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I m wondering wht will hpn to sanskar when the truth will cm out that he is not mad hw will he manage to keep himself out of the horrible prison n tortures ragini laksh swara r predictable swara being sweet n innocent laksh being bratty idiot n ragini being evil BT Sanskar is an unpredictable character ap is the other unpredictable chcrctr dp I can guess that when sanskars truth will cm out he will want to send him to jail BT wht will ap sujata n ram do that's my question I won't be able to bear sanskar in jail once again n there is evil ragini who is going to ruin swaras life n who can very well backstab sanskar if he refuses to harm swara which I can guess he will he hv sfrd too much without any fault of his n that's what driven him to this revenge BT no matter he much mad he he trnd in this revenge mission he remained good at heart HP he prvs innocent before cmng out the truth of him nt being mad

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Chapter 5:

Wonderful line from Milton

For me there is something very comforting in seeing Swara with Sanskaar, even though he is acting all insane atm, she is betrothed to someone else, they arent together...but just these two together & my day is made!

Mermaid Princess😆😆😆

I am happy to see Sujata hasnt tuned out her subconscious completely & still manages to discern something which isn't very obvious.

Ah so the tales of the brave Prince have preceded him & Swara has been impressed by whatever she has learned about him😳

Laksh seems...IDK...what is the word?😆He didn't like Ragini when he had her, now he seems to enjoy her company, he wanted to be with Swara with she wasn't his, now he doesn't go out of his way to seek her outAgain, what does Ragini see in him? Surely a woman that intelligent would want someone with more brains as her partner?😆Or maybe she seems intelligent only by comparison?😆Or maybe she needs a fool like Laksh who will dance to her tunes?🥱

Hey hon xoxo

Thank you for reading and commenting so quick and also for the help yet again yesterday:).

I have a particular fondness for Milton- studied Paradise Lost for my advanced level Literature and was literally the only one in an already very small class to have taken to it 😆!

You so feel like I do about our babies- I find comfort in them together as whether acting or not, and as friends or whatever they so draw towards each other and like you picked up, just something about them spending time appeals. I wanted to show that Swara built up a closeness with Sanskaar and his later falling for her would be cognisant of her care here too. Glad Mermaid Princess made you smile- I thought Swara should have a nickname too:).

Yes I wanted Sujata to be rather foolish but no so much so that she doesn't ever see anything or at least have her display some instincts.
Yes I was just thinking that in that time and given the closeness of the politics between the kingdoms and given shekhar would have likely to have been part of some of the battles etc Sanskaar would have been in too, his tales must have been exciting to young princesses no? And all the more fun for when she finds out he's not mad 😉.
I think it's tough to find adequate words for Lakshya ji. The best I can do is inconsistent. We have said often that a man more different from him name is difficult to find and he does want to spend time with Swara but he's no Sanskaar to work over hard for that, he demands and expects it to happen. That's the stage he is at in his life. As for ragini, I think she has intelligence but of a limited sly kind only- she lacks the imagination or wider purpose to be truly what she could have been. She isn't that dissimilar to lakshya in that way- she wants something and that's it, she has built a picture in her mind and he fits it, so she will never accept otherwise.
Mmmwah and chat to you soon, lots of love xxx

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Nice update. In this update it was clear that ragini is trying to friendly with Laksh. She is trying to make distance between Laksh and swara.sanskar is helping ragini. Swara is spending time with sanskar and she enjoys his company for a unknown reason. Waiting for your next update.

Thanks Sakkiyah
Yes ragini is capitalising on MUs she creates and more of that to come in the next chapter. Swara likes spending time with Sanskaar despite having an odd feeling about him and he too is rather enchanted day by day. I'll hopefully update 6 on Friday and possibly one more other chapter in the weekend too:) x

Shru 🤗

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

Awesome..amazing...woow...do continue soon..can't wait for next...I'm waiting which sides janaki and shomi takes now...

Such kind words-thanks so much for liking it so much! You might be in for a surprise as to what will happen soon and how that may leave everyone with little choice in a way as to which side to take:)! I'll try and update the next couple of chapters at the weekend, thanks for your support!

Originally posted by: Vaibhi.

OMG so nice update😳

the kheer scene was too good😳

Sanskar called Swara "mermaid princess" omg

I really love his character , so interesting😳

Waiting for next update

Thanks for the PM Shru🤗

Hey Pubi! So glad you like the sweet offering in the form of kheer:). And yes haha! I wanted Swara to have a nice nickname too from our Knight and as he was so moved by her splash in the fountain, I thought why not! I'll update soon, you know how obsessed I am!:) Thank you for this!

Love, S x

Hi Shru beautiful update sorry for late reply i completed this part now only n it was amazing n luking forward to nxt updates

Loved it totally!!First SwaSan sweet scene!!Beautifully written as always.Waiting for the next part!

Shruti...
Chapter 5..
Ya the true side of sanskar is visible...
And ragini is playing a smart game..
Poor swara ..they are playing with her life
but sanskar ...that girl is his future queen..he has feelings for her
..ragini is trying to be swara to get laksh
well lets see..wats happen next...
Update soon dear
Love,
Simi 😊