Thanks for writing another OS on Swasan..

Really liked it!

The way Lakshya supports Sanskaar and understands that his bhai needs him the most now.. I wish that they show such a scene between our SanLak in the show too...

I hate ragini so so much and her Urvashi Maasi too..
Sometimes I really feel that Ragini should be punished for whatever she did from the beginning to everyone, Swara, Lucky, her parents and everyone else she has hurt..

The last moments between SwaSan was ❤️
Thanks for the pm
:)

Hey dear...🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton for that lovely comment. So very happy that you liked this OS.

I wanted to show a very tender moment between SwaSan, Sanskaar being so worried and tense about Swara's injuries, and Swara being literally moored to life and consciousness by her intense love for Sanskaar. Glad you loved that, as well as Lakshya's portrayal.

I have always earlier written Lakshya as the antagonist, but I felt that his behavior has become more mature and understanding of late. I do feel he will stand by SwaSan now, be a true brother to Sanskaar and a true friend to Swara.

I have no words for Urvashi maasi. A completely wacko character. Ragini ---I feel they have completely ruined her character in the serial. I used to hope that they would give her a realistic and meaningful redemption track, but they have made her so petty, spiteful and vindictive now, I'm not even sure that she can be redeemed anymore.

Cheers

Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: laddu1691
Viji...😊

Air is a Fascinating Element, your description of Laksh and Air is spot on... I liked your Laksh... He was a true brother here...

I used to like Ragini's character but they have killed her... I don't know what to feel about her anymore...

SwaSan, watching them through the eyes of Laksh was superb. Sanskar vulnerable, Swara waking up to his words... your words were beautiful👏
Loved the OS

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Latha

Hey Latha...thanks for your most lovely words. Felt so happy to get this comment. 🤗 🤗

So very happy that you loved the portrayal of SwaSan as well as Lakshya. I wanted to show a gradual realization in Lakshya, an effort to rediscover the goodness within himself, to accept that SwaSan belonged together. He does seem like an Air sign, doesn't he? I would like to think that he reverts to being a true brother to Sanskaar, and a true friend to Swara.

I agree with you completely on Ragini: I used to like her character initially, and kept feeling that though she had walked down the wrong path, there was definite potential for her redemption. There were mitigating circumstances in her case after all...

But now they have completely wrecked her portrayal in the serial. They have made her so spiteful, so petty, I'm not sure she can be convincingly redeemed anymore. Let's see what happens in the serial...😊

Lots of Love

Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: ishanita
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unres

viji
my dear just came from exam
what had u written???
simply outstanding
its a treat to me after exam ...tnx for that

isha

Hey Ishanita...🤗 🤗

Thanks dear. Glad I could give you a treat after your exam. 😃 So happy to know that you loved this OS.

Cheers

Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Nupur_5
Gotcha!!! Found it even before you could PM me! How much obsessed (Not Ragini wali...plz) I'm with your works!!!

Will unres later :)

🤗 I was really touched to see you res'ing so fast, literally within a minute of me posting. 😊 Don't worry, no one can be as crazily obsessed as Ragini or Urvashi maasi. 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: soumi93
hey viji... u r awesome as always
first of all thanks to u for writing this...cvs really need to roam around this forum fr ideas which they lacks...
swasan convo was too emotional and touchy.
i loved it the most...
keep it up.
a tight hug to u fr writing dis.

Hey Soumi sweetheart 🤗 🤗

Dozens of jhappis for this comment. Am so happy that you loved this OS, dear. I was going 😳at your compliments.

SwaSan are so magical na...I am so sure Sanskaar would have literally felt his heartbeats and breathing stopped, seeing his beloved Swara in such pain. And Swara also returned to her moorings to life, her consciousness, only because of her intense love for her Sanskaar.

Lots of Love

Viji