SwaSan TS: Karna Parva---Day 17-- COMPLETED - Page 15

The ending made me so very very happy! In fact everything that happened made me so very happy! 🤗

Part 1 -

The starting! Oh my Gosh ! So dreamy and steamy!☺️ The nature, the description of the sun and finally our favorite couple !*sigh*What I would give to be in Swara's place! 😆 😆 I am a complete besharam I know 😳😛 While I am being a complete besharam can I just go ahead and say how much I loved the fact that you actually went ahead and gave them that extra time. Sanskaar would forever be grateful to you Viji!😆 And if Swara from here is anything at all like me she would be thanking you for it too!😛😃 I of course loved reading that bit!😆

Have I mentioned how gifted you indeed are at making even the intimate scenes look so very beautiful? Seriously, no one would think anything other than two souls uniting when they read it -apart from the really naughty ones like me, who would use their own imaginations and go into the details of the act. Jokes apart, very very beautifully done Viji! You have an amaaazing amaazzing gift. Now, when can I have a book of yours added to my collection? 😃

Me, you and if I'm not wrong Medhu and Shru too have shared a special place and love for the very first SwaSan sindhoor scene. In my opinion, I loved it more than the actual one during their marriage , of course that one has a special place in my heart too however, the first one remains my favorite till now. I also loved that dream sindhoor sequence too, however a dream isn't really the same is it? ;) So to have you take that (I hope I am not wrong about your inspiration for that scene) and turn it into reality while also comparing the three and describing how this time it was completely different from the other two ,making it all the more special. They were now man and wife in every way possible! Added benefit was of course that you made me remember all those times! *sigh*

Part 2 -

Ah hah! I so was right - my theory that it had to be DP and could never be RP ! Yayy!! *does a happ dance* Sanskaar's dad did not let him down! My baby was so glad and happy and I was so damn happy that he was happy! 😃😃

I loved how SwaSan are now completely and openly relying on each other for comfort! Such a happy wala feeling that gave me. I would however want to tell you that through this entire part , SwaSan was an afterthought of sorts, RP and his son were the protagonists as you clearly meant for them to be. The way Sanskaar lashed out at his dad, believing that he had broken his trust - clearly angry that he had taken away his hero, his pride the very last person who he would have imagined to break his trust. It clearly showed how much Sanskaar depends on his dad, even though he knows he would forever be in his bade papa's shadows and never venture out. He has accepted that fact and in fact come to admire that trait of his! It was your typical Sanskaar, nothing escapes his notice - ever!

I equally enjoyed Ram's reaction to it and your very detailed description as to how much he valued his son's opinion of him. He is ready to accept disappointment and even ready to accept second place as his son's hero but what he clearly cannot accept for his son to misunderstand him and in a manner as despicable as that! RP was not many things but a good brother, son, husband and dad( though he did feel he hadn't been as active and fair on fulfilling this role as the others but he nevertheless had always been loyal and loved his son more than he would ever openly acknowledge) were definitely something that he was and would always be. (At least the one here is since we hardly ever get him to speak his mind on the show, or for that matter speak at all. Why is that actor being paid again? 😛)

That story on DP and his affair with Kaveri , so very believable. Kudos for coming up with that back story, DP - his dad- his mentor - daughter and finally our very own Ram coming to the rescue. The best part to the entire story was DP and RP's equation , clearly very father - son . What better than the fact that Lakshman was going against Ram on this one could have been used to make DP see how he had clearly lost his way and bring him back! Now if only another bhai in the household had inherited those genes! But the one we see now on the show is definitely on his way huh? ( becoming Lakshman from Lucky 😛) Though I still am wary on his sudden change of heart towards SwaSan.

Ragini , I noticed has completely turned herself into a vamp! There is clearly no comeback for her after everything she has done. So much of hatred and vile in her heart. Can you really make it all go away? Well with the promo that has now come out, I can't honestly believe she can turn positive after that. Well if we do get our SwaSan remarriage, I really won't mind suffering yet another illogical and absolutely crappy twist in the story - as long as they are married! Because we all know what that means in serial world - you cannot be the main leads and married and not get together at the end , no matter how far away the end is. 😆

Coming back to the story, I was so happy to once again see RP choosing a "dad's role" over that of a "brother" , clearly standing up for his son and once again questioning his brother at his "so - called" love for his "like son"! That man seriously infuriates me now! The very name makes me want to break something over that bald head of his! Gahhh! I despise that man! And here is our very own Sanskaar who is ready to sacrifice all his hard work for a guy who doesn't deserve to be called papa - bade ya chote , period! No matter how ridiculous I think he is being I can't help but be proud of my Sanskaar.

Btw - I so knew. It had to be AP who strode into the room!

Part 3 -

Will you believe if I tell you that I had a feeling that AP knew about the affair before I read this one?

Considering how you have portrayed her character before , albeit as a more cunning and selfish than the one here, I knew you would keep still portray her as the head mistress of the house and Grand matriarch! Which made me think that a secret as big as this had to have come out in front of her one way or another and so it did. 😃

Chapter 1-

Clearly explained the differences and the importance of having a home built out of love over the one that held nothing but despair and dread. That small bit where you mention how a father's favorite is always the strongest of his children while the mother' s is always the opposite. So true and in AP's case very apt! Her acceptance of this fact and her regret over not seeing what Ragini was underneath that meek appearance. ( I cannot however accept or forgive the soap AP for being so completely blind, especially after everything that had happened before. How can we forget that famous confrontation AP , Sujata against Swara. This AP will forever be the dumb wife and completely biased and serial wala MIL - ugh! hated that woman!) However, I will for now and for your AP , who has always been more tactful and intelligent than the one on the show, assume that the showdown never happened and she never doubted Swara and questioned her the way she did. Which makes it easier for me to see why she could have never seen this coming! The last part where you one again describe how what she heard not only shocked but also humbled her - gave it away! She so knew it! 😃

Chapter 2

Ragini as we have clearly mentioned time and again , especially after the whole attempting to kill Swara incident - needs a psychiatrist! Seriously, this girl might not be completely mental but her head clearly is not right. She needs therapy. All that misplaced anger and hatred - can drive a person mad if left unchecked which is clearly what is happening to her. Daadi dearest please apne laado ko bacha lo!🤔

Sanskaar! - To give it all up for a person, a family that had always been anything but fair to him. Only this man, only my Sanskaar could do it! So so proud!❤️

I know the scene where AP gets into the study was supposed to be this huge and very important bit but I couldn't help but 🤣 🤣at daadi being scared while getting dragged along by AP into the study. I mean amidst all the revelations and declarations and the papers and sign, how did AP manage to get a hold of her and drag her into the study in the nick of time? I'm guessing she was already out, with her ears pressed on to doors and all AP had to do was pull her inside. That lady can never be good.. like ever, this I think all of us have inferred from the stupid track.

Her entry and the consequent tearing of the papers and the expected flung onto Ragini's face gave us as much sukoon as I would like to believe AP got by doing it. The bit where she explains to a dumbstruck Ragini how she had always known the truth "cherry on the cake" moment. I guess I have yet to learn and experience more about love and relationships but that quote about love, I cannot seem to agree with AP on that one - The heart of woman who loves forgives many blows. Blows I can understand, not infidelity. Well maybe it's because she is a woman from another time. I did however relate to her when she warned Daadi to pack her things and leave before she had to resort to another far worse a method to make it happen. That's the AP we know . I also loved everything that followed after. DP finally being silenced by AP herself reminding him he should not kid himself into believing he was "Yudhishtir" of Mahabharat. You cannot pick and choose which vows to honor and which ones to break. Yayy! Go AP! Give him some and then more!

I absolutely loooved that reference to Gandhari and Kunti Viji . How do you even come up with these? Seriously Brilliant! 👏I will not demand an ultimate sacrifice from one of my sons , in order to protect others! Made my admiration for her go up a notch higher! Finally! (Though I understood why Kunti did what she did , it still never makes it okay or less tragic - the fact that a mother willingly and on her own had almost sentenced him death. I have always felt that Karna deserved so much more, a true brother, son , friend and hero - there are of course few incidents where his character is questionable , for example his role during Draupadi's vastrapaharan and him knowingly being a part of the deceit that Kauravs had planned for Padavs . Me and my dad always end up debating him almost all the time he comes up during a discussion on the epic tale! I can however see that you have clearly chosen my two favorite people from it to describe my Sanskaar - Parth and Karn - favorites among the main lot, I have my other favorite among the young lot of course, can you guess who it is though? 😛)

Her thanking RP while also asking him not to downplay what he has done for her and her family and also pledges to not repeat the unfairness with which he had been treated with Sanskaar as well👏 This AP I wouldn't mind having around on the soap as well. If only! *sigh*

She also manages to send away our SwaSan from the madness on a much deserving break! Bless her!🤗

Epilogue -

Valentines day and our SwaSan in Hawaii! ?!!!😲 Well why not ?😉😆

Sanskaar actually knows the difference among the different blues?!!! How did that happen?! My guy friends can hardly make out the difference between dark and light blue, idiots the lot of them. Irritate me to no ends sometimes!🤔

Aww only our Swara can think of something as innocent as going to visit Disneyland while on honeymoon with my Sanskaar. 😆

Of course my Sanskaar had other places in his mind, that he'd rather explore.😛😉😆 And as we can see he gets his way. Smart he my Sanskaar - knows how to convince his stubborn yet adorable wifey.😃

I'm telling you only few can write such things and yet make it sound so darn soulful (I don't even know if that makes sense) and you are definitely one of them!

The last line - of course it has to be "epic" - SwaSan and you writing them - no way it cannot be! 😆

At the risk of sounding like a broken record ,I would still like to tell how truly wonderful it was to have read that Viji. 🤗So so happy! 🤗

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hey Viji...

It was the perfect ending to the perfect story. As you know, my favorite one. Since you started with Gandari and ended up not turning her in to a Kunti asking Karna for the ultimate sacrifice I am greatful, for that wonderful touch there.

You know I have always envisioned Annapurna with a queenly aura to her, as I was telling Shru earlier on her new SS, that is the ground to which this woman truly belongs. And since you've already read my take on her in the Frost Knight, you can guess how much I adore the Gandari you made her reflect.

So my guess was right...Ha I knew it! It was Annapurna who walked in, that too armed with the truth Ragini was planning to use against them! Never for a minute did I wonder she could have known it all along.

But the way you narrated the incidents from Ambika's decision to go with the bitter truth instead of the lie that would give a momentarily flicker of joy, to Annapurna's decision that she oughtn't reveal her knowledge to Durga Prasad as she could not see him bowing to anyone, not even herself...that was too realistic, too wonderful. She was truly the perfect match for the wise old king right?

Then Ragini...the slithery serpent! I'm sure if she tried on the sorting hat it would place her in Slytherin without beating an eyelid! I'm so glad at her way her card castle stumbled in the face of the first wind. And then even before that I was smirking at the way she was frightened by Sanskar...too good!

Then their refusal to submission had dulled her victory...wow! I mean that was so marvelous!

I'm glad Annapurna decided to fight for Karna instead of pushing him towards more sacrifice. It showed how worthy she is of the title she holds within that family. The way she asked Durga Prasad to break this one vow and then the way she stood up against Dadi and Ragini those interactions were pure gold my dear!

I was so touched by the way, in the past she recollected, she came shattered back home and embraced her children and found her peace in them...That build up a beautiful imagery in my mind and it was utterly pure and serene I almost had tears in my eyes!

Coming back to present I'm glad she asked Sanskar to leave and acknowledged everything Ram had done for her family...too good this woman is.

Finally the Shanti Parva, the eternal peace finally attained. So Swara wanted to go to Disneyland? Well ask her after a day or two, she might change her mind meanwhile! The delicate peace was so sweet after the initial bitterness of the continuous struggles right? it was wonderful journey and reached an equally serene destination.

I'm glad you wrote this Viji, but sad it ended so soon. Looking forward to your next already.

loads of love,

Saku

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Viji it was just mind blowing

I had a kind of feeling that Annapurna will be aware of the truth

It was just so much magical

I love your grasp on the different characters of Mahabharata and the way you spin them and compare them to Maheshwari clan

I know Lakshya is the pampered child but seeing the reason from the point of DP and AP it is justified as they think he is the one who mended their relationship back

Ram is always sidelined but when you showed Annapurna giving him credit for her mended bond with Durga Prasad it was awesome

Annapurna's transformation from Gandhari to Kunti was just awesome

Ragini is a 🤬..let it be don't want to talk and discuss and spoil my mood

I mean I loved the name Ragini so much I was planning to name my brother's unborn child if girl as Ragini 🤢but now I just hate the name so much that I want my cousin brother to have a boy so I can name him Sanskar😳... Cause Swara I will name my daughter...🤣

Ok lots of bakwas back to the update

Swara giving Dadi and Ragini the ultimate dhamki was just awesome

Epilogue was so cute

Swasan on a honeymoon to Bali and Swara wants to go to Disneyland... Gosh she is such a kid

Loved the whole update

You are a fantastic writer

Write more such stories

I am a big fan of your writing skills...Gosh why I can't write like you and describe each character's emotion nicely...

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: TRPS

Hey Viji! 🤗

thank you for dedication again among others. it feels so good and honoured! 😛
well, as soon as I read the title Gandhari's sight and kunti's plight and then word Annapoornaa, I got it , Annapoornaa knew the truth already. but couldn't get who was playing kunti then!
I remember in my Hindi class, ma'am was saying instead of facing the truth, Gaandhaari chose to become blind! utterly wrong move! so , here it was Annapoornaa's case.
here, she like true matriarch, a queen, strong yet soft, so graceful dedicated herself for protecting her family. that home and hapoiness reference is quite meaningful.
you penned down so Annapoornaa's feelings with so poignancy , it made my heart heavy while reading. never felt this much loathe towards Durga Prasad! and that making her baby sleep! so heart wrenching!
but in that thought process, she remembered Sanskaar too. she loves him so much but again she always chose to be generous towards her sons.
the confrontation!
guess, it would be much more painful to her when she would have come to know, her husband had not come on his own but he was forced to come back. and
she cleared the matter so gracefully and efficiently. nice move it was. ( Viji! you won't forget CD Naa!)
it was so nice to see her taking stand for Sanskaar.
I agree with this without a doubt, that the one who is most efficient and nice human being, always endures more pain and challenges, faces more difficulties!!
Thank goodness! finally Annapoornaa chose not to be Kunti(now got it),finally he got the justice.
Ram prasad and Sanskaar's conversation was so good!(like you mentioned Surya gave warning to Karna) especially the lines said by Sanskaar. and Sujaataa as usual in her own world. I think she would have gotten a pleasant surprise in case of banishing Raagini when she would have come to know. :P
and Shaanti parva! :))
you know how much bitterness I have felt before, all the thoughts vanished as soon as I read happy Swasan. :D felt so light hearted. :)) Seriously, it feel so content to see Swasan's happy and content. :))
PS- Nice destination haan!! and Seems , blue is your favourite color!
PPS- Brilliantly written Viji! Hoping to read your next work soon. 😊

Originally posted by: foresight

bravo!!! i loved at the way you handle annapurna. she complete shone through in this. though she had turned herself blind to her husband's philandering ways at the cost of her self respect, she rose again with so much dignity and power it was marvellous to watch..you have shown it beautifully how she really found out about it. this make so much sense than living in delusion for so long and then have it shattered after all these years. when ti comes to it, she is much more powerful that DP, despite her being simpleton like sometimes. and you have shown that.

i am so glad that you have shown AP reliving sanskar of his burden to bear more and endure more than anyone else. guess we synched really well on that karna, arjun theory...i loved how you put it in words.

great ending to a wonderful story ...each section has its own place.