The simmering pain: Raglak STORY Note 11/3/16

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
so are u liking there convos and flirting...I hope I am making the sequences believable...coz I believe it's not easy to ignore someone physically when u r madly in love with that person...after all ragini us not a nun or some saint...though she's trying hard...but not always u succeed...right...she's,so helpless..and am actually loving this naught lakshya...I hope the update was actually hott

believe me it was HOTTT, i like how Laksh came in the room and making them her feel hot and he was loosing himself as well, it shows he is attracted to her as well, but wonder what he will do or say when he sees her in the outfit, please post the next part ASAP 😃

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dreamyjennice

@dreamyjennice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: ammu92
Arey why are u saying this story is getting less response... No plzz Han I have read all the chapters and I'm in love with it ...plzz keep continuing 😛
Awesome this was such a pleasure for we ragya fan to see them flirting over phone 😳 Hailaa..if we could have got some in show too..but they are dumb excited for the next update. And about kiss..ahh.. I think laksh is way too much impressed today by his wifey and on the other hand he's kinda enjoying flirting with her and in all this rags getting annoying and surprized.. I don't think rags will do any such thing..and I also feel laksh will be back him coz more than party he is enjoying teasing his wifey right now.. After that may be he will try to tease her more to get a kiss but her adamant,cool nature and ignorance may make him angry and kya pta wo hi kiss kar le.. 🤣 Haha.. I went too dreamy,see side effects of ur ragya

Yeah like seriously if they show such naughty romance on show..it would be such a treat to our hearts,and eyes...yepp...laksh is getting to know side of his wife he hadn't ever not bothered with before...my ragya are super hot...hope new updates prove that...they r nothing like show...they r harmonal humans...😆...laksya is a man here...with raging hormones who has,realised his wife is indeed beautiful...he too needs to adjust no before getting physical with her as per his plans...I c as nt relate to the show..it's sick watching that...but in my story...it's natural progression...😆

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sudhi03

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

It's too hot OMG☺️

RagYa are amazing. Loving flirty lakshya.

Awesome update

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dreamyjennice

@dreamyjennice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Yeah its true...this story isn't getting much response..but few of u who like it..I write it for them and to satisfy my urgings and wants for ragya...which this show has,destroyed totally.

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dreamyjennice

@dreamyjennice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: sudhi03
It's too hot OMG☺️
RagYa are amazing. Loving flirty lakshya.
Awesome update

yupp I wanted it to be a hot surprise for you all...😆😳😉

Edited by dreamyjennice - 9 years ago

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
Yeah its true...this story isn't getting much response..but few of u who like it..I write it for them and to satisfy my urgings and wants for ragya...which this show has,destroyed totally.

believe me i feel better after reading your story and the other stories as well, these CVs god they make me mad

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
yupp I wanted it to be a hot surprise for you all...😆😳😉

you surprised us trust me in the best possible way, now i cannot wait to read what happens next

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ammu92

@ammu92

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Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Omg... This was mind blowing dear... I was blushing all while reading it 😳
Uff... Ragya are so hot and you managed it properly.. Ragini in shorts... laksh ka to pta nhi kya hone wala h apni wifey ko hot looks me dekh k 😆
I'm eager to read ur next update 😛

Edited by ammu92 - 9 years ago