FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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iykyk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#711

Nimmi... update! I want the next chapter now!!! 😭

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Sanavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#712

Where are you dear?
Why no update?
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Teddy94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#713

Hey update soon pls..
Waiting for ur update

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iykyk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#714

Nimmi...🤗

God! That was gory, brutal, savage and what not?! When I first read about the pet Piranhas, I knew that they were going to be the death of Viper. But reading the same and imagining the sight made me nauseous! 🤢 The Avenging Angel was in his deadliest form and the picture that it created in my mind was terrifying!

I hate that vile creature to the core! He had hurt our girl and even tried to violate her body and soul. 😡 How terrified and helpless would she have been? I feel for her from the bottom of my heart. I really wanted our Angel to rip him apart. But the dark Angel we encountered was totally something else, at a different level. The darkness he emanated was too overwhelming. Gabriel had completely taken over leaving no trace of Sanskar behind. But one heartfelt cry of his Kitten was enough to bring him back. I hope that he won't distance himself from Swara to keep her safe. I strongly wish that Kitten becomes successful in breaking her Angel's inhibitions.

At last all the three hounds are dead. And Maddy is already in team Sanky-Kitten. So what's gonna happen next? What is the plan of action? Will Sanky try to meet Rana and clear all the misunderstandings? Will Rana be in team SwaSan now? I really can't wait to get my hands on the next chapter. Update soon dearie. Thank you for the pm.

Love, love and more love, ❤️ ❤️🤗

Ashi. 😊

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lucky.m

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Posted: 10 years ago

#715

Nimmi

That was brutal, savage and disgusting how viper derived his sadist pleasure .. and when gaby fed him to vipers own phiranas...I may sound sadist ..but I liked it ..it was like giving thandak to your heart..

Man I loved Gabriel..only Gabriel ..he was on fire.. Viper gave in more easily than expected ..he was too terrified with name of angel himself ..

Describing violence is not an easy task but with the ease you describe it ..not many can do that to an perfection ..👏👏👏 like you do ..⭐️

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lucky

Edited by lucky.m - 10 years ago

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Dear Nimmi,

Angels - Chapter 59: was completely Gabriel - all the way:

"You can't scare him - he has known fear beyond every other." - Grapes of Wrath:

That is Gabriel for you - of course - his fear for Swara is beyond any other fear known to man - So the Viper ends up getting his 'just desserts' (I somehow relished him being eaten by his pet piranhas - sadistic of me - but very deserving of him). Swara is afraid that Sanskaar is lost in Gabriel, but she need not worry - she can and will bring him back.

On an afterthought - hope Maddy is fine.

Eagerly awaiting the next updates as I feel we are close to the ultimate confrontation.

Nyna

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jess_27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#717

Gosh... I have no words... Nimmi.. Trust me, worth the wait...

Viper, that reptile totally deserves what Gabriel did to him... Afterall he dared to put his eyes on Angel's Kitten...

Swara and Sanskar certainly know each other more than even themselves, and as always the Angel got to Swara well within time...

Loved the gabriel-viper convo, and the expressions off all three of them...

Swara is the only one who can get her Angel Sanskar back from Gabriel.. Anf im hoping she ll be able to do that...

Cant wait for the next update... Plzzz update soon...

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Jessica

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#718

Promise me no more heart attacks! I am already suffering from a twisted ankle...I cannot take anymore strain!!! I swear I NEARLY f**kING DIED WITH THIS UPDATE!!!!

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TRPS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#719

Nimmi! 🤗
err! padhte hue bhi dare lag rahaa thaa yaar!
then with a absolute resolve and faith in Angel and kitten , I read!
believe me, as much relief, content and proud Swara had felt after seeing Angel, me too felt the same. an immediate smile appeared on my face.
I literally cheered for Gabriel, wanted Gabriel to shoot inch by inch starting from legs of that evil disgusting snake then in his hands and then(Gabriel did this by constant attack and blows on disgusting viper and breaking his wrist too, so, all cool) , dumping him into piranha's cage. Well done Gaby boy!
to be honest, Sanskaar/Gabriel reminds me of Lord Shiv(Rudra) and Swara being his Aadishakti. :) and this scenario reminds of him coming to rescuing his Sati and utter destruction that was created when there her father didn't let him meet her. but good difference is that Swara is safe and good.
and along with Gabriel , kudos to Swara's will and strength too. Swara is perfect match for Gabriel/Sanskaar.
the way you described Gabriel and Swara's monologues were so good!
Go Swara go! don't let your angel go!
Sanskaar belongs to Swara. and vice versa.
He will not deny himself to her.
Mahanta be damned! *whoot*
Waiting for the next part Nimmi and continue soon. :)

Edited by TRPS - 10 years ago

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Juanita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#720

Res. ... Read it and loved it .. will give my detailed comments soon

Unres...

When i read the warning Exteremly brutal Chapter ahead, i was scared about Angel and his Kitten😲. Then i thought maybe you meant Viper awesome death scene and i was so excited to read it😆 . You didnt disappoint . Viper deserved it . How dare he tries to hurt Kitten😡 .

So Swara had the phone with her... And Gabreil tracked her down👏 ...Viper waits to see the pain in his victim eyes, while i am thankful he waited so that Gabriel can come to the Rescue. I still hate him the most when you show me the glimpse of his creepy mind 🤢.. I was looking forward to his face down with Angel. 😉

When Swara woke i was like no plz stay unconsious for a while longer.. Gabriel is on the way .. Too late the Viper started his creepiness.🤢 I really felt bad for Swara than came the phone call 😉.. His Angel calling her ...Even without being there he managed to keep Viper off Swara from just a call. I so loved Viper panic when he realized the mistake he made... Swara relief to know his Angel is coming anf her sudden boost of courage was a welcome sight.😃😃

Then Viper answered the call and made my day🥳. The Phone conversation between them was so Good. It was my Favourite part . Then Gabriel entered and i was so Happy . Viper deserved all he got and then some more. But Swara realization about Gabriel in Rage and how precious Sanskar is was so good. She accepts both of them as inseperable and still Loves him just the same. 😳

When you set the stage i know where is death will be and there it was. Piranhas well good Riddance i say😆.. So Swara called her Sanskar and he returned now he is going ot go on an Sacrifice mode ..Dont let him Swara... Enough Sacrifices mode ... It time for you both to be happy .. Well that is after your take down RP and the mysterious guy.😉

Sorry for the late unres Nimmi😭. Awesome update .Do continue soon . Love ya and You are the sweetest .🤗

Edited by NitaReid - 10 years ago