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SIMI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#901

Nimmo😉

Lovely chapter ...and it will be special for me always..😉

Sanskar admitted first time that he can't think about his future without kitten...aww boy. Finally.. You got it.

Durga prashad's entry was entirely different than what I was thinking .Really loosing a son is not a small thing.The man must be broken internally. Sanskar and swara's reaction along with Maddy was genuine. So the God of underworld asked for forgiveness from a son..but it was better with the silence, because he was also going through the same pain.

I was shocked and happy at the way Durgaprashad showed a fatherly side to swara and sanskar.specially that bonding of swara with apte and Dp.wow seriously she is the little pixie...,the cute innocent soul who can remove the darkness from their life.

The trio's entry and activity in the farmhouse was so hilarious, especially maddy 's activity with apte.so he choose a colourful room,crazy guy.Apte's reaction to Dada,oh it was so touchy. Maddy will eat apte's Brain a lot..😆

So our lover boy is missing her already... He is missing her sweet torture,her Bear hug,...oh man...u are gone,...😆..The monologue of Gaby was hilarious. He is waiting for her knock,and accusing his kitten and his lil bro...jealous because of kitten's popularity.. Aww cute.think of the kitten,the kitten came...wow ho boldly she asked could I!!!!!

Super duper excited for the next update..(till then RIP my asanskari mind😉😆)

Love,

Simi😊

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#902

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Hi Nimmi! The update was amazingg. I tell you I loved it. It was beautiful in and contained all aspects, emotions, fury, love comedy just everything. Awesome chapter!! So coming to it-
Poor DP! He seriously must be so broken. As broken as Sanskaar to loose a son and a man who was like a brother to him. I know he is responsible for Sanskaar being in this dark world, but still we couldn't have got Gabriel then. So yeah! I really feel bad for DP and when Swara hugged as if he were her father, I was like OMG - how sweet was that gesture. Really! I loved it<3

So Rane and Ram Prasad are together huh? He is the partner. Damn these politicians. Traitors. This is the true scenario of India. Great. Will be waiting for Ram Prasad's truth to be out. And then definitely my Gabriel and his Kitten with the Magnificent Maverick together just like a family as you say!

Sanskaar wouldn't even trust DP for Swara. Man, he loves Swara sooo much. Anything for Swara's safety. Omggg The feels here<3 And he agreed after such long persuasion. There you go Gabriel, and you were unknown to human emotions! Duh..

Dude, if Swara is at Maheshwari Mansion, Ram Prasad will be there too. Swara is totally unsafe there! RP will easily outsmart DP and he might blackmail Sanskaar by keeping Swara at the gunpoint or might try to you know hurt her to know Sanskaar plans or anything. So technically, she is the most unsafe there!😲

Old loyal teddy bear!😆 Nimmi, can please Maddy say that once to him please! I'll die of laughter and it will be too good if He says so.. Imagining Maddy saying him old teddy bear!😆😆 Too good! And Apte to needs a change from old man, man and jolly old man right? So this would be perfect! Maddy and the leader🤣 Oh God! This guy is tooo good! I love him beyond words I tell ya

OH MY GAWD!!! My dear Gabriel has FALLEN IN TRUE LOVE!! The way he's constantly looking at the door. He can't stay without Swara even for 45 minutes and hates that big bed ALL TO HIMSELF. Awww... Sanskaar baby, you're gone!!😳 He can't even think of his future without Swara but the Gabriel in him is being an idiot! Not at all an optimist. A total IDIOT

Aww man, he is blaming Swara for not being with him. How cute<3 He, here is all mad being away from her and she's sleeping. Oh you'll come to know whats she's been doing Gabriel😉😳
Continuously calling himself stupid, because he realized his never-dying love for her. This guy is just the best. I wish I were Swara Bose!!

And then he imagined the knock.! Oh God. He's totally smitten by her, he's drowned in her love. How sweet and cute and just amazinggg<3<3 I knew Swara would come. She can't be at peace as Sanskaar is thinking she would be. But but but..what she asked was DAMN UNEXPECTED!! Jeez my Asanskaari mind! Will be waiting for the update Nimmi. Please give SwaSan and Gabriel-Kitten fans this! 😳 Love ya
Sakshi!😳

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AditiPant

@AditiPant

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Posted: 10 years ago

#903

Such an amazing chapter again... Loved it

From the entry of DP in gabby-maddy-swara house to the entry of swara in sanskar's room, every line of the chapter was so perfect

DP himself took the responsibility of taking care of swara...WOW that was great...such an affectionate hand on swara's head...still, sanskar was not so convinced about his kitten's safety...how caring he is!!!!Hope nothing happens to swara in MM where there r people like RP...

Maddy again rocked it...his dialogs r always so good...and hilarious... Apte finally gave up on him...poor lieutenant

Sanskar was waiting for swara to knock the door...O MY GOD!!! His kitten has really driven him crazy...he has realised that he cannot live without her for even an hour...how will he live without her for an entire lifetime???

And then finally his kitten came...and a smile spread over his face...amazing chapter...will b waiting for the next part

Love ya nimmi

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 10 years ago

#904

hey...sorry i haven't been able to comment much. i promise once i am done with my current SS I will catch up on today's part and post comments too. bear with me till then...sorry for being a silent reader right now.

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Teddy94

@Teddy94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#905

Wow.. Loved the update 😊
The bond b/w dp n swara is amazing..
N swara sanskars kitten made beautiful bond with all of them.. Loved the way you portrayed it..
N finally swara knocked the door n came to her angel 😳
Waiting to knw Hw they r gng to finish their hunt
N wats in the destiny of Angel n his kitten..
Update soon.. 😊

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svg98

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Posted: 10 years ago

#906

Beautiful update.. Swara is really so pure..so innocent..nothing in the world can replace her.. She even won the heart of Durga Prasad,unbelievable as it seems..he must have seen her inner wonderful soul.. Apte and Maverick's were so great..specially Maddy..that part was so hilarious..Apte is surely going to murder him a day..if he does not stop soon..with Sanskar watching amused from the side..and Swara laughing her heart out..waiting anxiously for that scene.. The part where Swara won heart of Apte was ao cute..After this he is really going to guard her with his life.. Sanskar is just so intense..when he is going to realize that this light of Swara is due to him..he is the source of that light..if he goes away the glow will slowly fade..he and his stupid inner voice..why cant his inner voice make him accept her.. Last scene was so awesome Swara knocking and Sanskar giving that beautiful and intense smile of his..beautifully written.. Gosh i want to know you inside out..really why did u stop there..thats sheer torture.. Cant wait to read more.. Update soon..

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lucky.m

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Posted: 10 years ago

#907

Hey sweety🤗

swara bose is sachi main certain swara bose isn't she ..when angel himself couldnt resist the charm of this young lady expecting others to be resistant .they dont stand a chance. nah..

Now kitten has her own fan group ..lol..two new admirers..lol nimmi ..this part leaves ME with sort of mixed feelings ..I felt bad for DP when he entered ..in broken state but when swra hugged him ..so sweet of her and when maddy started his antics 😆.😆.😆 apte will be soon pulling out his hair dealing with maddy🤣

and last part sweet herat ..takes back to atadu ..u know whuch scene I am talking about😉 door ki iss taraf aur uss taraf ...gaby darlin ..one hour without kitten ye haal hain tho ..you have got a love story for yourself sweet heart and a huge fan following angel ..live with it😆

knowing in and out hmm😳..we are also waiting nimmi to know sanky in and out😉😉

Superb update like always

Love

Lucky

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 10 years ago

#908

Sorry Double post😊

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Juanita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#909

Res Nimmi.

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Hola Nimmi🤗...

So i was wrong the guy is really Rane, why do i still feel like RP has set Rane has an fall guy.. i am reading way too much in to it . i guess..😕

So Fianlly DP arrives and Swara is already feeling bad for him. Only she can feel sympathy for the God Of Underworld . So now we have DP has the body guard for Swara interesting😉.. But i love how Sanskar easily doesnt give in to it .. I think he really sees Mav has brother becuase he doesnt need that much persusaion when he left Swara in his hands. But Apte and DP took so much convinciing 😆

I really hope DP is capable of protecting Swara, RP lives in the mansion and i dont think this plan is going to work . How i still wish Sanskar didnt accept his proposal. Nimmi i dont want DP dying to save Swara and getting reunited with his son too.

Swara hugs DP and calls Apte Dada. How can this girl be so innocent and lovely. I am so loving this new bond between Apte and Mav😎.. So Mav left to give us some time alone. i love it .😆

I so loved the conversation where Mav calls himself the leader and Angel retort to each of his lines . That was so good . It would have been my favourite one too hadnt it been the last Angel and his kitten scene.😳

Wow Gabreil misses his kitten in just one hour , how does he plan to get away from her... I so loved him imagining the knock sound and finally she did and you are so mean to end it there😆... Do contine soon Nimmi ..And i am sorry if i said you are mean.😭.. You are not mean you are the Sweetest❤️ ..Love Ya Nimmi ...

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