The simmering pain: Raglak STORY Note 11/3/16

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alisha17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Awesome updates

Loved it 😊

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#212

Thank you for the update Ana but please make your updates a bit longer, wow so he is going beyond his script he had in his head, so him being close to Ragini is different too all the other girls he was close too thats something, so Ragini wants to get away and he is getting close

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#213

Guys updated part 23 fully...

Edited by dreamyjennice - 9 years ago

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: rbb1
Thank you for the update Ana but please make your updates a bit longer, wow so he is going beyond his script he had in his head, so him being close to Ragini is different too all the other girls he was close too thats something, so Ragini wants to get away and he is getting close

well I updated fully now...plz read again and comment again...OK..but a warning...it's hot to handle..

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: lovely711
nice, make it long

thank...but it's already long...may be this much isn't enough...u guys,want to k NBA ow at once what happens...😆...thank for liking anyways...

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#216

Omg you crazy woman that was hot to say the least, Laksh is being smart which is nice he made he change into the clothes well done to him, so he likes what he sees like she like what she saw, it's nice to know he is admiring his wife and not just another woman, he is liking how she looks that's nice, Ragini thinking that they cannot take their relationship to the next level and the reasons are good she is thinking about him and how he will fall in his own eyes wow even in the situation she is, her thinking him and the outcome that's good, AMAZING update

I cannot wait to read what happens next in site it will be FAB

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Anamta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#217

Ana it is really hot burning hot as you said😳

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor
Ana it is really hot burning hot as you said😳

I know we need the next part ASAP

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DocSNair

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Posted: 9 years ago

#219

Finally lakshya saw Ragini n as expected he is awestruck...Teja has a perfect figure with that height n right amount of flesh every where n her face is so Devine..she will be the perfect choice for Devine n princess roles like droupadi,jodha etc..
It was fresh n funny how lakshya convinced her to wear the dress...I want the story to be more in lakshyas pov from now that he has started noticing Ragini like how a man sees a lady..I am loving the pace of the story..plzz give us such naughty cute hilarious moments as of now..falling in love has to be a slow gradual process in ragyas case...
I am enjoying ur story a lot now...earlier the chapters were full of emotions n feelings n its becoming a little more light hearted..u are a pro at both..
-Jyothirgamaya(Sneha)

Edited by ShaktiArshaKR - 9 years ago