SwaSan TS-After 16 years NOTE ON PAGE 10

Maheshwari Mansion.

Sansakaar's POV

Parvati dadi and Urvashi masi were blaming Swara for Ragini committing suicide.They shurely had crossed their limits a long time ago.My blood was boiling.How dare they blame her when the clear culprit was Laksh and of course Ragini's own misdeeds which landed her in this situation the first place.He opened his mouth to shut both of the ladies when he suddenly heard 2 noises from his family.
Annapoorna Durgaprasad Maheshwari and Sujata Ramprasad Maheshwari had come for their daughter-in-law's rescue.

Annapoorna-Kakisa aapki himmat kaise hui hamari beti par ungli oothanae ki.Aab tak chup the ye soch kar ki galti hamare Laksh ki hai par aap to bina kisi vajah Swara par ungli ootha rahi hai.

Urvashi-Annapoorna ji ye Swara...

Sujata-(Cuts her in the middle) Urvashi ji aap to kuch na hi bole vo behtar hoga.Swara aur Sanskaar ki shaadi ki saari rasmo me jitne kaand kiye woh saab pata hai mahare ko.Aur vaise bhi aap bahar ki hai ye mat bhulye ke rishte mai mahari Swara aapki Ragini se baadi hai.Aur doosri baat Ragini ne suicide Swara ki vajah se nai balki aapni ki hu pichle galtiyo ke vajah se ki hai.

Annapoorna-Aur Urvashi ji agar parvarish ki baat hai to aap kaki saa se hi kyu pooch nahi leti ki oonhone kitni aachi parvarish di hai Ragini ko.Apni behen ko marne ki koshsih,Jabardashti shaadi karna,aapne ,sasur ko blackmail karna,aapni behen ki shaadi todna ye sab aachi parvarish ka hi nateja hoga mere khyal se.

(Parvati looks down in shame with nothing more to say).

Swara-Daadi maine aap se kaha tha ki Ragini ko aur badhava mat dijiye warna aap pachtayege.Aaj aapke paas pachtaane ke alwa aur kuch bhi nai bacha.Aur aaj vahi hua hai.

Durgaprasad-Urvashiji hamari bahu ka apman karne ke baad bhi aap yaha kyu khadi hai.Chali jaye is ghar se aur Parvatiji ek baat sun lijye aaj ke baad aapke kadam is ghar me nahi padege.Sharmisthaji aur Shekharji yaha aayege to hamese zyada khush koi nai hoga.Par aap ke liye ye ghar me aab koi jagah nai hai.


Just than completely drenched Ragini enters the house.With her is Laksh who had gone after her to save her from committing suicide.

Sujata-Ye lo jiss ke naam par ramayan ho rahi hai vo to athe hai.

Swara-Ragini ye kya bachpana tha tumhe aandaaza bi hai maa,baba,sab kitna daar gaye the.

Sanskaar-Ragini agar Lucky ki galti thi to tuhe mujhe ya Swara ko batana chaye tha s tarah aapni zindgi khatam karna koi solution nahi hai.Tumhari dadi aur masi ne meri biwi par na jaane kitne type ke allegation laga diye.Mujhe aaj is baat ka solution chahiye.Ye sab is tarah se nahi chal sakta.

Laksh-Bhai ye tu kya keh raha hai ??

Sujata-Ke galat keh raha hai mara chora.Jab kabhi bhi galti Ragini karti hai aur naam Shona ka aata hai.Is ladki ne itne paap kiye lekin iski daadi toh Shona ko aake sunati hai.Ye urvashi ji mare chore aur chori ki shaadi todvane mei padi hai.

Sanskaar-Bade papa aaj faisla kar dena hai mujhe.Agar Lucky aapni shaadi continue karna chata hai to mai aur Swara yaha nahi rahege.Aab bas ho gaya hai.Paani sir se upar chala gaya hai.Ragini ke saath mei aapni poori zindagi ek chat ke niche nai reh sakta.Ye manipulations,scheming,jab dekho ta ye daadi aur Urvashi ji jaise logo ka interfernce.Aab bas bahut ho gaya.

(Just than Shekhar and Sharmistha enters)

Ragini-Nai Sanskaar aap kyu ghar chod kar jayege.Aap aur Swara bhi yehi rahege sab ke saath.Swara kaho na Sanskaar se.

(Swara for the first time stays silent and supports Sanskaar and she knows he is right.Living with Ragini is impossible.One minute she is fine next minute she is scheming and plotting)

(Durgaprasad is thinking very deeply because he knows Saskaar is right.But it would be difficult to let him go.He always had deep affection for Sanskaar nd over the time he had also grown fond of Swara.She was a kind of daughter he never had.But he knew he had to let them go.So that they can live their life in peace without all this nuisance.)

DP-Laksh tum aab aapna aisla jaldi karo.Aur shaadi koi mazak nai hai ki jab tumhara man kiya tum ne tod di aur jab man kiya tab jod di.Tumhari harkato ki wajah se doosro ko takleef hoti hai. Laksh aur Ragini aaj shaam tak hame tumhara faisla chahiye.Aur agar Laksh is rishte ke khilaaf hai to Ragini tumhe yaha se jana hoga.Swara Sanskaar tum Sujata aur Ram ke saath thodi der mei study mei aa jao.

(In SwaSan's bedroom Swara was still crying over the accusations her grandmother had placed on her.She was flabergasted.Ragini had done many wrong things but she would never wish death for her sister.Sanskaar was trying to calm her but na avail.Sujata and RP entered the room.Though Sujata did not like Swara in the begining but she slowly realised that Swara was the only person who was capable of bringing smile to her son's face.Her heart pained to see her like this.Swara always was of the forgiving nature.She cared for everyone and this is what she got in return. )

Sujata-Chori aisi rote nahi hai.Khaas karke un logo ke liye jine teri kadar na ho.

Swara-Par mom ye ghar toot jayega.

Sujata-Arre konsa ghar Shona.Ye ghar to usi din toot gaya tha jab Sanskaar ise chod kar gaya tha.Aur rahi baat tum dono ke jaane i mai to kahu gi ke yehi accha hai.Kamse kam tum dono insaano ke tarah reh to paoge shaanti se.Y roj kaki saa ke dakhal andaazi mare ko pasand na ha.

RP-Swara beta hum dono to aapni poori zindagi yaha reh liya par mai kabhi nahi chahoga ki tum dono bhi poori zindagi aise hi raho.

(Sanskaar with this decided something new.He along with Swara,RP,Sujata went to drawing room.Lucky,Ragini,Adarsh,Pareeniti,Uttara were already there.)

Ragini-Sanskaar,Swara please hamari wajah se ghar chod kar mat jaayiye.Hum jaante hai daadi ne bahut kuch kaha hai.

Sanskaar-Ragini mai aapna faisla le chuka hu.Bade Papa Lucky aapni shaadi ka jo bhi faisla le par mai aur Swara jaa rahe hai is ghar ko chodkar.Mujhe ye faisla bahut pehle le lena chayi tha par der se hi sahi.

Lucky-Bhai aisa mat kar dekh Dadi ki to aadat hai aur Ragini ne promise kiya hai ki woh aab aisa nahi karegi.

Swara-Laksh kuch aadatein kabhi nahi badalti.Ragini ne mera vishwas kai baar toda hai par maine use hamesha maaf kiya par mai bhi ek insaan hu meri bhi feelings hai.Sab log aakar mujhe kuch bhi keh jaaye,meri maa ko kuch bhi bole mei ye kabhi bardasht nai karrogi.Isiliye Sansakaar jo bhi faisla lega mai usme uske saath hu.Aur rahi baat Dadi ki toh Ragini aapne aap hyan se socho ke dadi ne tumhe kitni baar manipulate kiya hai.Tumhari soch tumhari nahi daadi ki hai.Please tumhare paas abhi bhi waqt hai Ragini daadi ko aapni zindagi mei mat ghusne do.Baaki tumhari marzi.

DP-Sanskaar tum dono kaha jaane ki soch rahe ho beta.

Sanskaar-Bade papa Karma Industried ko maine U.S. tak spread kiya hai.To aab mai ise U.S. se sambhaluga.Ghar ki koi tension nahi hai because ghar already hai waha par.Mom,Dad aate jaate rahge.Aur agar Uttara chahe toh aapni further studies wahi se kar sakti hai.

DP-Hum tumhe nahi rokege Sanskaar,Swara par dining table par oh 2 khursi hamesha hame tumhari yaad dilagi..Ghar khali ho jayega tum dono ke bagar.

AP-Sanskaar Swara ka dhyan rakhna aur yaad rakhna ye tumhara hi ghar hai.

Sujata-Jiji woh dono toh ek dusre ka dhyan rakh lege.Mare dono bache bade zimeedaar hai.Aap toh bas abhi apni bahu ko sambhaliye.

(With this Swara and Sanskaar set off to pack their bags.Sanskaar had booked the very nights flight.He di not know the reason bu he was getting suffocated by the house he grew up in.Ragini tried her best to stop them but Sanskaar refused to listen to her and DP,AP,RP and Sujata did not top them as they knew that Swara and Sanskaar had hit their capacity.Sharmishtha was emotional but let Swara go.Shekhar knew Sanskaar would take very good care of Swara.Swara refused to see her grand mother before going and flatly told her parents that she will never see her face.Dadaji was beyond embarrsed due to dadi.)
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Pre-cap------After 16 years.Whats new.???

So here is Part 1.Will update Part 2 soon.



Index

Part 1-Pg 1
Part 2-Pg 4

Very good!

Character Sketch.

Sanskaar Maheshwari-The no nonsense business man.Has his uncle's instincts in business.He hates Ragini and her grandmother and doesn't trust them at all. Though he still blames himself for leading Ragini to a path which led her to destruction.Loves his wife,son and daughter a lot.

Swara Maheshwari-Sweet,caring,musical.She has grown more protective of her family over the years.In these 16 years she has not talked to Ragini properly even once.She is a highly successful jewellery designer.She loves her children and tries to be same for them like she had her mother.

Gayatri Sanakaar Maheshwari- Sanskaar and Swara's 14 years old daughter.Though born and brought up in U.S. she has some Indian roots thanks to her love for music and of course her parents.She loves her parents to bits.They are more like friends to her than parents.Gayatri loves all of her family but sometimes has weird vibes about Ragini Chachi and her mom.She is photo copy of Sanskaar.Loves business.Visits office every weekend.She adores her brother& big cousin brother Vivaan.-Adarsh and Pari's 17 years old son.

Rohan Sanskaar Maheshwari-Gayatri's twin brother.Was born 3 mins early before Gayatri.He is very possessive about his sister and mother.Gayatri nicknamed him "bodyguard".Rohan is silent and intense but is rock support of his father like his sister.He is extremely close with his mother and Parineeta chachi whom he calls Badi Maa.Rohan aspires to be a lawyer.Rohan's best friend is Vivaan-who also tells him about everything going in the MM mansion.Knows what Ragini did with Swara.
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Ragini Maheshwari-She changed after the suicide attempt but too late as she broke the family a fact she is constantly reminded of.Ragini and Laksh did fll in love but they cannot ave their own children.Something she considers as her punishment for all her sins.She loves Gayatri but cannot talk to her to much thanks to Sujata.

Laksh Maheshwari- Completely in love with Ragini.Has no qualms about the fact that they cannot have children.

Adarsh and Pari Maheshwari-Both have one son Vivaan.They have grown very close to Swara and Sanskaar in these years and pamper Gayatri as their own daughter.Pari adores Swara as ell but also tried to bridge the gap between two sisters.

Vivaan Adarsh Maheshwari-Prankster,cool but studious Viviaan has no interest in business and wants to pursue medical.Something which his father seems to understand.He s very close to Swara.Calls her "choti maa".

The rest of the people are same.AP,DP,RP,Sujata,Sharmistha,Shekhar,Daadimaa.

Superb... Awaiting the next update

Update soon. ...it's so awesome😊

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n superb decision taken by sanskaar
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superb decision taken by sanskar 👍🏼

Super awesome and different one...

awsme waiting for nxt part

its awesome
waiting fr next part..cont soon