The simmering pain: Raglak STORY Note 11/3/16 - Page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg !! Can't wait to read further !!
Please update soon !! 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Yeah like seriously if they show such naughty romance on show..it would be such a treat to our hearts,and eyes...yepp...laksh is getting to know side of his wife he hadn't ever not bothered with before...my ragya are super hot...hope new updates prove that...they r nothing like show...they r harmonal humans...šŸ˜†...laksya is a man here...with raging hormones who has,realised his wife is indeed beautiful...he too needs to adjust no before getting physical with her as per his plans...I c as nt relate to the show..it's sick watching that...but in my story...it's natural progression...šŸ˜†

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Posted: 9 years ago
Please post the next part soon and it has to be long
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG...that was too too too good...i was having Goosebumps by reading it...
I loving this naughty Laksh n nervous confused scared Ragini to the core..i always wanted n expected to see it in the show...thanks to u that my that wish is fulfilled...u way of writing n narration is too good that I feel like I'm watching it..i can visualize everything..u r doing full justice to the story..can't wait to read the next part.. šŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
My goodness Unbelivable.. dat was amazing and hot shot... Laksh nd dat avtar is really unbelievable... Ragini in shorts dats impresive.. Flirty Laksh is unkowningly gving up on his plan nd is being him self towards ragini lubing this.. plzz updte soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ana where is the next update please post it soon I hope no am not pestering you
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 22
There was pindrop silence in the room. But a thunder was,storming in two hearts. The room was still dark. L WAS still staring at his,wife and R was thinking of a way out of this,situation. How badly she wanted to wipe that smirk off his face. They we're still glued to each other. Seems L was too much prepared this time while Ragini was,short of defence. A battle of wills was going on between them...an age o li d battle if passion between man and woman.
L was surprised at himself. He had never thought in wildest of his,dreams that this simpleton never out of sarees,and suits,behenji types would be standing glued to him in hot shorts...in this crop top. He still remembered drooling over swara...when she had,worn such dresses...but it felt different with Ragini. The glare she was giving him could have murdered the person on spot but he had gone on a crazy land. Somehow this moment he was just obsessed for want if seeing her in this attire. She was trying all tricks to escape but L was totally unaffected. His,desire to see her ,feel her was climbing every minute.
R would have given anything to smack any man this moment but she was scared,with determination on his,set face. She was studying his hard,set jaw. His eyes we're hooded lazily yet dark,very dark...his intent was pretty clear. His hands we're causing havoc in her mind and body. She didn't want him to see her like this. All her will power was shattered. Her mind was falling in lust for him. She was having alien sensations in her midriff,abdomen,body. She was too scared of feeling rejected...this wasn't the laksh she ever thought she would have to face.
L: Ragini...u have a nice ...butt...
R what????cone again..
L: err...I mean nice body...y don't u just agree to show me yourself in this dress...I will free you off this torture...
L bent and started playing with her hairs. He started nizzling her behind her ears...smelling Ger like and exotic flower. She smelled so yummy...he felt a strange hunger rising in him...he couldn't help it...he was a hot blooded man after all. Her body was enticing him. His control was wavering badly...Now he wanted to do much more to her than kissing. His hands,we're still roving over her bare thigh and stomach..she had such shapely body...
R: Laksh ...OK if I agree will u leave me now..
L: Yupp I will...but no cheating...
R gulped hard. Her body was aching from his touch. She could feel every part of him. She was feeling so safe and comfortable. But this,was,all lust and she didn't want that. This wasn't the love she wanted. She wouldn't give in to him defo. She just nodded in his,way. She felt his hold loosen on her.
L: Fine am releasing you..don't move till I switch on the light.
His excitement could be felt even by ragini. He felt like some kid getting something very exotic and special..he went to switch on the light and turned to see her with lots of excitement...but as he turned Ragini was nowhere...he got very angry...very very angry. But he controlled himself. This rejection wasn't acceptable to him. He heard the bathroom door click..
L: OK! So u r there?? Ragini I had warned u no cheating. Cone out sweetheart...stop playing games now.
R could here anger,annoyance,fun all together in his voice. But she dared not go in that dress to him. She decided to wear back her suit, tie her hairs. She was back to being the desi man. Now he couldn't be able to do anything. She felt relaxed and confident. She silently opened the door only to see a shirtless,laksh standing there glaring at her. She turned beet red..and closed her eyes..
R: L can't u put on the shirt.
Ragini heard him laughing hard.
R : why or u laughing?...
Ummm..guys need to go somewhere will continue iin next part..bye..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh no...u cant just stop it in such a crucial moment...I wished lucky to see rags in that attire...I want to know his feelings when he sees her like..Ragini shouldn't have cheated him..not fair rags...now lucky is burning with his manly needs n anger..now how is Ragini going to handle him..
Ur ragya is very hot passionate...i can visualize Temish through out..they would have set the screen on fire..but no hopes left..but happy that we are getting to see it all in your story...
Waiting for your next part..update soonish
Edited by jyothirgamaya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
oh man u such a meanie u know I just love this chapter u make me want to watch this show even for the horrid leads just to see the 1 sec scenes of these 2 hotties love it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sandiab

oh man u such a meanie u know I just love this chapter u make me want to watch this show even for the horrid leads just to see the 1 sec scenes of these 2 hotties love it

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