FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#691

Nimmi! 🤗

I expected something like this. But still I was able to feel the cold fear gripping my heart. I was dreadfully worried for Maddy and Shona. And the scenario entirely reminded me of the Sita-haran. Maddy did complete justice to his role of a dutiful brother and best friend. I'm happy that you chose to keep him positive. He is another wonderful character you have created. ❤️

Swara! How horrified she must have been when she saw the contents of the parcel! Even I was worried for Bozo. I'm glad that he is fine, but it landed her into big trouble. That vile reptile has already hurt her. 😡 And it has been two hours since he took her from there?! God! I'm terrified even by the thought of what all could have happened to her in this 2 hours! Please keep her safe. Don't let her get hurt too much. I want both my Maddy and Shona safe and sound!

FInally Gabriel in his deadliest form has taken over. What will happen when the rage of an Avenging Angel of Death is unleashed? We have seen Gabriel in deadly forms, but I can't even imagine what will he do that low life. Please update the next chapter soon Nimmi! I can't wait to read what happened to our Kitten and what will Gabriel do to that 🤢!

Are you really planning to write a sequel for our Angel?! You have no idea how happy you made me by that single statement! 😃 And I would definitely love to read the back-story of our adorable Maddy! But of course I need my Sanky and his little Kitten too! 😳⭐️

Update the next chapter soon sweetie! As I said, I can't wait to read more. Thank you so much for the pm.

Love you loads,🤗

Ashi.

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950660

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#692

Wow..superb n mind blowing update..

U shd definitely publish it !!

I loved every single scene !!

Waiting what Gabriel do now !!

Viper is such a low life creature he really have the guts to wk the devil !!

Curiously waiting for ur next update :))

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jess_27

@jess_27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#693

oh shit... i have no words... poor swara.. god knows what that Viper is upto...

maddy did try his best to protect swara, but after all he aint her Angel...

i hope sanskar gets to swara before that goddamn Viper does anything to her...

plzzz update soon... cant wait to read what happens next...

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#694

Awesome update.

The viper is so cruel. He trapped swara.

But really felt bad for Maddy.

Sanskar is really lucky that he got a friend like Maddy.

Sanskar will surely save swara from vipers trap.

Waiting for your next update.

Thanks for the pm

Edited by Sakkiyah - 10 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 10 years ago

#695

Gosh ..I was on edge of my seat biting my nails ( I know bad habit)😆 In office , People giving me looks like ye itni tension main kyu hain..I was like tum log nahi samjoge 😆 mera aur angel ka connection and they lerft me thinking gone case😆

Kya yaar Nimmi ..My heart was dhaddking zor zor se ( Tension waala ) ki kya padne hoga aage with every line ..Its already been two hours that viper took away swara ,Scary

I feel like giving swara do char tappad in this part😡 She was acting like swara madam in SR😡

Jab maddy mana kar raha tha aur swara was adamant I could think of ramayan ..and you mentioned it as well ...perfect parallels drawn👏👏

and Maddy ..😭...Dekho kitne asu beh rahe hain for darlin maddy and a back story for him wow ..sounds great ..will wait

Now I am waiting with bated breath till you update next part how sanky is going to take viper down in his style ..and hope swara and maddy stay safe ..

And you darlin ..Super duper Like always🤗🤗

Love

Lucky

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Pearl

@pearl.16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#696

Nimmi !!

Yaar... Why r u doing this to me..huh ? Now I won't be able to sleep becoz u created this suspense... Suspense that is Swara alright ? What is Gab gonna do n how ? Is Maddy Ok ?

Update soon yaar... Please...

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#697

Nimmo
What a well planned trap it was. Even Gabriel got trapped in it. Have to give this one to Viper.
Maddy nd Viper fight sequence was good. Even Swara put up a great fight but as u hv mentioned Viper had experience so Swara was no match for him.
Feeling bad for Swara as well as Maddy. Both have suffered a lot of bruises.

Sanskaar at lat got the trap. Ab Viper ki khair nahi. Third eye of Angel is opened.
Want to see Viper nd Gabriel confrontation. It has to be worse till nw because as Maddy said Gabriel does not use rage while Assassining someone.

Continue soon.

P.s. : with the end nearing, I'm feeling as one of my friend will go missing. Angel has been an important part of my reading these days. I'll miss it so much.
Would like to read a sequel or a parallel story.

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Anglaise

@Anglaise

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Posted: 10 years ago

#698

Oh god NO! PLZ dont mess up with shona. Two hours sounds really dangerous. Plz dont hurt shona. Viper how dare you?![:x:].Playing with feelings, he know wer to get her. I just hate him.bas! plz update soon dear. cant hold myself without knowing the next chapter. oh god I just hate cliffhanger! why nimmi?! 😒. I just hope our lil kitten will be safe. Oh no while going thru the mention of two hours I couldnt help but to worry. hop she ll b safe. Plz Anjel make him have a vist to Hell. ! Update sooon!!
I had a doubt during kitten birthday did she got ginger body? I mean after blind hold you changed to ginger right? Sorry Did I miss somthing??

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Prabhleen Arora

@7APK

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#699

Maddy is hurt
Viper is so creep
Sanskar will save Swara for Sure
Super - Duper Amazing
Fabulous Update
Loved It
Post Next Part Super Soon
Thanks for the PM