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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Nimmi🤗
Sorry for my late latifi😳

Oh my my Bozo dear is here. 😃🤪

Shona + bozo= ❤️
Awww. .. what an adorable reunion. 😳

Bozo calls his laptop baby. I can totally relate with this. Mine one is also my jaan. Dare any one harm it.😆

Bozo is really smart cookie⭐️. He knows why his shona called him for. Oh my he is still not over that terrific car drive with "lunatic driver of an assassin"😆. Wait till bozo hears that his shrimp is here with 2 assassin.😉

LOL Bozo's reaction upon seeing Sanskaar was hilarious🤣. Poor guy though. And if that wasn't enough he had to again drive in sanskaar's car. We have a new name for Swara " lady don"😎. He did observed that his shona has changed drastically from the last time he bid her goodbye. Wait till the poor guy realises that his friend is deeply in love with a crazy assassin.😉😆

Bozo's rambling in the car was hilarious. The guy was afraid that his mom doesn't find his magazines.😆

The to and fro between swara and bozo was very funny. The guy was already so afraid and moreover she was threatning him😆 . Just loved their banter.😃


Break failure.. Have to say that the Jack guy is very sharp.😊

Insted of getting worried over their situation I was laughing out loud on bozo's condition😆. Poor guy wouldn't even dare to travel in his own vehicle for some time.


"I am with my Angel. Nothing will happen to me for he is around me."
^^ This was so freaking adorable.😳

The way you turn a paragraph from hilarious to awws and then again back to laughing out loud is truly masterful⭐️. It is like I awwed at Swara's trust upon Sanskaar while laughing at what was happening with bozo.😆

The whole car ride had me in stitches. The whole part was insanely hilarious.🤣

Quick thinking Sanskaar. Well I am happy that all are safe😃. Well not all , bozo is probably scarred for life. The kissing the ground thing he did was so funny.😆

Bozo is an intellegent hacker😃. He easily cracked the code of the website. His that dialouge about SWAT literally cracked me up. 🤣

Bozo is gone and without giving maddy+bozo special combo.😕

So Gabriel is all set for hunting out Jack. This is the 1st time his kitten is not accompanying him since they got onto such situations. Hope she stays safe till them. Well Maddy is there to protect her, but still I am freaked out

I freaking loved that whole fight scene😃. You always write them very perfectly. I actually like this Jack guy, he knew that he can't win from Gabriel but then too he decided to fight till his last breath⭐️. The fight scene was very well written. It looked like true fight of 2 equal person, well Gabriel still had an upper edge. But Jack was also not an amateur, he did broke into Gabriel's defenses. But at the end Gabriel did won. But I am glad that Jack died as a fighter.😳 and also for the fact that Gabriel did grant him quick and painless death😊


Just hoping that Sanskaar doesn't gets a surprise when he reaches their safe house.😳

Now there is this viper guy left. And I don't necessarily have any liking towards him by reading his description. And I am sure I am not gonna like this guy's character.😡

I loved this chapter ⭐️there were so many hilarious bits I just can't even count them all. Avove all I loved that one on one fight between Gabriel and Sanskaar⭐️. Wonderful job as always.👏 Thank you gor this update😃

Do I even need to say this I am waiting eagerly for the next chapter.😳
Have a good day Nimmi😃
Take care
Lots of love🤗

Edited by navyasingh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Machi... 🤗 awesome update re as usual...

Why these two are playing with that innocent soul... That was hilarious... Re...

Soo Gaby finished jack... Then viper entry... Ahh Swara is in danger...

Waiting machi for next..


Loved it...


Lol...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update de do Nimmi miss karing your update.. Jaldi jaldi likho and post Karo..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi...!!
OMG...I just read 54 and 55 together and OH MY GOD...! Chapter 54 was sooo soo brilliant !! I totally get why you might have had a meltdown while writing it. Seriously I can't describe how much I loved it...!! The entire sequence where swara gets trapped in that wire from a bomb and both her and gabriels reactions...! The way he tried every freaking way to save her and when he thought this was it, he hugged her. Gabriel, Gabriel the freaking numero uno deadly assassin was ready to die for his little kitten. Omg if this is not love then what is ?? Dearest kittens angel , you need to wake up and realize how much you love her !!
And again Maddy was the life saver. At the last moment though 😆. I love Maddy. He's adorable.
The way swara slapped sanskaar and then that KISS...!! Man...that was hot or what ??!! It was beautifully written. I could totally understand both their emotions. Nimmi, add more kisses in the future updates please 😆😆 (Runs Away to hide behind A tree).
Then comes chapter 55, our adorable bozo is back...!! Yaay !! Poor guy got caught up in another life threatening situation with swasan 😆😆. I love swara and bozo's friendship and the funny relationship he has with sanskaar is soo much fun to read !!😆
The amount of blind faith kitten has in her angel is overwhelming. She loves and trusts him sooo much!! I love Gabby and his Kitten Nimmi...dont you hurt them okay ?? 😆.
Waiting for another fab update.😳

XOXO
Tuhi.
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Posted: 10 years ago

hi dear,


I couldnt find the chapters till chapter 51.. What happened yaar.. its showing content deleted, even in thread I , its showing same.. Where could i read those chapters.. can u help me plz

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello am new here and wanted to know
Abt ur previous thread updates as it is simply showing content removed and I really want to read your ff from starting so plz tell me wat to do????
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the roller-coaster ride once again, Nimmi!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome..
Bozo..ohh.. this guys is too funny..

Tough fight..
Finally Jack is gone...

continue soon..
Ty for the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
nimmi just one word fir u uare mind blowing...get well soon and stay happyy...😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome dear
loved the way you described the fight scene
Awesome it was
bozo poor soul always lands in trouble coz of his friend swara
finally Jack found
and again Gaby win
One left victor
Thanks for pm
Ritika

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