FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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jess_27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#531

waiting for your update... plz plz plz make the next part super big.. cant wait to read what happens after the grand confession by swara...

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#532

Me is finally here!!!

Okay for a split second I thought Swara is going to experience firsthand pain but then I had sort of forgotten that with Angel lurking around her there is no bullet that will find it's mark on Angel's Kitten. How very stupid of me to even think like that...maybe the exhaustion of past few days have been catching up. You know I have new neighbors with two dogs and all they do is keep barking every now and then. I can't sleep, can't study and can't even roam in my veranda for those two kuttas practically jump over the boundary wall and go all bhow..bhow on me! Kaminey kuttey...I tell you! My head is in splits with searing pain all thanks to those kuttas...in short life ki baji pad hai!

Done with my rants...okay so let me say the tender moments between Gaby and his Kitten was so beautiful. And loved that Shramishtha made an appearance giving us that beautiful mother-daughter scene. So Shekhar could take a bullet and some more for his Mishti...aww...how sweet! And then the most epic love confession. All I can say is PAGLAIT HAI YE LADKI!!!

Goli-baari ke beech isko mohabbat soojh raha hai??? No wonder Sanskaar got the shock of his life and missed his target...and God! He is beginning on five stages of grief already. Denial being the first to grace his doors! And what was that?? Death is practically over their heads and Swara wants break into a happy dance? Seriously what has gotten into her?? I can almost be prophetic and say that Sanskaar will die of a heart attack if Swara keeps up this lunacy for long! Ye ho kya raha hai???

So from trauma to shock to ghost theories? Okay the famous Gabriel has finally lost his head and we have one and only Swara Bose to credit for the same!!! Jiyo mere laal...jiyo! So Maddy is having the time of his life...no wonder this brat was so excited having hitched his ride on Sanskaar's back! But wait a sec what was: He wasn't sure but he thought he has heard something on the lines of.. What is this??? Please don't tell me that my Maverick is a bad guy too! Please my heart would tear into two if that happens...nooo! I won't be able to take that! Aisa mat na karna Nimmo di! Pleeeaaassseee!

So they are back on home territory and Sanskaar is hell bent on greeting Mr. Denial with all logic his already confused head can muster! Four fingers and thumb theory failed: strike one! Harry meeting Sally turned out to be no help at all: Strike two! Baba Bangali and Co. is no help at all: Strike three and Gaby is down! And then comes the realization...he is absolutely right to think that colliding of their world would only mean chaos...one that he won't be able to survive even with his lethal skills. I don't really know what to comment on this...he is right but then so is she! She wasn't looking for love when she pulled him out of the raging sea but that gradually happened and while she is a bit disturbed with his job profile she isn't looking for changing a hair on his head. Isn't acceptance basically love? I don't how much will Sanskaar deny this truth before finally coming to terms with it! God these two...saaley dono paglait hain!

Oh Maddy...Maddy...Maddy my love you do deserve red carpets and dhol and nagadas and flower petals showering on you! Uff I am falling for him more and more with each passing days and no gravity won't hold me up anymore for I am already floating! Haye I love him so much! And see...even he can tell there is a certain glow about Gaby's Kitten...oh Gaby why is it so difficult for you to accept the truth here??

And now we're back to business...Maddy's contract sold him out? Okay this is too much of coincidence here...pleade Di not my Maddy! I would cry a lot if he is a turncoat! Nahi ye nahi hoga, hain na Di??? So after all the brain racking they have reached the point that it wasn't Apte to plant such a massive attack, there is a shadow player who is playing very well so far. I like to know how are they going to move from here, now that the game has taken an unexpected turn. But before that is Jack who with his crazy genius is behind the Numero Uno and his accomplice! Bring it on!

P.S. I know you people are vouching for Karan Wahi as Maddy but I just found my muse in Sehban Azim! Uff ye kukkad kamaal da!

P.P.S. When all this madness ends and when it is revealed that Maddy isn't the bad guy here ( which I am hoping for!!!!) let us have him a PYT going by the name of Shivani! Pretty name, no?

Edited by Meself - 10 years ago

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kamila.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#533

Machi... 🤗 simply awesome... Update... I really enjoyed it man...

Swara is torturing my Gabriel by proposing him.. Once in a minute... 😆

Maddy how he add salt in his sugar cereals... I know man how it'll taste like.. Really yukkk..

That kiss.. Beautiful machi fantabulously written... It was like a poetry... Pleasant to read...

So Maddy tracking jack.. Bozo entry... Yaayyyeee... It'll be more hilarious...

For Sasha... My choice is.. Malliga sheravath...

Love you...

Lol... Take care...

Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 10 years ago

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#534

Awesome update

The love and care for swara was visible in sanskar's words.

He was worried for her life.

But he was not ready for go away from her. He was ready to sacrifice his life.

And swara also wanted to save him.

Their love was selfless.

Sanskar is blessed with a friend like Maddy. He supports him in thick and thin.

It was really a nice update.

Waiting for your next update

Edited by Sakkiyah - 10 years ago

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.FairyDust.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#535

Nimmi 🤗

@note - Well I did go crazy while reading it, so that counts right?

You know how much I loved this! ❤️☺️. Seriously the whole scene was SO beautiful and surreal and

And aapki bhasha main kahun toh, showie Nimmi! I know I haven't commented on like 4-5 chapters but as you call them, cold and its cousins got me 😔. But I AM reading every update and you'll soon get the PMs. Pinky swear 😳

Thankie sho much for the early 😉 and special 😳 update. I've already told you and I am again that I love ya so much ! 🤗

Bed and meds calling . Will come back soon and send you the rest 🤗

Lots of Love,

Doll (bcoz HEY I Love this name so much 😳)

Edited by .FairyDust. - 10 years ago

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 10 years ago

#536

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Nimmi,

Another amazing update:

Maddy wanting to play love guru but decides not to for it means going up against Gabriel (his monologue was 'out of this world' funny 🤣)- not that his intentions did him any good -he did have to eat that salty cereal. 🤣)🤣)🤣)

And I did love Gabriel / Sanskaar's reations to the words "I love you" - he did really turn into a mouse.

Nyna

PS - please do not kill Maddy - he is quite interesting

Edited by Nynaeve - 10 years ago

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#537

Read all the parts together it is awesome 👏
Update soon

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SIMI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#538

nimmi... 🤗
i love this chapter dude ...
kitten's confession,sanskar's confusion and maddy's reaction... 😆
maddy is realy funny..he wants to be the love guru but afraid of gaby..
omg...salty cereals ...seriously yukk ...
then the situation finally came where sanskar couldn't hide his emotions ...
his temporary ignorance just washed away with the feelings of loosing her
so called swara bose became his kitten again .. 😊
btw the epic line of prem chopra and shakti kapoor was so funny .
kitten as bandit queen and sanskar the mouse (only his kitten can say this on his face ) lol... 🤣
then the nail biting moment ...
thank you maddy ...well that was fun...because due to that extended time our guy showed his love .
and then after getting punch from kitten ...they kissed and kissed again. 😳
aww well if maddy 's call was not there it could have been thrice ...lol
maddy got the way to get the address from microchip...then comes hacking
yehhh Bojo is back again...haha...i cant stop myself laughing ..(Bojo with 2 assassin ..lol)
looking forward to the next story ...
(ya i know all good things end one day ,angel will also (but i will miss this a lot
😕 ,well i want a short update (a para is fine ) about maddy's past..and lovy-dovy swasan moments,,,but i know you are better person to know what to put in it and what not...that's why i love you ... 😊 )
plz update soon...
love,
simi 🤗

p.s.-well for me shasha was always Madhura Naik ...but it depends on you .Btw i think you will post a character sketch at the end.that's superb.

Edited by simsen23 - 10 years ago

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Teddy94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#539

Nice updates.. 😊 swara realised hr love..
And sanskar is confused..
and the bomb.. Sanskar didn't leave his kitten 😳
And the kiss... 😳
Update soon... Waiting for sanskar to say I love u to his kitten..
Thanks for the pm 😊

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 10 years ago

#540

Loved the update, just the perfect combo of emotion humor and action..

Absolutely loved how Swara blasted at Sanskaar for being so prickly and distant ever since she had confessed her love for him.. And his hilarious reactions to it.

Maverick is one charming guy and is smarter then Sanskaar in the love department I'd say, he was smart enough to discover that love between Swara and Sanskar. I absolutely adore his theatrics he is fun to read, full of drama and humor I love his character and I equally love bozo am looking forward to his entry and his moments with Swara and Gabriel. He earlier had to deal with Gabriel only and now he has two Assassins to deal with it'll be a roller coaster ride for sure I look forward.

The selfless love that these two have between them is so so beautiful, she shoved him away to keep him alive and he stuck on to breathe his last with her just beautiful and perfect. And the kiss is imprinted on my mind, the passion and desperation just came across to me it was palpable could feel it.

Wish you'd update fast can't wait to read the next update Nimmi you're a gem of a writer believe me.

Love,

Kashmi