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Posted: 10 years ago
Res...Stalker mode activated again. Will read soon 🤗
Read it twice already. Will unres once i login from my laptop 🤗


Unres Nimmi 🤗...



How can you start there , i thought Maddy is leaving them forever😭 since most of the threat is gone expect Viper. My heart calmed down only when i knew it was temporary😆. But still i already miss Mav, The only consolation is that Gabriel and his kitten in the house alone like old times . The Goodbye sequence was so amazing . Dont let Mav miss out any fun Nimmi😉.


It kitten birthday and her wish is to spend a day with Sanskar. Oh that so sweet😳 . But with Swara ofcourse it going to be life changing. The girl woke him up at 12 not wanting to waste any seconds . The whole sleeping under the stars , i like it too , but as Sanskar said i am not a fan of mosquito's either 😆. So i never slept the whole night there, usually it few hours . Star Gazing is really awesome . If you are in the mood for it .



Chocolate Cake for breakfast, count me in🥳. I loved the whole monologue kind of description about their Love story in the end. It was so beautifully written . I loved every single line in it. Her imperfect, Crazy , impossible love story story need to be written for sure . Also i am going to ignore all the omnious feeling where you said it might not end in happy note, because i need it to end in an happy note😆. I dont want an bow tied happily ever after with little foot notes but i want it to atleast end on an happy note. Still as i said it is my wish as an reader and i would never force you to change anything from what you have planned already🤗.



Swara is in mood for a lot of games today😳, How did Blind tasting end up in Romantic session . Only Swara Bose can do it , i suppose. Poor Sanskar he must have never faced such torture in his life🤣. I absolutely love the quotes game, each quote was so freaking Good❤️. I reread it more than five times already. I loved that game.


Finally the entire journey summarized in one page, how do you do it Nimmi , it was so beautiful⭐️ . I loved reading it, and i will continue to read it whenever i feel like doing so . That was so awesome . 👏



Also about your note🤗 , you can talk about the end as much as you want, i need to face the reality that it ending soon, i cant live in denial even if i want too😭. Also about my favourite part i probably would write an essay on that 🤓 so i will post it later once i finish re-reading it from the beginning which i am going to do soon. And i will post my favourite moments once i finish reading it once again . Pakka . Love ya dear and ofcourse You are the sweetest🤗 .
Edited by NitaReid - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update.
It was a swasan centric update.
Swara's birthday wish was nice. And sanskar accepted it.
After so many fights and hurdles they together got some time for them.
Har kisi ka zindagi ka aagla pal kya hoga, ye tho bata nahi sakta, par jitne pal mile use khobsoorat banana, ye toh Kar sakta hoon.
Swara was playing games with sanskar,
Really loved the whole update
In this story I really loved the love confession of swara. It was a surprise.
Waiting for your next update
Edited by Sakkiyah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing wonderful mind blowing !!!!!
Have no words
Loved the journey of Angel and Kitten 😛

Will be waiting for new update... Plz do pm me also 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was a amazing update.. Cant believe its so long..and i still everyday wait eagerly for your update..dont know what will happen when you will complete this story.. The passion between them is awesome..Waiting for the day Sanskar will accept his feelings and they will become one.. The quote game was mind blowing.. Swara is such a sweetheart..she won at last..Please dont let anything happen to Maddy please.. The whole flashback of the journey till now was heart touching..and beautiful.. My favorite part of the story is the part where Swara caught in between the wire and Sanskar refused to leave..the way you wrote it was absolutely amazing..the whole journey in their paradise is also one of my favorites..infact every moment of them is.. You are absolutely an amazing writer..The way you describe each and every scene is mesmerizing..Cant ever get enough of your writing..Please do keep writing even after completing this story.. Cant wait to read more..Update soon..
Edited by svg98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey nimmi I love stalking thats why I never cmnt on ur FF but for ur Angel I have to open IF id :)...now u r telling me that u r not posting the end here :(...no way plzzz I will die then..I love angel u asked that what is the best memory of angel...my best memory is when our angel & little ragini become best buddies...I just love that chapter :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi,🤗🤗🤗

Loved this update - especially the end - "He loves her. She knows that in her heart. Like she knows how much she loves him. How madly she loves him. No girl as blind or as perceptive as intuitive like a girl in love. Sanskaar loves Swara. Angel loves his Kitten. Someday he will say that himself. And she will wait for that day. Even if it takes an eternity." How sure she was because she had faith in her love.

You asked me to tell you my favourite moment - that is difficult - I have almost one for each chapter (as I said - I had made notes on the same - the scenes / dialogues) - but I shall do one thing - I am going to go back, read the whole FF till this chapter and then get back to you (if I am able to pick😉)

Nyna
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...you narrate all events in their life in one update...thatz was super yaar love the update...waiting 4 the next update...
I love when angel and kitten stay in swaras dida's home...and their kiss in jacks home tht was awsome dr..tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the updates.
Swara is really teasing nd testing our dear Gabriel. Hw much control will he show? He has to break soon.
The games were grt. Nd thnx for the second update. Whole Angels journey is there.


Nw coming to my most fav part, I can't pick a single one, will list them.
1. RP's description of Gabriel's training and how he got the name.
2. Swara entry nd Sanskaar reincarnation, doctor squashed between Gabriel nd Swara.
3. My most fav character, Bozo, after Swasan. Each nd every Bozo dialogues.
4. Gabriel nd Max's convo regarding Lamborgini.
5. Date with Dragon.
6. Training session nd swasan moments in their home.
7. Baby Ragini nd Gabriel reaction aftet first holding her. Their friendship nd Sanskaar's care towards her.
8.Entry of Maddy nd their comradeship.
9. Last but not least, the way u describe each nd every chase or fight scene.

Hush, I can go on nd on.
Edited by Sanavi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
For angel kitten bonding
Ragini sanskar friendship
Maddy shona bond
Bozo was also cute in his way
Most importantly the way you describe every scene
And character
Your genius at what you write
Edited by kritz4ever - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'll edit both my spots today but before that I need tranquilizers to shoot down those two dogs in my neighborhood! Saala itna kaun bhoktaa hai???

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