SwaSan TS-After 16 years NOTE ON PAGE 10 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
awesome update i loved d family moments so rohan knw everything n gayu dont knw ragini can't be change cause she is actually brought up like that bt whts wrong with lakshi can understand he loves ragini bt he should also try to understand others pov ohhh im love with vivaan already n most imp thing is mm wasis thinking is changed be it ap,dp,rp n sujju sujju loves dil as her daughter so nice to read this
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
superb..ragini v'l never change update nxt part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Omg omg..awsum yaar...plzz continue soon n do pm me da nxt part plzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Wow..!! Waiting fr nxt update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Awsome chptrs dear
loved ur story
cont soon

plz do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
So superb yaar...
Still tat hearted was there...definetly it will b...
Seriously I don want to forgive ragini and her deeds...
Loved hiw swara is now...
Cute family...and Sujatha supporting her. ..
Nice update...
Do pm me while updating next part...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved the update
its good to see sensible swara and regretting ragini for a change
love every character rohan gayatri and vivan all are awesome
❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
16 saal ke baad zindagi Mei kafi changes hota Hai. I really loved it
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Part 3
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New York,U.S.A.

Sanskaar was seeing Rohan and Gayatri's childhood pics and remembers his,Luck, Adarsh and Uttara's childhood days.Swara sees him with the pics.

Swara-Kya dekh rahe ho Sabskaar ?

Sanskaar-Soch raha hu Rohan and Gayatri have grown up so fast.Or is it that these 16 years have passed very fast ?

Swara-17 years Sanskaar

Sanskaar-What ??

Swara-It's been 17 years.Sanskaar do you miss them.I know you miss bade papa a lot.We have nnot seen him or badi maa properly in these years.I am sorry.

Sanskaar-What are you apologizing for Shona ? Remember what mom said-It is not your fault.Yes I sometimes miss bade papa but when I miss him I talk to him.Mrs Swara Maheshwari you have nothing to apologize for. Where are the kids ???

Swara-Gayatri had swimming so Rohan went along with her.Your son is so typical bodyguard you know.Exactly like you.I still remember the Makar Sankranti incident.

Sanskaar-i do not like to remember such scary things Shona you know na...And yes I got protective about you after the whole Ragini-Masi-Kavita triangle.

Just as they were talking the skype rings and they ho could it be considering it would be very late i India right now.

Swara-Adarsh bhaiyaa itni raat ko sab theek to haina.Bade papa, badi maa,Mom,Dad ????

Adarsh-Arrey areey Swara mujhe aur Pari ko kuch kehne to do.Mujhe nai pata tha tumne itne dialogues loaded kiye hua the. 😆😆😆.Jokes apart sab theek hai do not worry.Everybody is fine.

Sanskaar-Woh bhaiyya you called so late isiliye thoda tension bad gaya tha hamara.How is Vivaan.

Pari-Vivaan is absolutely fine.I think woh appne room me Rohan se hi baat kar raha hai.Actually Swara,Sanskaar bhaiyya hmne aap dono se kuch zaroori baat karne ke liye all kiya tha actually.

Swara-Bhabhi boliye na kya baat hai.Kahi Laksh ne kal ki puja ke liye toh kuch nahi kaha na ??

Adarsh-Laksh ne tum se kuch kaha kya Shona ???Dekho tum uski baat bilkul mat sunna tum jaanti ho na impulsiveness ka king hai woh.

Sanskaar-Nahi Adarsh bhaiyya Lucky ka koi phone nai aaya hai.Just ek you know point socha humne you know.

Swara-Par iska matlab hai ki usne kuch kaha hai right.Bhaiyya kya hua hai aap please batayi mujhe.Do not hesitate.Aap hi kehte hai na mei aapki behen hi hu.

Adarsh-Shona actually Laksh ma se keh raha tha ki woh tumhe aur Shekhar uncle ko convince kare ki Ragini ko Sharmishtha aunty ki pooja mai bethne de.Hala ki maa ne mana kar diya aur sab ne yehi kaha ai ki jo tumhara faisla hoga woh sabko maanna hoga.

Pari-Aur ha Swara woh Kuch Rohan aur Gayatri ke India na aane ke baare mai bhi keh raha tha.Sujata chachi ne keh diya ki tum unki ma ho aur tum hi yeh decide karoogi ki woh India aayege ya nahi.

Sanskaar-Laksh ka dimaag thikane par to hai na.Jis ragini aur uski maasi ki harkato ki wajah se ma aaj hamre beech nai hai usi Ragini ko woh pooja mei bathne dene ki baat kar raha hai.What the hell is he thinking.??

Swara-Sanskaar relax.Use jo kehna tha woh keh chuka.Adarsh Bhaiyya if Laksh is not asleep yet can you call him I need to talk to him.

Adarsh-Ha mai use bula kar lata hu.

Sanskaar-Usme baat kya karni hai Shona.We are not allowing to sit Ragini in the puja and we are so sure not sending our kids to India.Right ??

Swara-Sanskaar ofcourse hum unhe nahi bhej rahe hai but he needs to hear it from me warna woh Bhaiyya,bhabhi aurbaaki sab ka dimaag kharab kar dega.

(Laksh and Ragini enter and parrallel enters Rohan and Gayatri into the house.)

Gayatri-Mom we are home.Kaha ho aap dono.??? Mom.

(Gayatri and Rohan enter the study where Swara and Sanskaar were just going to start talking to Laksh).

Ragini-Gayatri,Rohan kase ho aap dono.

Rohan-Hum bilkul theek hai chachi.Badi ma kaisi ho aap.Maine Vivaan bhaiyya se baat ki thi aaj.Unhe meri taraf se best of luck keh dijye ga unka result hai medical entrance ka kal.

Pari-Pakka keh dungi.

Swara-Gayatri you go and get freshened up mai aur Sanskaar abhi aate hai phir we will have lunch ok.Rohan tumhare friend ka phone aaya tha Justine if I am not mistaken.Just call him back.

(Rohan and Gayatri understand that Swara is teling them to go as there is no Justine.Their mother just made it up.)

Gayatri-Okay momzie.

(The kids exit.Ragini felt ignored as Rohan interacted more with Pari bhabhi)

Laksh-bacche bahut bade ho gaye hai Swara.Ma,papamai aur Ragini unse ek bhi baar mile nahi hai.Kya mai aapne bhateje aur bhateeji se nai mil sakta.Kya mera un par koi haq nai hai.

Swara-Gol gol baat mat karo Lash.Joh kehna hai point par aao mere paas time nai hai.

Laksh-The point Swara its been 17 years and even today tumne ya Sanskaar ne Ragini ko maf nai kiya hai.Even Shekhar papa ne use maaf nai kiya hai.You donot let her sit in the pooja.Sharmishta maa Ragini ki bhi kuch lagti thi.You donot let the kids talk to her for more than 2 mins.Like right now.Woh unki masi aur chachi dono hai.

Swara-Laksh I am saying it for the first and last time probably.Just because you fell in love with Ragini doesnot mean that I would forgive her understood.Woh maa ki pooja ke aas paas bhi nahi jayege.Mai tang aa gayi tum se behes karte karte is baare mai.And as far as the kids are concerned they have no idea that Ragini unki masi hai bhi ok.THEY ARE MY KIDS AND I WILL DECIDE WHAT TO DO AND WHAT NOT TO.You are nobody to teach me about these relations Laksh.Mai unhe aapne hisaab se bada karrogi.And i have decided ki woh log akele India kabhi nai aayege aur agar ayege to bhi sirf aur sirf baki ghar waalo ko milne ke liye.Ragini se milne ke liye nai.I donot want her any where near my kids understood.I have been extremely loud and clear during this conversation.Donot disturb Adarsh bhayyai and Pari bhabi after this.Tumne mera faisla sun liya hai and it is final.And dont you dare call the kids Laksh warna mujse boora koi nai hoga.


Adarsh Bhaiyya Pari bhabhi hum baad mei baat karege.The kids will be waiting.Goodnight. And I am sorry if I have been rude.

Pari-kaisi baat kar rahi ho Swara.Mai tumhe kal subah call karti hu theek hai.Jao warna bacche aandar aa jayege.

(Laksh was so shocked seeing Swara's response.Ragini was almost near tears and reality finally dawned on her that Swara will never trust her kids to her.All the kids of the house will always be away from her.Laksh on ther hand had never seen Swara so protective.Yes she always used to be protective about bhai but this was new area for him.)

Laksh-Bhabhi Swara theek to thi I mean itna gussa,itni protectiveness.

Pari-Laksh woh ma hai unki.Mujhe pata tha yehi hone wala hai.Ek ma aapne bacho ko lekar aisi hi hoti hai.

Ragini-Bhabhi kya woh kabhi hum par bharosa nai karege.Hum jaante hai humne bahut bure kaam kiye hai par woh humare iye bhi khud ke bacche jaise hi hai.

Adarsh-Ragini woh ma hai unki.Aur Ek baat hai jo shayad tumhe ya Lucky ya ghar ke kissi bhi member ko nai pata.

Laksh-Kya Bhai.

Adarsh-Lucky Rohan ko sab kuch pata hai.Kya hua tha 16 years pehle Ragini aur Swara ke beech.Swara aur Sanskaar ne ghar kyu chodda sab kuch.

Ragini-Kya par kase ??? Swara oonhe kabhi nai bateyege.

Pari-Ragini Vivaan ne kuch saal pehle sab sun liya tha.Bas usne sab kuch Rohan ko bata diya.Aur Rohan Gayatri ko le kar bahut hi protective hai.Mere lhyal se Gayatri ko bhi sa kuch pata hai par woh bas kuch bolti nai hai.Dono bacche bahut Samajhdar hai.

New York

The lunch was very silent.The kids figured it out that the conversation did not o as planned and Swara was in typically very bad mood.Gayatri decided to talk to her parents today.While she had freshned up Rohan had told her evreything.Now she understood why her mother did not like Ragini chachi or masi whatever.

Gayatri-Momzie,dad Can I talk to you for a moment.

Swara-Princess sab theek to hai na kya hua hai ??

Rohan-Mom aap betho na sab bata teh hai.Pehle aap dono hume yeh batayi that do you trust us ??

Sanskaar-Ye kaisa sawaal hai.Of course we trust you guys.

Gayatri-Do you trust us that we can deal with each kind of situation ?? Do you trust us that in case of delicate situations we wil act maturely.???

Swara-Gayatri baby you are scaring us.Kya baat hai ? Koi tension.

Sanskaar-Princess any boy problems.Agar kuch aisa hai toh bata do.

Gayatri-Dad what boy problem.We are talking about family problem.Ye stupid boy problems kaha se beech mai aaye.

Swara-What family problem ??

Gayatri-Momzie seriously do you think I am 4 ?? I can connect the dots with everything.And dadi always says I am like dad so...Why cant you guys share these things with us ? we share our problems with you.

Sanskaar-Because princess you both are just kids.It is your time to enjoy the life,study,be with your friends,be with us.Thats it.

Swara-(Hugs both the children) You will have plenty of time in your life to deal with all this.Trust me right now your age is to have fun.
Rohan-But Mom,dad we cannot have fun when you are upset.

Swara-Who said we are upset ???We are fine.These things happen.

Sanskaar-Kids tum dono ko sab kuch pata hai woh aapni dadi ko mat batana warna phir se MM mei mahabharat ho jayege.

Swara-I just hope ke Mom ko aaj raat ki baat ke baare mei pata na chale warna Ragini aur Laksh ki to kher nai.
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Precap-Sujata comes to know about Laksh conversation with SwaSan.Sujata storm coming up.And also some SwaSan romance. 😳





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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Nice updates
Btw I feel ragini's punishment should end now at least

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