The simmering pain: Raglak STORY Note 11/3/16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
Guys finally updated fully...please do read again and comment...my God..am loving the response to this chapter...it was long but very imp...there relation takes a huge leap..and they don't even know yet...

omg you are evil you stopped after all that how could you lol poor them both were feeling and bothered and you left them like that, God how did Laksh control himself he was willpower I have to say and Ragini after everything she still wants to leave i guess she wants to do what's best for them both, Ana you are a master at writing you style and the description is perfect, keep writing and cannot wait to read what happens next I'm sure it will be fab please post something soon X

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Posted: 9 years ago

#232

One more thing Laksh is such a tease he touched her lips and left her wow and throwing the pillows away and telling her he liked he me sleeping next to him that was good, telling to act like a woman was good poor Ragini wonder what she is thinking

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sandiab

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Posted: 9 years ago

#233

This was a lovely chapter. I am loving the control rags is showing bt the same time her reaction to him is so womanly and strong. And swara still being an issue for her. Such a hot chapter. I cnt wait to read the next chapter

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: sandiab
This was a lovely chapter. I am loving the control rags is showing bt the same time her reaction to him is so womanly and strong. And swara still being an issue for her. Such a hot chapter. I cnt wait to read the next chapter

same here can't wait read what happens next , so when are you going to write anything

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: rbb1
Omg you crazy woman that was hot to say the least, Laksh is being smart which is nice he made he change into the clothes well done to him, so he likes what he sees like she like what she saw, it's nice to know he is admiring his wife and not just another woman, he is liking how she looks that's nice, Ragini thinking that they cannot take their relationship to the next level and the reasons are good she is thinking about him and how he will fall in his own eyes wow even in the situation she is, her thinking him and the outcome that's good, AMAZING update

I cannot wait to read what happens next in site it will be FAB

yupp it's conflict of emotions...ragini is,already guilt ridden...and laksh is only physically attracted to her...as of now...he,doesn't love her...he s just taking it as a fling before he divorces her and throws,her out. Well ragini is changing back...

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb update.. 👏

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor
Ana it is really hot burning hot as you said😳

where is ur hot comment thennn..I need a long one darling...but I really don't know how hot it is coming out...😆

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
yupp it's conflict of emotions...ragini is,already guilt ridden...and laksh is only physically attracted to her...as of now...he,doesn't love her...he s just taking it as a fling before he divorces her and throws,her out. Well ragini is changing back...

yeah and you are writing both their emotions/attraction really well. It is really beautifully written , I like how they are balance each other out well done Ana

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: ShaktiArshaKR
Finally lakshya saw Ragini n as expected he is awestruck...Teja has a perfect figure with that height n right amount of flesh every where n her face is so Devine..she will be the perfect choice for Devine n princess roles like droupadi,jodha etc..
It was fresh n funny how lakshya convinced her to wear the dress...I want the story to be more in lakshyas pov from now that he has started noticing Ragini like how a man sees a lady..I am loving the pace of the story..plzz give us such naughty cute hilarious moments as of now..falling in love has to be a slow gradual process in ragyas case...
I am enjoying ur story a lot now...earlier the chapters were full of emotions n feelings n its becoming a little more light hearted..u are a pro at both..
-Jyothirgamaya(Sneha)

believe me...I was just visualizing teja and namish...while writing this...she really is beautiful and namish is a charmer...totally agree I wish to see some Cinderella,story where she plays the Cinderella ...

Coming to story...it will be swinging between both pov...coz my story develops on pov... yupp as I say once a man starts viewing a woman...fake or not...he starts noticing many other things instinctively...yeah I know the story was too intense...so I wanted some really moments where they grow through there povs. And I believe u r enjoying more coz u know there povs...so u can easily connect with changes,and growth...but my experience of life says...it doesn't take more than few min for a man to bring a change in his pov when he starts even accidently viewing a woman more than a stranger...these r men...natural change...and once there outlook turns physical..u can't stop there lust from growing...ESP when u have a,right and easy access to it...

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: jyothirgamaya
In the hotness of update I just forgot some imp points..ur intelligent Ragini has almost figured out Luckys plan..kash Ragini had half this IQ in the show..n I am happy that for the first time she is concerned about lakshs emotions n feelings...
Waiting for the next part

I couldn't digest this fact in show..it's so unrelatable...first ragini is,shown as so perceptive and suddenly u make her a fool, a stupid...so I couldn't show my ragini this...she's no more the innocent and weak girl...yupp it also shows the depth of her love which is regardless her obsession...she's guilt ridden and don't want that for laksh...yupp ragini has figured out he's up to something...but she doesn't know his plan yet...

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