Dil Rota Hai-RagLak SS(chap up 26/11)

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Salima BORDIER

@Berlin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Update soon and please PM!

Very nice story, and very well writing 😉

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Berlin
Update soon and please PM!
Very nice story, and very well writing😉

can you update your story please 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Update the next & please do the pm

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Salima BORDIER

@Berlin

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: rbb1
can you update your story please 😃

I have updating my Stories now your turn cannot wait to read this one :) pls pls pls make it longer! I know it take time but pls do it

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valu

@valu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

your work is truly amazing!!!

keep up the good work!!👏👏

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

I am also dying to write it guys but kya karun m not getting time...Maths has haunted me badly...
As soon as I get time I'll post it pakka..n my other works too ..Sab iss dil ki hi toh mushkil hai, Dangerous Ishq, Hey listen m sorry, chor police, brothers...
Just give me some time...I know it has been months n m messed up with all my stories so pardon me for that..

Love and pardon
Neha

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

~~Teaser ~~

He was walking on the rainy roads, putting his hands in his pockets..

( Jaaniye Heeriye
Jaaniye Heeriye)

He is walking with confused expressions..the camera rolls around him..

(Mere Mann Ye Bata De Tu
Kis Or Chala Hai Tu)

He stops. Then he looks at the sky..a rain droplet drops just below his eyes..he closes his eyes..

(Kya Paya Nahi Tune
Kya Dhundh Raha Hai Tu)

He sighs...he moves his fingers along his hair and sits down on the wet road..

(Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata)

He shouts looking at the sky with his full strength..
Then he looks down..

(Mitwa... Kahe Dhadkan Tujhse Kya
Mitwa... Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa )

He stands on his feet..and wipes his tears ..and all of sudden his tears turn into his smile. .a very very wide smile..

(Jo Hai Ankahee, Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya hai bata)

He shouts looking at the sky..
"YES!!!! YES!!!
I.. I LOVE HER!!! WOOHOO!!!! I LOVE HER..SHE IS MINE ..I LOVE YOU RAGINI!!! WOHOO! "

(Mitwa ...Kahe dhadkane tujhse kya..
Mitwa...Ye khudse toh na tu chhupa)

Here a wave of cool breeze touches her face while she was making chapatis on the angithi in the open..

(Jaaniye Heeriye
Jaaniye Heeriye)

What happened all of a sudden that he is admitting his love?
Is it his another plan or true feelings?
And if it is real what will be his reaction on her suspected death?