The simmering pain: Raglak STORY Note 11/3/16 - Page 25

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Finally Ana... Read it babes... So samething happening here... Too.. Laksh acting good and lubing husband with Ragini.. What man... Hot pants and corp top.. Nice combination to seduce a man... Okay now Waiting for next part...
Update it in your speed... Jet speed...
Love yaa...

thank babes...yeah...this,show lacks romance..now am filling the much needed requirement...haha...swasan are too cute...ESP I love sanky...but ragya can be too intense..coz there story is like that...jet speed well...wanna finish it before I get disinterested...haha...

Originally posted by: sudhi03

You are killing it It's too hot😳

finally ragini told some home truths to lakshya.

Superb update waiting for the next.

thank for liking it...hot..yes I wanted it to be hot...hmm..yupp ragini is not done docile female anymore...high time laksh realise some home truths...

Originally posted by: StarshineHues

Finally some home truths for Lucky ji.

Really awesome update Ana...please update soon !! Can't wait to see what happens next.

yupp finally he needs to get a reality check as well...and yeah u read only half chapter...read again now..it's completed...and say what u feel about laksh now...what he said to ragini...

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Laksh shirtless... Ragini hot pant and corp top..

Pillow walls are thrown out... What next...

Simply hot... I'm sweating...

Waiting for next...

Love yaa...

well thank u liking it..I was wandering if it was actually coming out hot or not..coz I wanted it to be...coz laksh is mostly in lust phase now..no love...he just wants to have fling before he kicks her out...while ragini is changing as,well...so again...both on opp sides...

Originally posted by: rbb1

One more thing Laksh is such a tease he touched her lips and left her wow and throwing the pillows away and telling her he liked he me sleeping next to him that was good, telling to act like a woman was good poor Ragini wonder what she is thinking

haha...he isn't a tease..he knows he needs to give her time and make her comfy...lol it's more his,selfishness...yupp he's getting there where ragini was once unknowingly...her indifference is affecting him...he's so used to her attention that he's getting angry when being ignored...

Originally posted by: sandiab

This was a lovely chapter. I am loving the control rags is showing bt the same time her reaction to him is so womanly and strong. And swara still being an issue for her. Such a hot chapter. I cnt wait to read the next chapter

yupp it's natural...how can u remain unaffected by the person whom u love obsessively...and they a man and woman..it's natural to have physical feelings...ESP from women who loves him to moon and back...but she is being strong to control it...till when we have to wait and see...of course swara will be issue..coz she was laksh first love...and she knows,he doesn't love her and hates,her..she will be insecure ..

Originally posted by: rbb1

omg you are evil you stopped after all that how could you lol poor them both were feeling and bothered and you left them like that, God how did Laksh control himself he was willpower I have to say and Ragini after everything she still wants to leave i guess she wants to do what's best for them both, Ana you are a master at writing you style and the description is perfect, keep writing and cannot wait to read what happens next I'm sure it will be fab please post something soon X

lol evil right...I know...rags toh still can control coz,women are too strong...but am loving torturing laksh too a bit...haha...evil I know...of course he has to be a little gentleman..so that she becomes comfy with his,physical nearness...lol he's being too selfish..he's,a Prat...he wants everything but not with ragini scared...

Originally posted by: rbb1

omg you are evil you stopped after all that how could you lol poor them both were feeling and bothered and you left them like that, God how did Laksh control himself he was willpower I have to say and Ragini after everything she still wants to leave i guess she wants to do what's best for them both, Ana you are a master at writing you style and the description is perfect, keep writing and cannot wait to read what happens next I'm sure it will be fab please post something soon X

thank yaar...nope am nothing g that great...I just write what i feel and imagine..using a most simple language..u r exaggerating...I am too low from other brilliant writers on this forum...can't even match them..

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

thank yaar...nope am nothing g that great...I just write what i feel and imagine..using a most simple language..u r exaggerating...I am too low from other brilliant writers on this forum...can't even match them..

Ana don't put yourself down Hun you are brilliant writer believe me your scenes us the readers can visualise it, every scene you write we can imagine Tejaswi and Namish in those scenes trust me, the way you keep your readers wanting to read more of your story is brilliant, the mystery to your writing is awesome it makes us wonder what will happen next, do you DARE put yourself down okay

Looks like lucky is obsessed with ragini too. He is craving for ragini's attention good that ragini is firm on her decision. He is attracted to her but certainly doesn't love her. He will feel more restless once ragini distances herself more. Then he will feel how it is to be ignored. But i'm happy that finally lakshya started noticing her.