THEIR FIRST DATE (completed) - Page 2

Originally posted by: staryypriya

its nice yaar...the date was very cute n lovely...u have written it well...do write more

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Very nice Akshata...both parts were nice, the second one was specially very warm and conveyed a lot of depth in their bond. I liked the way Sanskaar had planned this lovely picnic in the secluded, romantic ambience by the river side...and it was so peaceful, reading about them strolling down the river bank, letting their feet dangle in the cool water, sitting on those rocks. So romantic.

Naughty and flirty Sanskaar is so wonderful to read about. 😳 . The highlight for me, was his caring, understanding side as well. How he says that they will move ahead in their relationship at a pace she's also comfortable with. His avowal of support and understanding was awesome.

Nice job with this 2S. Look forward to reading more from you.

Cheers

Viji

Originally posted by: soumi93

Its wonderful.excellently written and well explained. splly the second part has more depth and warm of a rltnship.liked it.
want more from u in future and do pm me about ur future ffs.

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome 👏
Really a awesome
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Akshata,

A real lovely story - though the flirty, slightly naughty Sanskaar is the one we love, you brought out the gentle, 'ever thoughtful of Swara' side of him quite beautifully. The balance between both sides was neatly sketched.

And the retort of Swara (in part one) - where she tells Sanskaar to go out with her Photograph if he only planned on staring at her - too good😊

Nyna

Originally posted by: soapbubble

Ah ... the stirrings of young love!

How very sweet

Thanks for letting me know, Akshata!