FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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Cintila

@Cintila

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#521

My dear angel Nimmi,

This is sooo NOT right ! Your FF is all I can think about these days. Gabriel & his Kitten keep revolving in my head. I open India forums just to check whether you've updated or not 😆 and I am one of the few who read even before you send out the pm's. Your FF is addictive as hell !! Dude...i seriously don't know what would I do once it ends 😭.

Coming to the chapter, who must have thought swara would make her grand confession in the middle of a life threatening gun firing session ?😆. But she's Gabriel 's kitten...anything is possible 😆. I soo soo loved the way she expressed his feelings. And Gabriel 's reaction was 🤣. The way he kept checking whether she was okay lol 😆😆.

I have grown quite fond of Maddy too. He's adorable 😳😆. But i really really hope there's nothing fishy with him 😲.

So Nimmi, I love reading your FF. I really really do and please forgive me if don't comment on every update but I make sure to 'like' each one and comment after every 2-3 updates.

Ow...i really hope you're feeling better now. 😳

Once again...i love you 🤗

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Pearl

@pearl.16

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#522

Hey Nimmi !!

I hope you r well now dear...

Coming to the update...

Chapter 53 was huge !!

I mean I seriously didn't think that our Shona would have made her confession in between a gun firing session !! But this is our Shona she can do anything... Literally !!

And Gabriel's reaction... Omg !! He for the first time missed a shot !! No wonder only our dear kitten has that effect on him...

Swara convincing our dear Sanky about her love n Sanky checking the symptoms if she has gone nuts 😆... Hilarious !! Yet beautiful !!

Even Maddy saw that dreamy kind of look on Swara's face n the moment he mentioned Sanky was like 😲 !!

So... All in all loved the chapter just like ur every update !!

Update soon... Keep me updated...

Keep rocking !!

We all love you...

And yes Get Well Soon 🤗

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Prabhleen Arora

@7APK

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#523

Mind Blowing 😊
Fabulous Update 👏
Sanskar got shot 😲
Swara is in love with Sanskar 😳
Sanskar thought that Swara is Possessed 😆
Lovely Update 👏
Post Next Part Super Soon 😃
Thanks for the PM 😊

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#524

Dear Nimmi,

OMG - I read your entire FF - all chapters from 1 to 53 yesterday, and was too exhausted to comment 😉😉 (I mean boat rides, being shot at, having cars blasted, running from assassins while planning to eliminate others, encounter with a dragon, phew - it is exhausting)

(Now that I am currently not watching the serial - I need to get my SwaSan fix some other way😭)

I am in love ☺️- with Gabriel and Kitten and Maddy too (strictly in that order) and yes baby Ragini (that was sheer brilliance such a cute lovable Ragini).

Your ff has all the ingredients I love - action, romance and humour - actually the humour is the main reason that got me entrapped (loved your Simply Sanskaar - OS - could we have some more of those too - greedy of me - but puchne mein kya harz hai😊)

I was actually making notes of all the lines in each chapter which had me in splits - I was planning to include them in my comment - but then...maybe...

So now count me in for all the rides 😊😊 come hell or high water😉

Nyna

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#525

sanskar took bullets that was in way of swara..

awweee..

she finalyy confessed..

n gabriel was shocked like hell..

He to loves her but doesnt acknowledge it!!!

Ohh God Maddy!!

Funny guy yet very intelligent..

continue soon..

thank for the pm..

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nissi or jesi

@Jess_Ru

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#526

nimmo...sorry sweetheart was busy so couldn't comment...ur a true sweetheart... an Angel ...ur not well but still updating... tc

wat can I say Sasha gone ...now jack but am just waiting for viper...Gabriel-viper must be epic...

a humble plea...pls don't kill mav/Maddy ...usko Zinda rakho yaar...I've got a bad feeling dat he can be killed... but swara should get hurt maybe in coma for few days then gabby will profess his love... kya idea hain na just don't tell dis to Gabriel he will kill me..."looks here and there...and runs away"

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jasw

@jasw

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#527

Awww read both 52 & 53! So Swara confessed!!!! That too in the middle of action! And Gaby missed his target! 😆 Both are nuts!😆

Earlier in ch 52 loved Gaby's restlessnes on bed!😉 Why is she still sleeping so far and not rolling over to this side? To me? Haha ... too much!

You made these two characters so adorable! Can't get enough of them!😊

PS. Just realized that you are not well, take care dear. health is first!

Edited by jasw - 10 years ago

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damon fan

@-damon-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#528

dropped in to say..
i'm yet to read the chap from 50 onwards..
i've a forensic test tomorrow nd pathology test overmorrow..
soo busy as hell..will come on friday..
till then keep writing!!
nd wish me gud luck too..
bbye

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#529

Hey Nimmi you've been giving amazing updates, the story is just getting better and better and not to forget interesting.. I love Swara and Sanskaar's every morning routine and the night routine of Swara cuddling upto Sanskaar i just love it.

Love Maverick and his charming ways. He sure has a great sense of humor and this relationship will go way ahead with Gabriel and Swara.

What a historic moment did you give here.. Swara realizing her love for our hero here but our tough man here is yet oblivious to what he feels for her just hope he realizes it very soon..

I love reading your updates just wish you'd update soon, please do so waiting to read them..

Love,

Kashmi