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Posted: 10 years ago
i think its my life's one of the best story which i ever read..i just love SwaSan..n u made it on them..n that makes it more marvelous..fantastic..awesome..loved it from crore of my heart..thanks Nimmi for this ff..."Angel" love u.
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Posted: 10 years ago
This update was adorbs Nimmi like seriously my eyes would soften at each tender moment that you described so wonderfully like a seasoned writer it was marvelous.
I loved how dirty Swara played and Sanskaar's plight on not being able to kiss his kitten back, I love the easy relationship they share, the humor they share, their sarcasm, their wit I just love Gabriel and Swara Bose..

But what I loved the most of this update was the walk down the memory lane right from the time they first met, I was so happy reading it it was a great idea Nimmi just a masterstroke..

As much as the thought of not reading regular updates for this story saddens me but the memory of Sanskaar's fury on giving an easy death to the men who hurt his Angel and then him being the Guardian angel and comforting her and sleeping on the cold floor with their little fingers intertwined *sigh* it makes my insides melt, that was one emotional moment I love then for humor it will be Swara's reaction on knowing Gabriel's real name shoot it was outta the world I was laughing myself and the line you used there was just perf.. Sanskaar was actually taking up all the asanskaari jobs of the world; being an assassin topping the list..

Sheesh I'll miss this story.. I hope I'm included in the list of reader's who shall get a pm of the last chapter of this story..

Do update the next part soon I'll wait for it..

Love,
Kashmi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi 😊
First of all ,thank you very much for considering my choices for the characters(*jhappis*)
Then comes the chapter (bae you made me cry ... 😭 )
After reading the first part ,i thought its a funny romantic part ,but that camcorder scenes just recharged my memories with angel .
Maddy is a true friend (i can not doubt and insult the character )
so swasan were all alone in the house ...
the cute bedroom scene,the way swara asked for one day from him as her sanskar...wow
terrace part i,imagining the hearts and shapes by joining the stars ...sweet
the morning scene ,chocolate cake breakfast .. 😆 ..and omg the chocolate romance
his kitten is trying so much ...the scene was just awesome
the games (blind folded one took his breath away...little .kitten is seducing him)
The best part was the quote game ...
no need to mention ,every quote was perfect according to their situation ...
the camcorder part...every memory of angel was just flashing in my eye (the way i had imagined )
the monologues were way too perfect
she knows he loves her
and she will wait till he utter the 3 magical words for her)
I know girl you are a girl who loves action ,madness and urban dictionary ..
but my heart says that you are a sweet girl who loves only happy ending ...and this camcorder part will be a memory for both of them with other future memories...i cant force you as every writer has his own style ...but still i hope so ..

Nimmi ,about the favorite part...well each and every part was close to my heart ..
Its like you are asking me to choose one of the favorite from my parents ...
For me i neither want to go to the starting nor to the ending...
I am just enjoying the JOURNEY ...
😊
And thats my favorite part.
I love you ...

Simi 😊
Edited by simsen23 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi dear
firstly u scared me i was like what did i missed the previous chapter
where is maddy going
and then relief its to hunt victor
aww loved the temp departing part
maddy has grown protective fr thm and even fr gaby the devil
swara's bday the next day
she wants sanky's one day fr her
waked him at 12 mid night poor soul and crazy girl

watching stars sanky understanding her imaginations

she didnt let him sleep
cake fr breakfast oh i would love it but sanky thinking of health problems
the cake wiping scene swara gone naughty
the game i loved it

and the best part the entire journey
wonderfully and beautifully described dear very beautiful it was

so angel coming to end
i will miss this horribly
i will miss gaby i will miss kitten maddy and no doubt reading your work.

best memory
till date it is the time swasan spend at swara's dida's house
loved that part no hounds only pure and eternal sweet love and care
their hugs
swara's training
not to forget sanskar and ragini bonding
till date this is my fav but who knows you might make me fall more fr some other moments in the upcoming parts:-D

thanks fr making ANGEL:-*


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Posted: 10 years ago
Another wonderful update 😊
So it's swara s bday.. Everything is superb
Staring at stars.. Chocolate cake.. Blind folding..
Camcorder.. N this reminded me the entire journey of Angel 😳
I loved the monologues 😊
Cmng to fav part there r many..
But I would say scene where swara holds the finger of sanskar entire night..
Scenes b/w them in didas home in daman n the family moments..
N their talk in the night wen they r at sashas house..
Swaras love realisation.. N of course the latest n upcoming updates... 😊
So there r many scenes I love.. The entire journey I liked it..
Thnx for the pm.. Waiting for ur nxt update.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
So beautifully written ..i hope dey have happy ending ND that this chap is not foreshadowing anything bad...tfpm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chapter yet again.. N there were many touching moments.. Fav ones are sanskar n lil ragini bond, the first kiss, the unintentional 'M not sleeping in pink bedroom' conversation. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
heya
it was just marvelous
I was out for some days but read all the remaining parts
n was stunn to read the end of jack
actually I discovered this story few times back n now feels like m waking up to read ANGEL every day
I login a no of times in a day for an update
I think I have become obsessive to such an amazing and outstanding work
I bow my head now
even though I too write fan fictions (unfortunately not on dis forum block) but I can't even raise my pinkie finger in front of UR writings
just marvellous
I part where jack died an honourable death it was touchy part for me although I hate him for being behind our beloved angel but still u portray it gracefully.
Maddy is always a sweetheart.
I like the way he respects n love our angel. love u buddy
swara's birthday OMG. a whole day wid sanskaar n not Gabriel!!!
m dancing now
waiting eagarly for your next update
dear plzzz PM me the endings too
I think I would die otherwise
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi !!
U r awesome dear... 😊
The chapter was all Shona n Sanky... No Gab !! Loved it...
Sanky realising his feelings yet controlling himself...
And yes... Do PM me the last chapter !! 😉
And yes yes yes u asked for the most special part of the story... For me... It was...

The time when they both stayed at Swara's dida's home... The time they spent there, the training, the blowing up of kitchen, n yes the very first kiss... It was really special...

So... Yes... What else can I say for ur Angel... I m out of words !!

Keep me updated yaar... N yes... Don't forget to PM me the last part or else I'll go into Gab mode... Juz kidding yaar... I'll cry😭... Do u wanna see me cry ? Of course not !! Then PM me Ok 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heya Nimmi🤗
Hope u enjoyed your weekend



Me late latif as usual. Sorry😳 . Wifi problems since Sunday eve.🤢



Oh Swara is safe. Idk why but I thought Sanskaar will get a surprise as soon as he reaches home.😕 But I am happy that she is safe.



Oh Maddy is going away on some mission. I will miss him. Hope he comes back soon as he is a third angle of our super awesome trio.⭐️ And hope nothing happens to him while he is out



Again Maddy's contact is mentioned. Just gonna repeat the mantra again and again in my head . Something is really fishy here. Nimmi all your readers want you to unravel this suspense as soon as possible. 😊



Oh its Swara's b'day. And how adorably she asks him a grant her a day of his life. 😃



OMG Swara wakes up the poor guy at 12😲. Swara is well one crazy crazy girl. She semmed like a cute kiddo ...all enthusiastic and happy

, while she was dragging out Sanskaar from his bedroom .😆



Wow that star gazing was a good idea to start a day at midnight. The whole part was so cute. I too love star gazing but haven't slept under sky the whole night. One day sure I will.😳



Sanskaar was looking sleep deprived in morning totally in contrast to Swara who was like a live wire.😉



Oh sanskaar don't be so calorie concious in the morning itself , especially on this glorious occasion. A little chocolate cake won't harm.😆


I was just grinning and blushing at that chocolate scene. Swara is one of her kind. She is bold and upfront. That scene was just ☺️. Sanskaar just learn something from her.



I just loved Swara's monolouges after this scene. I am glad that she has taken all the matters in her hands to write her crazy love story with her angel.😃



That blind tasting session was also very good. Good going Swara. She is just wonderful😎. What an innovative ways to seduce your angel. In Sanskaar's words "a sweet torture". Things are surely heating up a bit😳



I just loved that quote game part. I loved each and every quote⭐️. Though it is Sanskaar's area of expertise but Swara totally bowled over Sanskaar in this one.



"I would challenge you to a battle of wits, but I see you are unarmed" quoting Shakespeare Nimmi. 😲😆



"We are all in the same hell just different levels. Dealing with the same devils just different levels"

^^ This one is lovely ⭐️



The voice - You write poetry as well Nimmi 😲( and it was good😃). You are a gifted writer .⭐️



I thought cam corder part was going to be cute and funny but that part was hell emotional. The whole part was very emotional and bueatiful. Though I laughed at many many points😆. You can't help but laugh at Sanskar's wit. Hope this recording will be a good memory which they will cherish on in their upcoming future. I don't know if you are gonna give us a happy or a sad ending. For me , well I don't usually judge a book by seeing that part. So I always love such an ending which gives a proper justification to the story. And I trust you on that part that u will give a proper closure to Angel. But I would be the happiest one if angel gets a happy ending. 😃



Thanks for this update. It was just such an uplifting delight though at the same time hell emotional too.⭐️



Nimmi for me choosing a fav part is too difficult task😕. I just love angel's every part😃. I just can't. I loved both pre- Swara part ( before her entry), post Swara's part in the story. The priceless phrases and lines throughout the story are too numerous to mention in a review. Though I will jot down a few parts which are my favs( in random order) -



*I just loved that whole Lakshya- hunting and chasing part by gabriel. It was so thrilling and exciting. I have already mentioned that you write action scenes very well. The heart touching part was how gabriel spared lakshya's life and forgiving him at the last moment due to his respect to the guy's father. ❤️



*The time they spent at Dida's house including Swara's training, meeting cool dida😎, and that experimental first kiss😆. Of course I loved how Swara used her self defence skills on spider women.



*There was this chapter in which you told us about the back stories of 3 characters of angel- durgaprasad, rana and Sanskaar. I love that chapter⭐️. All 3 stories were just heart wrenching.




*Sanskaar's training regime with his baba.😳



*That car ride(1st one) is also one of my favs . 😃



*One of my parts is that hospital scene which you also mentioned in this chapter. The first meeting of our angel and kitten was an epic one. Both at loggerheads.😆


*What really touched my heart was where Swara called Sanskaar an angel for the first time when she was in danger😳. It was something like" I am calling god's angel" .



* Of course that recent camcorder part.😃


At the end point I just wanna tell u that you know there is a tiny bit fear for the last chapter inside me, well not really the last chapter,but rather about the end of the story we're coming closer to the problem. I am in just whirwild of emotions. I am totally addicted to angel😊. Reading a chapter of angel has became such a imp daily routine of my life. I know I am being a melodramtic queen and its not even a farewell speech but it is just that I will miss angel terribly 😳. Though I did join the journey at a middle point but my love for your story is extreme. Moreover apart from this thing I did find a very beautiful, witty , lil crazy and such a brilliant friend 😃. Nimmi you are a star⭐️, superstar and roclstar too. You always put me in this big jovial through your PM's. Sorry for being sappy. Hope I didn't over did my love confession😆. I really can't express in words how much I love this story.😳



So yeah anyway finally after this short*cough* little review from me😆,I just wanna Thank you for this chapter. Thank you for reading my review patiently.😆😃



Take care

Lots and lots of love.


Edited by navyasingh - 10 years ago

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