The simmering pain: Raglak STORY Note 11/3/16 - Page 21

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothirgamaya

Oh no...u cant just stop it in such a crucial moment...I wished lucky to see rags in that attire...I want to know his feelings when he sees her like..Ragini shouldn't have cheated him..not fair rags...now lucky is burning with his manly needs n anger..now how is Ragini going to handle him..
Ur ragya is very hot passionate...i can visualize Temish through out..they would have set the screen on fire..but no hopes left..but happy that we are getting to see it all in your story...
Waiting for your next part..update soonish

well course is changed...now ragini wants to distance and laksh wants to keep her near...it's battle of wills...yupp I know...my ragya,are intense,in fact I think I love this laksh rather...he's real...guy of today...arrey even if u r planning to use her...at least show some love,care naughtiness...not like they showing in show...that creeps me out...🤢
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG you can't stop there you are mean, I I like how Ragini got away from him and changed poor Laksh, but it's funnier he took his shirt off and she put her clothes back on lol, please post the next part ASAP thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rbb1

OMG you can't stop there you are mean, I I like how Ragini got away from him and changed poor Laksh, but it's funnier he took his shirt off and she put her clothes back on lol, please post the next part ASAP thanks

haha...yupp it's fun..they both on opposite sides now...let's see how ragini counters this,naughty,sexy,romantic hubby of hers...and...beleive me when a man starts viewinng a lady..who is agreebly or forcibly but his wife...dynics,start changing...thats the,truth...ragini ..ab bachke kahaan jayegišŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

haha...yupp it's fun..they both on opposite sides now...let's see how ragini counters this,naughty,sexy,romantic hubby of hers...and...beleive me when a man starts viewinng a lady..who is agreebly or forcibly but his wife...dynics,start changing...thats the,truth...ragini ..ab bachke kahaan jayegišŸ˜†

lol true it's funny yet hot at the same time you are awesome

Now please start typing the next part already
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG what an update !!

Please please please continue soon !! 😳😳
Edited by StarshineHues - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is not fair yaar please update the next part ASAP.
RagYa are sizzling hot.
Awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

haha...yupp it's fun..they both on opposite sides now...let's see how ragini counters this,naughty,sexy,romantic hubby of hers...and...beleive me when a man starts viewinng a lady..who is agreebly or forcibly but his wife...dynics,start changing...thats the,truth...ragini ..ab bachke kahaan jayegišŸ˜†


I am glad that you are showing Laksh like a real man with his needs n feelings..i am too fed up with the unrealistic ideal hero/patis of Indian television with no such emotions or feelings just the way I am fed up with the ideal ssanskari mahaan bahus..
Ps:next part soonish plzzz 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

well course is changed...now ragini wants to distance and laksh wants to keep her near...it's battle of wills...yupp I know...my ragya,are intense,in fact I think I love this laksh rather...he's real...guy of today...arrey even if u r planning to use her...at least show some love,care naughtiness...not like they showing in show...that creeps me out...🤢


Yes yes..i want rags to act hard to get..no not act.i want her to be hard to get for laksh from now on n I want laksh to desperately chase after her..she should not give up easily..its fun..
No more hopes left in the show...have stopped watching it long ago..infact I haven't watched much of the show..just bits here n there..but got attracted to Ragya,more specifically Temish...now my only hope is your story
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 23
Ragini summed up the courage to turn and face him. Lord this,shirtless L was intimidating. She dared not put her eyes below his nose. His laugh was too infectious but she could bet anything that this laugh had hidden something evil cropping in his mind. Her husband had been possessed. She noted to make sure discuss it with some doctor...
R: why or u laughing???
L: is,there ban on my laughing??
R: u r forgetting u r at the Baadi. People will get disturbed and question me.
L: question you...hmmm...
He slowly starts,walking towards her. She walks back..but he's too quick...he just pulls,her towards himself...
Ragini curses herself. Lord why..am trying to keep safe distance and this man is stopping at nothing less than gluing me to him. His physical proximity is clouding her already tired,nervous overworked mind. But she was trapped badly...
L is actually fuming inside. Hadn't he told her to show,herself in hot pants. She's acting weird. This girl who was ready to murder her own sis for him now is defying him. She's running away from him. He could sense it. But it was bad news. If he let her go he won't be able to get all property papers,signed..he wouldn't get divorce from her. . Her tactics we're annoying him. He was so used to her harping around him always...suddenly y is she backing off. Has,she got hunch of his plan??? No no...he had told nobody about it then how??? It was something else. What was she playing at now. ???. But right now the thing angering him was he desperately wanted to see her and she tricked him again. He won't let it go so easily. He would see her in that dress by hook or crook. A strange feeling overtook him..a curiosity...how,she would actually look...touching her was in itself a huge shock you his,harmonies. It was like touching a live wire...he had never imagined that Ragino could make him lose control...even with swara and his other girlfriends...he was always in control...but after now...his hands,we're again itching to hold her sexy waist...touch her..feel her...he had felt so relaxed in her smell...lord she smelled delicious...may be..this gonna be a,really sweet revenge...yeah...
L was watching every expression of her while holding her still in his arms. He missed the feel of her skin...but this was fun...and he was relishing this challenge...all this happening wasn't part of his script...but to be truth full...after almost an year he's feeling lively...excited...a an urge to prove...to win...and he realised ragini wasn't easy...she was making it too difficult for him which actually surprised him.
L: My dear wife...it's,been almost a week now u r trying to run away from me...why is it that...
R: why Laksh? Y r u doing this? Nobody can change overnight. If u forgetting u hate me and I know that very well. Stop playing these cheap games. I know u r up to something. And stop all this nonsense of flirting. Let me remind you again...I am ur MAALKIN..as u call me. And I don't give you permission to touch me. So back off. And a final reminder...I am Ragini,not swara so cone out if your delusion.
L: so u trying to bring rude?? Huh...u could have dine better Ragini. Of course I know u r the Maalkin...
R;: L first leave me..u r suffocating me.
L loosens his grip but doesn't leave her yet. He smirks knowing very well what he's doing to her.
L: or u mean making u breathless..
R: shut up! Will u??..please wear something and leave me..and wipe that smirk of ur face...
L: y my being shirtless bothering you?? It shouldn't...see girls love this body..they die to see it, feel it..and u have got it for itself and u insulting it...ouch it hurts bad.OK now conubg yo the point...u surely are maalkin...but in this,room,this moment u r my wife...I have already accepted you as my wife..and want to take our relation further...isn't it vs that you want...in fact u wanted this Haq and now that as m giving u, u have objections...he leaves her and turns and flexes his muscles...
Ragini was awestruck with the way his muscles,we're rippling. He definitely had a body to die for...though she hadn't ever been exposed to as my guys before but she could bet that he could easily be one of the best...he had such toned back...she was literally drooling...how she wanted to scratch,to touch to feel,to roam her hands on him...and then he turned back...she couldn't do anything...her eyes we're drinking in his,appearance...he had very well toned body indeed. She knew he was very particular about his health regime...but this was first time she was watching his wash board flat abdomen..with a few packs...his chest was glowing and his waist was slim. He was nowhere loose or fat in any part...he had an aura...a charisma which could entince any girl...he was one of the best looking guys she was sure...her eyes,we're travelling down his perfect body,lean hips..rippling muscles...she gulped hard...any girl would die to own it...why not she?? What was,stopping her?? Her treachouroud,mind was calling her to accept it,this was her HAQ her right. She was his lawfully wedded wife...it wasn't a sin as nd this way may be she would make him fall for her in true sense...she took a deep breath and closed her eyes tightly to block all these thoughts...it was breaking Ger resolve...she would spoil his life...how long can a forced relation stay?...Lust and sex cannot tie u forever if there was no respect,no love...and forced love could never happen. She wouldn't ever be secure and happy and might do more vile things than she's already done. This man deserved a lot more,a lot better...someone who would love him unconditionally,someone who would get his respect mutually...he didn't deserve a selfish love...and whatever his plan...she knew he would be guilty later on for falling so low...wasn't she turning him to criminal as well...is that love?? Ur love strengthens you, doesn't make up a criminal...and my love will make him guilt ridden,negative...coz he was basically a very good person by heart...a weak man,who had fallen in his own eyes...nope she won't let it happen ever...she had to go very very soon and find out what he actually wants...what's his plan...to save him and herself from falling in there own eyes...
L: Earth to ragini. Stop drooling,I know u like what you see...
R: wear ur shirt first...
L fine..u wear the dress u we're in before...I will do what you say..
R: y are you behind me? How can I wear that dress IN FRONT OFFF YOUUU..u must be mad..
L: fine then am not going yo wear shirts and it's too hot in here today...I can't sleep in these jeans...so I need to remove you...brace yourself...u gotta,sleep with me like this then..ur choice
Or: whattt??? You plan to sleep here,in this room, with me..in baadi...she asks shockingly...
L: of course... u r my wife and as m ur husband so obv...I would sleep where my wife sleeps...am trying to be such a good hubby a nd u r complaining??
L is trying to stop his laughter...he had shocked her ...she was speechless and he was so enjoying it...the fear, shock,anger,frustration all showing on her face made him gloat...this was so much fun...lord...her ...it was getting harder to keep on a serious face...let her feel how it looks like bugging someone...well it's payback time...she stalked me before..but now she will know what it feels like being g forced...
R: stammering...Lll...kash...uuu...cannnttt...slleeep here...I mean nobody knows u r here and it will lookjso embarrassing...what will people think...
L: don't worry i had informed dadi...way back...that since she's alone and if ragini comes down there I would come there too...see only u r not too smart...give some credit to me...maa had called me that u warent in house on my way hone..I called dad I and came to know u we're here so I said I would be coming here too for the night...
R glares at him. He just keeps and grinning..
L: OK fine with I loose...now am too tired,it was a very long day..and am off to sleep..he unbuttobs his jeans...
R gets scared...
R: stop it..u can't s OK keep here..there is no couch and am not going to sleep in sane bed as you...I dunno what's cooking in ur mind but am not falling in ur trap...u can use the we guest room..
L: Rsonetines u act so dumb wifey...I have no problem OK emsleeping in guest room..but imagine what will people if baadi say..I wouldn't like u and dad I getting embarrassed...
R feels helpless...she's too nervous and L was right indeed...if baadi people came to know...they would li d m as me it a world wide discussion...she will have to sleep with him tonite..there was no couch in the room so bit was the same bed then...y was God testing her control...
R:: OK..I give in...I never knew ur mind worked so deviously...but u r not gonna remove that jeans..stop it there..
L: fine then..I won't..but for that wear that dress back and come..ur choice..and I am too tired now..till count if ten if u aren't back here in that dress..I will..his hand got to unzip..
R: hold on...OK OK...but please give me some time...u know what I mean...
L: what do u mean ..no I don't understand...
L is smirking,R is feeling shy,embarassed..
R: that relationship thing..u know...that..
L very innocently..what that ragini...what that thing..
R: fine...that getting intimate..
L smirks : its called SEX...try to say it..
R shut up...
L: my counting starts..10..
R goes to cha nge..she has no options..she donnes back the hotpants and crop top...and walks out clising her eyes..no man had ever seen her like this...she was sure he would make fun of her..she couOK dny match swara at all...
L sees her and is,speechless. This women wasnt ragini...she was somebody else. She looked...hit as hell...what a figure...her skin was glowing everywgere...the top clung to her full chest..lea ing a lot of stomach on display...man she was sexy...a ft last abdomen...her shapely thighs...that low waist cut just enhanced ger figure...she would look enthralling in a bikini...he thpugh wildly...she had one of the best figures he had seen...such glowing attractive skibg and it felt hwr whole body was blushing...she looked so innocent that momnent...y couldnt he ever see this...y had she always kept herself hidden..


Edited by dreamyjennice - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
NOOO such a small update.
Please update yaar.
shirtless lakshya nervous ragini😳

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