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Posted: 10 years ago
unres...

nimmmi again a wonderful post...dp swara interaction was amazing... I knew she would hug him... and he dp the godfather... was bowled out. ...BTW I love godfather movie...swara won over apte too...am already imagining dis wonderful family...

bring a girl for my Maddy...want Mav to rile dp...hahaha

post fast excitement contain nahi horahi hain
Edited by Messi2 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi...šŸ¤—

That was awesome! I can't believe that Sanskar actually made a plan without thinking about his Kitten's safety! 😲 But yeah, he did realize his folly as soon as he laid out the plan. And then stepped in Durga Prasad Maheshwari, the God of the dark world. He took up the responsibility to guard the girl upon himself. But how could Sanskar take a chance when it comes to his girl? And Durga Prasad understood his dilemma.

The interaction between Durga Prasad and Swara was beautiful! So pure and sweet! The regret, pain and sorrow was clearly visible in his words. And then the bond was formed, in an instant. Swara being the beautiful soul that she is, understood the father in him and reached out to him. That was such an endearing act. And it did melt down the avenging father completely. Swara weaved the magic of her innocence and purity around him too. I too forgave Durga Prasad for all his previous acts at that precise moment. He is genuinely a nice person. ā¤ļø

So Swara did finally manage to coax Sanskar into sending her with Durga Prasad. And he is relieved by the fact that he is taking her to Maheshwari Mansion. But I'm not too sure about this decision. Because the biggest traitor, their biggest enemy resides there. The shadow boxer whom they have not recognized till now; Ram Prasad Maheshwari. Would he use Swara for his advantage once he comes to know about the game plan? Would he try to harm her to stop Gabriel? šŸ˜’ But this time around, it's not only Sanskar who would fight for her. She has become everyone's pet. She means the whole world to someone, a best friend to another, and a daughter figure to two others. They will all be together to fight for her and protect her. And protect her, they will!

Swara pulled the chords of Apte's heart again by calling him Dada. I'm loving all these tender moments between Swara and all of her guardians. She surely knows how to make her way into someone's heart.

Maddy is... well, Maddy! šŸ˜† He is never gonna change. The self-proclaimed general of the mission! Even Apte has given upon him. šŸ˜†

Ah! So Sanskar is missing his Kitten! He can't even spent an hour away from her. Then how is he planning to spent the rest of his life without her?! Poor Sanskar! What a family he has got as he perfectly put it into words. But he was a little bit wrong about his kitten there. She would never ever forget him for anyone. Wait a minute! Did the Angel of Death just felt jealous?! 😲 Oh yes! He did! šŸ˜‰ He is jealous of the two poor old men! šŸ˜†

Sanskar! He just needs a reason to go to his Kitten! But yet again, his mind warns him. But what to do of his heart? His heart was wishing for for just a single knock and all his resolves went out of the window with that knock.

Swara! She wants to know her Angel inside out! 😳 And she actually mustered the courage to ask it aloud to him! What would Sanskar's answer be?! Oh God! I can't wait to read more! Update the next chapter soon dearie! I'm waiting!!

Loads and loads of love..šŸ¤—ā¤ļøšŸ¤—
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Posted: 10 years ago
For 66 and 67!!! Chal Shivi tu kar sakti hai!!!!šŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res

Unres...

Machi... šŸ¤— ... Was a fabulous update that...

From dp entry to Swara at Gaby's doorstep... Aww.. I'm melted.. 😳

You portrayed the bond between Swara and dp.. Awesome... Loved it...

Then that disputation between mave and apte was fantastic.. I'm fall for apte too..

Then... Then... That... War of Gabriel with his own feelings.. Aww man... No words for your words from me.. šŸ‘

Swara Too fight with her feelings.. Well written as usual...


Love you...

Lol... Mmmawh

Off unres give more.. Stories... 😃
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heya NimmišŸ¤—

Thank you so much for this chapter. It was really god one.šŸ‘šŸ¼

I liked this akward kind of tension between Sanskaar and Durgaprasad. So much has happened between them to rekindle that long lost ties😊. You know I can't seem to dislike Durgaprasad, I do understand his actions. I also feel a lot of sympathy for that guy. Afterall he lost his only son the only person whom he loved in this world, whom he tried to protect his own life. And moreover his very own sibling killed his son. He would be shattered when he comes to know about his brother's betrayal.

Rane is such a coward and fool šŸ‘ŽšŸ¼. Escaping the country at the very 1st chance and thus conforming the doubts of the enemies about your involvement in the plan. And did he really think that just by changing a country he can successfully manage to save himself.šŸ˜•

"Looks like you managed to light up his tail in fire Gabriel."😃
^^ hell ya. After all he is Gabriel. And when he is the leader of this small group, Rane is gone for sure.šŸ˜ƒšŸ˜†

I would have just pulled Maddy's cheeks😳. The guy is too adorable.šŸ˜†

I always love Sanskaar/ Gabriel in action. 😳
Glad that Durgaprasad stepped in and avoided any dilemma regarding our kitten's safety.😊

Loved Sanskaar's concern for Swara's safety. He is not gonna take any chances with his precious kitten😳. But seriously passing the parcel... his monolouges are too funny.šŸ˜†

I totally adored that small scene between Swara and Durgaprasad😳. That father daughter bond was so emotional to see. Awww... She hugged him😃. It was so tender and warm moment. I have read it somewhere and believe it too that if a true warm hug does lessens a person's suffering. 😃

Ooh... Durgaprasad also saw that pure bond between our Angel and kitten. 😃

Maheshwari house.😲 ... What an intresting twist😃. That Ramprasad would be present there-the main player of this whole mess. I am seriously having this bad feeling in my heart. Too much mention of I would protect her with my life... in this chapter. šŸ¤“

The trio is shifting to their new house. Well this one had a certain mix of bittersweet memories. I loved their stay in all of their safe houses😃. Each of them were very special.

Swara equally deserves the tittle of angel.😃 She is such a pure soul. I mean who would even think of oneself hugging an underworld god some day. She really has a very big heart. I am glad that both Apte and Durgaprasad met this lovely girl.😊

Maddy is leaving no stones unturned to irk AptešŸ˜†. Poor Dammu🤣. But I know he also adores him.😳

Maddy, army general, prep talk to his cavalry🤣. He appointed himself as a leaderšŸ˜Ž. This guy is really hilarious. A true drama queen.šŸ˜†

Poor Sanskaar , missing his kitten so much😳. I am kinda enjoying this sweet torture upon himšŸ˜›šŸ˜†. He is yearning for his kitten's company and thinking of excuses to meet her. Just say those 3 words boy😃. I am sure kitten would love to hear them. I loved it where Sanskaar described his so called treacherous familyšŸ˜†. It was so apt description 😃. Was he really jealous about Swara's growing fan follwing list. Well no need for him to worry, I think Sanskaar name is on the top of any such list. But really loved Sanskaar's inner struggle with himself.šŸ˜ƒšŸ˜†

Swara is one dangerously bold and brave kittenšŸ‘. She wants to know his angel inside out and directly did ask him so😳. I just love how have you written herā­ļø. She has his own identity.😃

You know that I would be waiting eagerly for the next update.😃

Thanks for this update. It was brilliant as usualā­ļø. My favourite part was Durgaprasad's interaction with both Swara and Sanskaar.😃 And I really loved this line - "Some bonds are formed in moment. And some take a life time. And some bonds last for a life time." Its very true.😳

Take care😳
Lots and lots of jhappis to youšŸ¤—


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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant ! (When is it ever not !!) and oh so heart warming 😊to have our Kitten win over the hearts of all these top dark world inhabitants by just being her own good, sincere self.😃

Loved the entire update...for the strong emotional build up herešŸ‘. We now have 4 men ready to lay down their lives for Swara😃...all bonded in their utter commitment to keeping her absolutely safe. Its also wonderful to see how they have each realized ā¤ļøthe deep love binding the Angel and his Kittenā¤ļø and how touched they are to see their pure love!

The end has left me jittery. 😲

Oh not the Swasan bit...I look forward to the Swasan love getting to its next stage here..perhaps an acknowledgement from Sanskaar at last?

I am more nervous about the plan to have Swara at MM ...Cant ease up coz we know the real blackguard😔 and mastermind is going to be there...a true devil who could kill his own "son" Lakshya, who can backstab his own bro, whose greedy ambitions have left him with no human empathy or morals...

With Swara in his hands, and all these 4 clueless to his real identity and his intentions, he has the power to do anything... 😲


Edited by piccola1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey nimmi...
Brilliant chapter...Beautifully woven...

Waiting for next chapter eagerly...

Talia
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
Yeppiee I was right.. Swara won dp heart...
She is so pure and innocent that everyone falls in love with her..

DP himself told that he will predicted the innocent soul..
But I don't think she will be safe in mm since rp is there...
Count down for Rane begins..

Hope the trio return safely at mm..
Eagerly waiting for next update ..
Since swara want to check Gabriel inside out..

Continue soon.. Thank you for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fan club is getting better day by day for swara
Lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh I am eagerly waiting for the next update Nimmi.. I too want to know about Gaby inside out!šŸ˜‰
The way Sanskar was getting jealous of all and getting mad at Swara for not knocking at his door!šŸ˜†

I wish they had known about RamPrasad. He can be dangerous .. now that Swara has come to Maheshwari Mansion!šŸ˜•

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