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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

#271

Chapter 5:

Wonderful line from Milton

For me there is something very comforting in seeing Swara with Sanskaar, even though he is acting all insane atm, she is betrothed to someone else, they arent together...but just these two together & my day is made!

Mermaid Princess😆 😆 😆

I am happy to see Sujata hasnt tuned out her subconscious completely & still manages to discern something which isn't very obvious.

Ah so the tales of the brave Prince have preceded him & Swara has been impressed by whatever she has learned about him😳

Laksh seems...IDK...what is the word? 😆 He didn't like Ragini when he had her, now he seems to enjoy her company, he wanted to be with Swara with she wasn't his, now he doesn't go out of his way to seek her out Again, what does Ragini see in him? Surely a woman that intelligent would want someone with more brains as her partner?😆 Or maybe she seems intelligent only by comparison?😆 Or maybe she needs a fool like Laksh who will dance to her tunes?🥱

Edited by The.Lannister - 9 years ago

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Hey guys! Just posted part 5 and hope it's not too bad!
Sapna- please take your time, no rush andtotally get it- am manic myself!

Tas- such alovelyreply from you but as Ihave to wake at silly o clocktomorrow and amhalf dead, I will reply tomorrow so can do justice to theresponse- much love xoxo.

Take ur time sweetie!! I took mine in replying and now I have read chapter 5 with sleepy eyes so will reply to tht after a while too!! Another mind blowing chapter tho!!

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Vianna

@BookWormV

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Posted: 9 years ago

#273

Res :)

Unres:

Shruti 😊

The story is progressing amazingly. So Ragini has started her games and Sanskaar's truth is out. *sigh* I really loved the way you have shown this part of the story. The show was able to show how the sisters had changed but the way you have written it one was able to visualise so much more. Really liked the whole part how Ragini came to know Sanskaar's truth and how despite that he was able to manipulate her. The best part of this whole update was the end paragraph. Fantastic end to the update. Sanskaar realising he doesn't exactly mind spending time with Swara and that last sentence leaves me wanting for more. Sheer brilliance.!

Looking forward to more. Update soon. :)

-V

Edited by bwvianna - 9 years ago

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#274

Nice update. In this update it was clear that ragini is trying to friendly with Laksh. She is trying to make distance between Laksh and swara.sanskar is helping ragini. Swara is spending time with sanskar and she enjoys his company for a unknown reason. Waiting for your next update.

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#275

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UnRes - Chapter 5:

Loved the gentle twists - Swara and Sanskaar enjoying each other's company, whilst Ragini actually managing to spend more time with Lakshya as a 'friend' than she did as a 'fiancee' while Lakshya - how is he oblivious to everyone and everything around him?

Mermaid Princess - that is what really stuck with me. There is a quotation by Anais Nin "I must be a mermaid. I have no fear of depths and a great fear of shallow living." So labelling Swara as a mermaid princess - so appropriate.

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago