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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome 👏



Edited by Sakkiyah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
A perfect description of THE GABRIEL the avenging angel of death
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm
Keep updating
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg...what exactly i have read???? Im speechless...it was amazing nimmmi...
How expertly u described pain...brutality n violence...im shocked...but viper deseved it completely after all what he did to women ..he deserve this painfull death...
Swasan or gaby n swara...gaby u rescued her..all hounds are dead...except maddy...but i adore him...he shall stay positive...
Swasan should stay together now..n enjoy time with each other...they dont knw what danger will come across next..
Amazed truly...
Love Talia
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 57 to 59

ok I HATE VIPER I HATE VIPER I HATE VIPER I HATE VIPER 😡 That vile vile thing, slithering snake, disgusting monster 😡 he killed Ginger that to so brutally she was a family poor Swara she was so heartbroken and seeing her like that Gabby was but he brought her smile back by bringing Mini Ginger aww 😊
Good thing Bozo is safe but Maddy is hurt 😭 VIPERRR 😡 and his monologue is so apt for the situation comparing it with Siya haran only Ravana was wayyy better then Viper yet Maddy tried really hard good thing he was able to inform to Gabriel about the happenings ahh an Avening Angel of Death at it's worst Viper just invited his death he shouldn't had touched his Kitten go to hell Viper your death is on it's way

His house is like him well a represents its owner so goes for him poor Shona is hurt and so scared and that filth don't you dare touch her 😡 the trust Kitten has on her Angel and Vise-versa such a delight and here enters her Angel ahh thefear the terror Gabriel instigated in Viper was a delight to read saddest in me enjoys his plight but then he deserves it and much more and he did got it in the hands of Gabriel who quite scary there btw and Swara realises Sanskars importance
now that hounds are dealth with Gabby needs to meet with his baba and explain everything but I am also waiting for crazy Shona meeting with baba he might find his lost daughter in her and she a father figure in her waiting for next chapter.

would love to read Maddy's backstory waiting for sequal but would need Gabby and Kitten as well
Edited by vishti.dvd - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
😭swara got hurt omg
our poor kitten
but i knew our super angel would come for the rescue.
👏
loved it
at last the the deadly hounds are done
👍🏼
yippeee
you are the best dear
i simply dont have words of appreciation
just simply mind blowing.👏
dat viper is wiped out finally
sighhh of relief
w8ing for your further super duper update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Now that's called ultimate revenge
N you are THE BEST
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heya Nimmi🤗.


Thank you for this chapter Nimmi😃

Finally the most awaited chapter.
What a terrific update . Just loved this chapter.😃

First of a big celebration that viper is finally gone.🥳


Yipee I was right, Sanskaar used phone tracker to find his kitten.😃😆

Just loved loved loved Sanskaar's monolouges throughout the chapter. They were awesomely penned.⭐️

On the other side I completely hate Viper's monolouges. He is a sick man. Little does he know that he had inbited his own doom in his own. Is he sort of naive or what, does'nt he knows Gabriel will eventually find him and kill him brutually. He should know about this, after all he himself is one of the top 5 assassins. He is foolish enough to assume that he would escape from the clutches of numero uno after harming that person who the said person is protecting. And is this guy foolish or what, he didn't even check whether his victim whom he is taking away happily into his house is in possesion of a cell phone. And then he calls himself an assassin.😳


This guy is delusional person. He did have such a golden chance of escaping but then again he foolishly thought that he can kill angel of death himself by using his underhand tactics.

Woah Nimmi, I never assumed this guy to be a sea animal lover. Well now I can seeing he possesses lethal creatures. No shit, the guy has piranhas , like real piranhas.😆 I never thought you would piranhas in the story Nimmi. 😳

This guy is disgusting. Feeding live goats to piranhas and enjoying that scene.😡

I was so happy and releived at that moment when the phone buzzed. I am awed to see such an unflinching and unwavering faith which kitten has upon her angel that he will save her.😃😳


"You can hide from life Viper!" Swara's voice cracked like a whiplash "But you can't hide from death. And you mostdefinitely can run away from Angel of death. He shall always find you."
^^ loved this one. Loved the Swara's change in confidence due to a single call from his angel.⭐️👏


What a dhamekedar entry angel made by literally blowing up the door. I was literally whooping and cheering👏

That piranha part was a brutual one. The whole blood and gore part was nauseating . Gabriel was full on in his avenging angel form and the rage of such an angel was utterly terrifying. But I can I say I loved whatever Gabriel did with him. Could I say the guy deserved this. Viper did took self pleasure in all blood and gory. To me it seemed like his perfect end but I still flinched at the last part. He was indeed killed by his most prized possesion. The whole part was quite very well written.👍🏼

I totally beleive that Swara is the only person in this world who would take out her angel from his self pity and mahaanta mode. I have full faith on this girl.😃 She does have pretty good convincing abilities , especially when it comes to convincing her angel as we have seen in previous chapters😆. And also I loved Swara's monolouges.⭐️

Next I think is either a rundown with Apte or Sanskaar's father. I am eagerly looking forward to the meeting between Rana and Swara since a long time😳. It would be very nice if you give us such a meeting.

The whole chapter was brilliantly written.⭐️ And I am eagerly waiting for the next one.😃

Tahank you for this chapter Nimmi😳
Take care dear😃
Lots and lots of love and bear hugs🤗


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Posted: 10 years ago
Machi... 🤗 ... That was a awesome update...

I loved the end of that creepy creature victor...

I loved how Swara.. Face him... But how can he.. Touch Swara.. Ewww..

Gaby's entry was superb.. I'm whistling...

Simply loved it man... I'm out of words to describe about this update...

Love you...

Lol...

PS: I was busy with my Bros Engagement... Soo late reply... 😃
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ch 58
scary chapter dear
the entire trap was indeed very well laid by viper
yes it did remind of Ramayana
just hoping that the trio was safe
srry for being late
ritika
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally hounds r finishd..
Liked the way Gabriel avenged the viper..
Waiting eagerly to knw Wat happens nxt..
Continue soon.. Thnx for the pm 😊

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