FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149) - Page 61

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow.. Gosh.. What an update... The 1st part just took my breadth away... I was imaging each and every moment while reading it... They r just so perfect together...

I started reading your story midway, but by reminiscing all these lovely memories, i feel i was a part of this story from the very beginning..


I remember in the part where swara busted her hand to save her Angel, and he was helping her eat.. There was food in the corner of her lips.. And then sanskar wiped that food off and licked the food off his hand... That was very very intimate yet touching...


Seriously don't want this story to end, but all good things come to an end... Do pm me plz plz plz...


Love,
Jessica
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Nimmie... My computer is dead again and your ending note left me with kind of an empty feeling...angle bidding good bye is so...heartwarming.
My best memory with this one is Ram Prasad revealing his true face and killing Lakshya...never felt that level of shock ever and then Swara musing over the way Sanskar sailed her boat...that was one beautiful scene!
This is in my top five favorites now. Love you for writing it.
Love,
Sakura
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Posted: 10 years ago
A lovely story with beautiful updates...
Loved the last few updates...!! Read it in a go
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Machi... 🤗 lovely update re.. Thoroughly enjoyed it...

I can't even imagine that I have to bid a good bey to my angle.. 😭

There are so many... Gabriel fighting for his life... Swara saving him.. His days in swaras home in that pink color room..

He naming Swara kitten.. Bozo meeting with Gaby.. Chasing..


Maddy intro.. All that kiss man.. Two kisses.. One at cottage and another one when Swara legs trapped with bomb..

Gaby training Swara..
More to go...


Lol...
Love you take care...
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi...🤗

What should I say? Seriously, I'm out of words to appreciate the sheer brilliance with which you pen down each chapter. I don't know what to write anymore.

You are abundantly talented my dear! Mostly, authors have a certain genre or forte in which they excels. But in your case, you are absolutely splendid in whatever you write. Be it action, humor, romance, angst... you excel in it all. I can't thank you enough for gifting us with this wonderful piece of work.

I don't want to dissect the update as for now. Because each moment and each word you used were perfect! And during the reminiscence, the entire beautiful journey of this Angel was playing in my mind. And I had a smile plastered to my face all the while. And this beautiful journey has also gifted me a beautiful friend like you! 😊 Thank you so much Nimmi! Love you! ❤️

Are you really asking me for the one moment which touched my heart more than the others?! How can I point out one, when all the moments in this story are engraved in my heart? How could I select one from all those beautiful moments? For me, it was a gradual journey. Just like our Sanky and his kitten, I was falling deeply and irrevocably in love with this story with each passing chapter, but never realized it. And now that I realized it, I don't want this story to ever end! But sigh! All good things does come to an end and Angel too will have to end one day or the other. But I will always cherish this journey forever and will re-read it over and over again. And yeah, I will be looking forward to more amazing works from you too.

Once again thank you so much my dearest friend!

Loads and loads of love! 🤗❤️🤗

Ashi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg...dis has to b the best chapter in dis whole ff.their journey ,Gabriel's journey from Gabriel to sanskar ...itz so beautiful...one of the best chapters, one read and re read it again n again.

Their are so many moments dat touched my heart ...when Sasha was about to fire the gun , the way swara shielded him n den d way sanskar scolded her afterwards...awww

N everytym d way sanskar used to protect swara ...how can one forget...stay close to me kitten ??

Can't believe dat d ending is near ...I just wish dis beautiful piece of work go on n on...

PS- the quotes game ...so innovative idea ...loved it !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey

thats the first time m commenting coz actully have never read it before i was on angel's 10 something chapter and now its not showing "content removed" thats what its showing so have to catch up the chapters which r still available !!

superb !! brilliantly written !! 👏 but if possible can u plz tell me where have u put ur complete chapter coz its something i m not able to understand what exactly is going on 😕 its something like m reading a novel, which i found the best thing abt ur ff !!

though loved ur current chapter :)) still half of them r way over my head dot com 😊

tc
Edited by Shikha022 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...awesome you narrate all events in their life in one update...thatz was super yaar love the update...waiting 4 the next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey sweety

In love ..in love totally in haze ...I love this part nimmi ..absolutely lovely..Ok I used the word lOVE many times lekin kya karu I am in love with your angel..and of course you sweety .. a big jhappi and loads of love for giving us angel 🤗.🤗.well is it sounding like fare well speech .😆.Will reverse for later
I an running through mixed emotions right now ..I keep waiting for your updates and like I mentioned before I dread every update because we are getting closer to end ..What would I do with out reading angel ..😭😭😭..I am going to miss it girl very badly😕 but I have this huge smile when I see your PM , I jump and come to read update...

Well to name one moment will be injustice through this journey of angel & Kitten..but to name few which tugged my heart .. when swara says to gaby ..I saved your and your are my responsibility remembering her baba's Words ..I think that was moment which struck a chord in gaby's heart and mine too ..The gradual progress b/.w kitten and angel journey from being gabriel to sanskaar ..I cherish every bit of it , the stories of durga prasad , rana and sanskaar.. and the the first kiss, the part where sanky and kitten discuss about wall colours and many many more..This part hands down my fav .I just hope this day of my angels never end ..😳

.wait still the day is left .??..still few more hours I guess ..I want sanky to break all his walls and come out clean saying how madly he loves his kitten.saying those three words completing their story in coming parts.I am sure we will get to see it and pls ..dnt give any shocks sweety plss . ,and at the end can we get an super romantic part in their paradise😳 after all this madness ends..

and You didnt answer my question .How are you?? you better answer in next part while posting update or PM me

Love
Lucky





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Posted: 10 years ago
babes...please don't tell me you are going to kill sanskar in the end and this video is what swara will have as memory of him.

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