SwaSan OS ||Life Without Her Is Nothing|| - Page 3

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Thank u kanwal...ahh ragini mjhe hamesha se positive h ache lagti hai na so😉

M gladu. Liked it... well write more depends on the maximum response😳

ha per ab positive digest nai hoti😉
hmm vaise i did post link of this in cc for my friends to read it..
they said they will..hope u will get good response..

Hi Aroo
I always knew you from Jr forum and read your stories but didn't you know you watch Sr too..
Anuways I loved it 😳 I was thinking of DDLJ whle reading this for some reason

hey aroo this was Amazing
just loved it
beautiful os

Aroo.u know..na I can't miss any story of u..so..wil read nf unres soon..but idk..d story anyways wil read it soon..aroo..

Nice os
Loved it
thanks for the pm

Great OS

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

Well written OS..
thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: _Annie_

Congratulations on your very first SwaSan work, Pumpkinn 🤗

I don't watch SR regularly but on and off just for SwaSan. Trusting your writing skills, I gave this OS a try and I'm glad I wasn't disappointed😉. Soo very well-written. Dialogues were spot on! Loved each and every scene, the last one stands out though😳

'Swara...stop blaming yourself...you never came in between me and kavita and you know that...dont you?...swara we all knew that kavita was no more...even though I was mourning for her death and my only reason to live was my revenge but swara when you became a part of my life, I started to live my life again..to enjoy it...I fell in love again swara...I fell In love with you...I imagined my whole life with you...you became my reason to live...I thought to be with you for all my life..if not as life partner then your friend but still I wanted to be with you..I needed you and I still need you...just don't test my love...just don't leave me' he had tears in her eyes as he held her tightly and she Melted in his arms...

I simply adored this dialogue...it clearly depicts the deep love he has for her. Loved how he cross-questioned her and made her see his pov :)

'But what about kavita...she was your first love sanskar' 'swara tell me something...if laksh will leave ragini then will you return back to him considering that he was your first love...will you?' 'NO' he asked and she replied straight away without even thinking once making him smile 'how can you think I will do that...I love you and no one can take your place now sanskar' 'then how can you ask me to do the same swara...I also love you and now I can't even think about kavita in the same way...my love is just for you now...samjhe tum?'

And this made me gush soo harddd...Ahhh!!🤪