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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update..
Sanskar is so awesome he could literally sense that the door was latched..
Swara is so cute..she knows something is changed..is she still not able to feel that she has feelings for Sanskar and same with Sanskar too..why are they resisting their feelings..
Maddy is awesome he literally is so cool and brings a light of mischief in their otherwise complicated and dangerous life..
Please just don't let any anything happen to Maddy..i don't know why but i have a feeling that something may happen to him..
Wish so everything gets sorted soon..
Cant wait to read more..
Update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
As usual awesome update dear
but plz take care of yourself
take proper rest

Felt bad for the trio
lucky maddy
thanks for sanky
the convo between sanky and maddy was fun
maddy's dialogue were awesome
maddy lazy boy
sanky and swara saying the dialogue and poor maddy
the bed sharing
sanky wants swara in his arms
again trio in danger
hope everything go well
Edited by mishrialways - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

oh god MADDY is🤣🤣 such a drama queen but loving this drama queen too much
poor him didnt even got a nap break and jack is here to electrocute him by his own door "no justice"😆😆

and gabriel really have eagle's eyes and Einstein's brain thats why he is THE BEST,THE NUMBER ONE

maddy watching chick-flick and even cries over them🤣 oh what has kitten done to gabriel now im really looking forward to their meeting with ran more than anyone else and his reaction over gabriel😈😆 oh poor poor maddy and his bhojpuri movies dialogue🤪🤪
awww angel was so w8ing desperately for the "sweet torture"😉 yayyy😃😃

Action in the end... and a cliffhanger 😲😲 but i know our numero uno and second to him will win this also😳... so looking forward to further update🤗
love u 🤗
Edited by mystery75 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read the whole 4 chapters in one go..
Nimmi 🤗 awesome dear
Mav is a fav characterisation, I'm loving him so much..
Sanskar dropped him in garbages😆
I was enjoying so much..
He wanna punch Mav for kissing hands of his kitten
Swara annoyed and her dialogues🤣
Mav took them with him, SwaSan room sharing 😳
the fight for couch🤣
that morning me sweet torture☺️
and Mav the early riser 🤣
wanna kiss Sanskar's hands and giving him proposal😆
I am loving this trio so much..
Then that Sasha's entry.
this lady pissed me off.
Swara was jealous.
Sanskar is the smarty😎
His theory was awesome.
Sanskar has only eyes for his kitten..
the ending was so thrilling.
I love actions and this time Swara took the charges!

A big congo for completing half century🥳
More to come!
a big sorry for late comments.
Off to next chapter.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Another nice update... Now jack is after them..
Get well soon n take care of ur health.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi 🤗

I hope you are felling better. Get well soon dear.😊
And you should take some rest na.😔

Nimmi even if you are not well you did gave us such a brilliant update as usual.😃

So the trio is back to maddy's safe house and the danger strikes again. They didn't even get a proper break.😆

A big salute to sanskaar's observational powers. Nothing can escape from his watchful eyes. He even observes the minutest of the details like position of the doormat.😃

Thank god sankaar saved maddy at the very last moment. This time he saved maddy's life.

This Jack guy is really very smart and cunning🤓. Well not as smart as our angel. But still very smart.

So finally they are back to mumbai. Will we get to see bozo once more? Could he be used as a bait for swara?🤔

I loved it how maddy was cribling about unfairness of the world. He is so damn funny and a total drama queen🤣. But Nimmi they do deserve a break. Poor guys.😆

In this chapter you raised many points I had in my mind which I also mentioned in earlier review. Maddy's inabsorvance while he was served a spiked drink, how amateurish plan sasha made by inviting her own doom into the house, and her ego issues.👍🏼

The banter between sanky and maddy was hilarious. Sanky was ar his sarcastic best and maddy was as usual goofball.🤣 Maddy's outrage about the unfairness was so damn funny. I almost forgot that swara was standing there with them until she spoke.😆


[When he declared in front of Sasha that he has already seen paradise; he meant it. It feels like paradise when his kitten cuddles up to him.]
^^ Nimmi this was ❤️

Maddy was watching When harry met sally on tv. Well I wasn't surprised like sanskaar. That movie is a laughter roit. One of my favs. You didn't include that popular men and women can't be friends theory. 😆

Swara and sanskaar saying that movies dialouges was lovely❤️. That was my fav part of the chapter. Gabriel you are turning mushy yourself. But I also liked maddys reaction here

And that bhojpuri movies dialouge just cracked me up🤣. Maddy is a gone case.🤪

They again shared a bed.😃

And how sanskaar was yearning for so called "sweet torture" and was waiting for her to roll on his side. And like hearing his thoughts swara rolled towards him and snuggled against him☺️

Maddy got a call from his contact. You have maintained such a suspense regarding this character. Is he acting as some sort of double agent or what? But anyways I adore him. 😳

At the end if the chapter you included my fav action part. This jack guy too really has no ethics at all. 😡
You included so many things in a single chapter dear - humor, action , romance.👍🏼



But Nimmi dear that is a completely evil way to end a chapter.😆

And needless to say, I'm excited for the next update


I'm also worried though*bites nails anxiously*.😳

Thank you this update
Take care🤗
Get well soonish

And lots of love❤️


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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi 🤗
take care of your health and get well soon dear.
You are the sweetest 😳 giving updates while not feeling well.
Hats off girl!👏
Coming to the chapter,
Again it was a fantastic one
Jack joined the game too.
Sanskar saved Mav and Mav's expressions👍🏼
the acting part was so beautiful..
Sanskar enacted so well..
I can imagine it by your decription❤️
Mav's bhojpuri movies name 🤣🤣
then back to sweet torture moments, Sanskar's brain lost to his heart..
the hunting started again, cliffhanger!
But I'm loving this suspense..
waiting for next..
Lots of love.
take care dear.❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Nimmi !!
Please take care of yourself !! Get well soon dear..
And it's completely alright if u can't send the pms... Hum toh waise bhi kaha tumhara peecha chodenge !!😉
Coming to the chapter !!
The chapter was awesome as always !!
Gab n Mav in action mode together.. Well now that would be a treat to read !!
Update when u r well... Take care dear...
We all love you !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey nimmi!
Get well soon and take it easy dear!
Okay so i adore the bromance in this chapter and i just really hope you have no twists and turns regarding maverick and that the guy lives till the end of the story being the character he currently is..aaand harry met sally! Ah youve hit a classic there XD
Looking forward to the next chapter and wishing you the best :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
@Banjaaran
Nimmi,,
Males have never shown their emotions well. Shamefulness, fearful of not being masculine/manly enough. Palana Posana or genetics. Don't know. You have the pen in your hand to change it in your story. So, More bromance please! Luv and hugs. Alex
Edited by alex1 - 10 years ago

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