FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149) - Page 73

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Posted: 9 years ago
eWow Wow Wow Nimmie. It was breath taking! Just Awesome. The most awaited chapter of Anjel. Abd Thank you so much foe this power packed chapter. You are cho chweet dear. lob yah!
Chapter was crushing, packed and breath taking. can you imagine ? ilIt was above threshold. Nicely written dude. Very well described.!
Our most waiten gabreil was back with his full rage and power. His dominance and power Omg! Im having goosebumbs while readng,hey can you imagine!! wow wow! Superb. The real devil was in fire, to save his ladylove from the cruel Viper. Cmon Viper you deserved it. you digged your own grave! you destroyed yourself. Lay a nail to kitten,her anjel will back off! And he DID! Even after all this,gabreil was not less in rage! And he was not satisfied the way he treated you. !!! Incredible. The sequence was above threshold! Amazing dear.. And our couple was different, the faith between themselves, Omg im in Anjel world. The way gabreil believed her kitten will not give up and sound safe, similarly swara,she trusred her Anjel blindly.! and they Wow! Yay!! Swara know to handle both gabreil and sanskar, And she called her sanskar back from gabreil and the man appeared in front, feeling guilty for making his kitten to suffer her worst in life,feeling angry towards himself for causing it. The way swara recognized her Anjel inner turmoil WOW! What a Chap Manh! I thourougly njoied. dont give up swara,grab your man!Superb Update Nimmie. Me lob the way you write devilness... Oh god Im a dark lover.(It has Intensity as Anjel).! Brilliantly written! Do update fast. Take care.. (me havin xamz tom, cant hold re!!😆.Anjel ll kill me)
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Posted: 9 years ago
No words for this part..its just beyond of my imagination..
the terror..the horror of death..the Angel of Death..its out of the world..loved it nimmi..hats off to u..love u "Angel"..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ok Gabby's Kitten is crazy Period. WTH says i luv u in the middle of a war? and Gabby's reaction from being concussed to being possessed 😆 he actually started believing it 🤣 then comes denial mode and ignore the stuff u can't handle so typical 😆 then get an earful from Swara and Maddy's reaction to this 🤣 oh my sweet, adorable & crazy Maddy wanna play cupid and b luv guru but scared of Sanskar 😆 then enters Bozo again yaayyy loved him he is funny 😆 wonder what would have happened had Maddy tagged along with Gabriel and Kitten to meet him 😆 hope he makes entry in future again and then Jack enters Swara tripping on wire and the faceoff and Jack's end he has earned respect kinda felt bad for him as well then Shona's b'day & the moments love everything now Viper is next didi't liked him since intro itself gonna hate him for sure 🤢 just keep my Angels safe don't end up killing anyone of them bcz that is gonna make me depressed could only request u rest is up to you 😊 loving till now let me read rest parts will comment then:-)

P.S Is it bad of me that now a days feel like giving supari of Cavity of the show to Viper and feels are gonna increase in coming week?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww.. That was fabulous !!
The way u described every single situation.. Was heads off..
M just speechless !!
N waiting for ur next update CURIOUSLY !!
how swara is going to bring back her SANSKAR !!
Will be worth reading.. Plz don't take this much time try to update. Little faster !!
Tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally Angel saved 'His Kitten'
Super - Duper Amazing

Fabulous Update
Loved It
Post Next Part Super Soon
Thanks for the PM

P.S. Happy Valentines Day
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome..
All the top assassins are dead..
whoes up next???
Sanskar's baba???

Is sanskar et swara go???
No plz...let them stay together!!!

Coninue soon..
thank u for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
nimmi... 😊
happy valentine's day sweety..
oh my God.it was brutal ...but first time i felt good
that lowlife jerk viper deserves this ...
and only Gabriel can do that ...
that was too much .assaulting women and enjoying it...disgusting .
Gabriel did the right thing ...
and yes its time for swara to take the action
he cant leave her and cant let her go ...
i love the last line buddy ...
plz update the next part soon
love you
simi 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai nimmu
You realy gave a heart attack to me...bt realy super..i m waiting 4 ur update...i wrote a long msg to u bt do to my bad luck or ur good luck ur pm box is ful...so i cant send my msg...god save u frm my boring msg dnt wory dr...after ur pm prblm i wil send a detailed msg to show hw much i love ur angel and how teribly i m going to miss ur story...
After ur update nearly i escape frm major heart attack..while i wrote that msg my hands were shaking with fear..anyway super update...dr..
With lots of love
krishna
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Iam speechless. The update is really a treat for us.
In the story you first present the thoughts of sanskar.
You beautifully portrayed the understanding nature of swasan. He found the place by track her phone.
But the scenes of viper really horrible. He is not a human.
In all the sense he is a viper.
Really terrible. His territory was a place were the cruel sea animals found. His family.
But swara trusted her angel a lot. Her trust was proved.
The conversation of viper and sanskar was really nice.
In each words, the death of viper was written.
The entry of sanskar was also nice. The fight sequence was well written.
We saw the old Gabriel. The darkness of his world was visible.
But sanskar is a pure soul. But Gabriel is opposite to sanskar.
But in this update the end of viper was really terrible.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Res.
Coz cannot think of words right now for such a beautifullywritten update

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