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Posted: 10 years ago
Res. Read it and i loved it Nimmi But will comment tonight. currently on my mobile.

Sorry For the Late Unres Nimm🤗


Sanskar protecting Swara from the incoming attack by being her shield. 😎Wow i loved it dear, How he didnt even let one glass piece hit her but got hit instead , ofcourse he is her guardian angel . Then i liked how he ensured her safety first then went to fight. So our Gabreil can shoot to kill even by the sound of the shots ,that pretty impressice, he is Numero Uno for a reason 😉



Then when he went back for the headphone i thought it was for Swara but it was for Ragini, i love their friendship . Me too very impressed with Sanskar actions just like Swara 👏. The way he locked the room and said no one will enter it if he can help it and he is helping it you are safe and you will remain safe , somehow i liked this line a lot .


Loved Dida and Swara convo.. And Dida accpetance at the end and hoping she have a good life just like she did was good. And Garbriel keeps his word , i liked that no one bayed for his blood especially after the danger they have been through . I was worried Adarsh might actually punch him when he finds out.

I know it is Gabreil and Swara story and hence our most welcomed guests have to leave but it was still bit Sad that the family Sanskar got through Swara is leaving so soon. i loved all of their good bye, be it Adarsh warning inspite of being scared ,Dida warm gentle accpetance and her trust . Parineeta friendship , but most importantly his sweet good bye to his best friend, i liked how he asked if he could carry her and i love Pari when she immediately handed Ragini over to him😊

So they left with a promise to return soon and they were attacked by someone who escaped Gabriel bullet ,he must be a fool, he should have just trailed them and asked for backup instead of trying to fight him alone. So Maverick is the first to make an entry, i thought he will the last one we see , since he is Numero two afterall. I liked his entry.



I know you have already uploaded the next chapter, i want to comment before i read it since i want this comment to be purely for this chapter without the influence of next chapter. so that it for , i am off to read the next chapter now Nimmi .🤗







Edited by NitaMikealson - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Machi...big Jhappi... My mobile is hanging so small comment..

Mind blowing yaar... That kiss... Was broke by bullet... You are a killer...

I'm happy that no one was hurt... I was touched by Sanskaar act towards Ragini... That head phone re..

So maverick is on attack...

Lol... Love yaa...
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res..Awww its okay i know will surely undo the damage..Cant wait to see them come back to this house..or say their paradise..to complete their love story..

P.S. sorry little busy at the moment so leaving my comment incomplete but after reading your message that too just for me couldn't stop myself from replying.. U r truly a beautiful writer..i just love reading your story..

I am Pia..
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Edited by svg98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi...
The attackers were part of apte's man..but then maverick came
the 1st hound.
Well i was in shock when attacks were going on..
Their home,their love nest
but thankfully baby ragini,dida,adi and pari all are safe and went from there.
Aww gaby is an angel..using headphone for baby,such a kind hearted man
then the way he protected his kitten.
I am sure swara will go mad when she will see his injured body...
They are so much in love ... 😳
max will help them,thats sure...
But maverick...the no.2 ..he does not give me a strong sense of danger,but may be he is very dangerious.
Well plz update soon dear
very very excited
love
simi 😊
Edited by simsen23 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow... The way u write ur story it's awesome..
Maverick?? Is he helping Gabriel??? I dbt it...
Waiting eagerly for the nxt update..
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
whoa 👏.so one of hounds made an entry ..my gut feeling says marviek saved them because he didnt like his target taken over by some one ..are u going surprise us with some twist😲

Glad that family accepted sanskaar without much drama and good they are being packed off back ..it would have been tough for him to save all of them with danger lurking around them ..and they didnt protest swara being with sanky ..😊

I loved the line when he said Our Home..they will back in end and would be setting up their paradise their😳 but before that guess action part is here ..would love to see gaby along with kittne taking on one by one

another cliff hanger nimmi...Should get used to them I guess😆

awesome like always 👏.👏.when is wednesday coming??😲

Edited by lucky.m - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
okay i know i own you comments for the last few chapters...
so lets see...i know i gave you some comments for the one with the 3 so called protagonist and their back stories, which were brilliant. it gave so much sense into what their characters really were and their actions. right from DP's promise to AP to keep laksh away, which RP later used to Baba's own story of not saving his daughter, or getting her justice and then his wife's illness, him finding a child again in sanskar, his child bring the father out in him and then finally sanskar, whose mother had been trapped in a relationship by their so called friend who had killed his father and was beating her for his existence and her love. growing up in such environment, it is amazing that sanskar still has so much ability for love despite his skewed perception of right or wrong. and then the hounds are unleashed

what an introduction to each hound. it feel so like a hollywood movie. i have said this before and i say it again. fantastic. maverick, viper, black widow and Jack. so the charmer is here. why do i feel that the viper and black widow might attack in the end...i just hope they don't attack together.
and sanskar starts preparing for war

loved how swara instantly realised who was the real threat for her, in context of sanskar, just as he realised who the real threat was, from the perspective of his kitten. so the knives are out for target practice and his kitten is at it. she blow the microwave and shows in one new talent of repairing electronic gadgets, i hope this will come to use later on. while he focused on her self defence...that was such a right now. she needs it now more than ever because she is very much a part of this as he is. he will be there to protect her as much as he can...but with his profession he can make no guarantees and he would leave her safety to chance. what love ...though not realised yet

and so they begin practice together. he is being the slave driver that his baba was...feels his baba will love her and she will love him. and she lets it slip that if he is anything like her angel, she will 😉...loved their new form of pushup...they are already like a very much in love married couple. and they get into pillow fight and we have didi and ady mentioned.

well think of them and they are here...and ragini as 11 month tyke! that was a brilliant stroke. i had such a doubt that ragini was going to cry with swara and take to sanskar. loved how you showed us that he held her like a grenade. 😆 and then he is bonding big time with ragini and with dida.. and died is hitting on sanskar 😆 making swara wake up to her emotions. and then that brilliant kiss 😃 😳 👏
...and then the scientific experiment. the things these two do 😆 😆

well their kiss is stopped and glass shattered and the man is in action. he is so thoughtful with those headsets...this family seems loony and yet rock solid. so they are back on the run...away from their home...and they encounter the first of the hounds. maverick...who i am sure might try to hit on swara in a nice way before being blasted off by sanskar. i know gabriel is still a lone solider leaving aside his now joined to hip kitten, but is there any chance for partners for him? you know like maverick? he is #2 so chances are less, but personality wise he seems like vile than the others.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Maverick v/s gabriel waiting for the story to unfold
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Nimmi ,amazing chapters ,I have read through all of them ,loved them all a lot dr👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice..
Gabriel saving his family..
every one accepting sanskar in their family..

loved it..
Maverick!???

why did he shoot the attacker!!!
thank u for the pm..
continue soon..

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