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Posted: 10 years ago
I know who is that guy so our bozoo is back...im sure maddy n gabby will go mad in his company...n maddy did right by backing off...coz only certain Swara rose can onl invoke such feeling in sanskar n make him loose nobody else can do that...all thanks to maverick talent his bran worked e1 if it during neck of the
moment... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
BOOZOO ...
is he guy..

ohh god !!! just imagine Bozos expression when he meet 2nd assassin..
He will he surely died...

swasan kiss 2nd time..

wow..
Long passonate kiss..

loved it...
Continue soon..
thank u for the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res.. Read it Nimmi. It was awesome. Will unres soonšŸ˜† Love ya and you are the sweetest.


Unres


So finally the Meltdown chapter is here šŸ˜‰, i have been waiting for it since chapter 48 i think . Moving on . I loved this Chapter Nimmi but you said we have only 10-15 chapter max, i am not liking that Angel is going to end soon😭. What am i going to do with out My Angel fix every week . I am not ready to say goodbye to Gabriel , His Kitten and Maddy. I will never be ready for it🄺.


So Swara adds I love you to the morning ritualšŸ˜‰ . Loved Maverick reaction . Poor Sanskar still in denial . So you said genuine smile spread on Maddy face so i am going to believe he is not planning on betraying Angel and his kitten. i will never be able to get over Maddy betrayal , i like him too much .Each chapter as you said my love for him is growing and you cant make him the Villian Nimmi. But as you said i wont ask you to change what you already decided but i am hoping Mav is one of the good guys even if he is an Assasin😊 . Moving on.


Loved Maddy Monolgue about Bow and Arrow, Maddy the Love GurušŸ˜Ž . He even risks everything and offers Sanskar love advice. Poor guy end up eating Sugared Cereal with Salt. Oh i really felt bad for him . 🤣


Loved Swara when she tried to talk with Sanskar about living in denial . He slept on the floor. He is really a mature adult in denial šŸ˜†. Sanskar the mouse. How do you come up with this lines . Swara drag him to the Altar if he keeps living in denial🤣 , i want to see his reaction .



Again Maddy come up with Jack location . And this time two location or else Angel wanted to go solo. Now he is taking his kitten with him . And Swara trips on the wire. I knew this situation would arise when we meet Jack. So Mav knows more about Bombs than Angel. It makes sense the Numero Two is better at something than Numero UnošŸ‘



So Finally i am going to trust Maverick because i like him too much not to do so😃 , his reaction showed he really care for Shona and Sanskar. Loved that Angel refused to leave his kitten . He choose to die with her. If that is not love then i dont know what is😳, stop living in the denial Sanskar. It time to face the truth. Maddy Saves the day again. Honestly he is doing that a lot nowadays. 😲



This is why i love Swara, she does make me feel happy, she takes the intiative. otherwise i dont know how long we would have to wait for there first kiss. Now finally they kissed for the second time . He kissed her as if he would never let her go😳.I loved the entire scene from Swara socking him too, kissing him , to speaking sense and sanskar realizing they are on borrowed time , to the final apology and hug I loved it , 2,3, 4 infinity😳 .



So Sanskar hugged Maddy because he saved his kitten🄳. I love this two brothers . They both better get an happy ending. I cant take a Sad ending Nimmi. So Again we found out jack address, he is being eluding us for so long, i want to meet him soon . Now i think Bozo will be back , cant wait to see his reactions when he finds out Swara loves Angel. i am sure Swara would share it the second she sees him . Poor guy going to be stuck with two Assasins. Bozo used to be my third favourite but now it is Mav all the way. So the competion for the third spot is back with Bozo reentry.šŸ˜†


Do continue soon dear and this chapter was so Good. I loved it . Love ya and you are the Sweetest .šŸ¤—
Edited by NitaMikealson - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update.
Sanskaar is in adult denial mode. Well he should be since he don't how he is gonna manage between his dark side and bright side once he is with Swara. But everything is gonna be alright.
Jack is terrific and dangerous hound. He well planned his actions.
Maddy was the star no Supernova of the chapteršŸ˜†. he rocked this time.

Waiting for more updates Nimmie.
Edited by rose1998 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I know who is he. ... ...If i am not wrong it is BOZO šŸ˜† 😃 šŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh Gosh, fantastic update! Haha Nimmi, you are very naughty, you made Maddy add salt to his sugary cereal and eat it too!!! Yuck!šŸ˜†
So the mighty Gabriel has turned into Sanskar the mouse! Anyways it was on the cards for a long time now! 😃 Loved Swara's advancing steps and Gaby's retreating steps!šŸ˜† Bas pinning against cupboard reh gaya! šŸ˜‰

Awww loved the tense atmosphere there, bomb ticking, death staring, both in embrace, captive trying to persuade the free one to let go and the other one hugging some more! I thought Gaby would confess at that near death moment!

And the kiss...so passionate! ā¤ļø

Looking forward to Bozo the wizard!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
It had all - humour, emotions, arguments nd patch up, hound hunt.
Maddy character is really unique. I like him.
But my fav character apart frm SwaSan is gonna reenter, Bozo.
Waiting for his part. Let's see how he works alongside two Assassins. Want to see his expressions.

Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
AWESOME waiting for Bozo entry
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
I am addicted to this story dear
I wonder what will I do when it ends
swara questioning sanky for his ignorance was very well written
poor sanskar he can handle anything but not his kitten
maddy salt in sweetened cereal poor guy
Gaby the devil to sanky the mouse amazing transformation
Swara tripped on the wire
bomb turned on
Gaby for the first time nervous and fingers shaking
he didn't left swara his kitten he is ready to die for her
finally maddy to reuse
swara attacking sanskar first with hits and then kisses
finally something went into sanky's mind
and finally he called her kitten
even I missed him calling swara kitten
maddy is indeed intelligent
full homework done on Jack
waiting for next


For faces
sasha can be Ada Khan
Jack can be rajat tokas (akber)
For apte what about the man played shaktimaan srry don't remember his name
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...i guess bozo is coming in next update...tfpm

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