FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149) - Page 35

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi...
What an update!!!
Well first i was not happy about that sangini before reading the chapter .
But what a surprize... 😊
oh who cant be happy with a 11 month old kiddo raguu...
She likes sanskar .wow atlast swara saw a fatherly side of him..
Lol sanskar's initial expression and thoughts about the baby..lol 😃
swara's motherly side is also felt by him...
Gabriel is a part of their family...thats so sweet
Dida is such a sweetheart...
And then that scientific check cum kisss wow...
My swasan.. 😊
but why shattered...God plz save the family...and my swasan
update soon dear

love,
Simi 😊
Edited by simsen23 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi!🤗 you awesome or what!
previous chapter was so enjoyable(finally met Swara, the rogue!) and I am eagerly waiting for meeting when Sanskaar will take Swara to meet his Baba!! 😃
and this one, I was ROFLing throughout this chapter , I think on each dialogue!
Dida's reaction to Sanskaar and her secret!! 🤣 Sanskaar's thoughts! 🤣 I imagined him holding Raagini and burst into laughing! 🤣 🤣
but This line!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Could you do that again? Strictly for
scientific purposes of course. That is
to check if I can feel any human
emotions. Pure science. Nothing else" 🤣 🤣
(I knew that kiss scene is on the way after Dida's talk but to be honest, I didn't expected this reaction.😆 )
and The Kiss between Swasan, *whoot*.
And then you shattered all my excitement with your shattered line. *huff* :| :|
Hope, nothing wrong happened there.
Update soon Nimmi, really soon.
Edited by TRPS - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
What. Ragini is a 11 month child nd Sanskaar as in Gabriel is babysitting her. Wow, I didn't imagine it could ever happen.
Loved Sanskaar's conflict when he was handed Ragini. He compared a baby with a hand grenade nd wld be comfortable with the latter. Hw ironic for an Assassin.
Dida is an unique character with an equally unique love story. Hw easily she commented on Swara's lifestyle which became a catalyst in our SwaSan first lip lock.

Coming to the kiss, it was really out of the blue. Even I was surprised, toh sanskaar ki kya halat hogi. Bdw, I didn't knew Kisses r used for scientific research. Seriously these two r limits.
But they got the hang of it nd had a passionate kiss. 🥺

But why their moment broke? Hope danger is not near.

Keep writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
11 months old Ragini!!!🤣🤣.
Goshh!! For a few minutes it wa hard to digest..
Poor Sanskar!!😆😆.. The way he held Ragini for the first time. It had me laughing holding my tummy!!🤣..
Btw.. The next part which I loved was the end..😳
Swara pecked Sanskar on his lips!😳
And then they kissed☺️ for scientific reasons?!😆
But the moment shouldn't have been shattered!! We besharam people want more of it!😛😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww that was beautiful...
But wait !!! What happened next ?? I wanna know now !!!
Please update soon !! I wanna know what happens next !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome..
swara awkwardly introducing sanskar to her family...

sanskar and ragini-- best buddies.
complaining about swara..

wow...
and then the last part!!
surprise surprise!!!
SwaSan kiss...

hope everything is fine..
continue soon..
thank u for the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice updates.. Eagerly waiting to knw wat happens nxt..
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aweee gawwd in lakshya style! That was cute...I wonder what went wrong after the last few lines? Continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Ragini ne entry maari. When I read your note I was like...what will be her role in the story...but she is a kiddo. That was cute...Sanskaar is ragini's best person and the scene where he makes her sleep by reading story to her was cuter and asorable. Well last part ke baare me main kya kahu. Fantastic...👏

Did also deserves a round of applause...

keep it up Nimmie.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Shattered ..What does that mean?? how can you nimmi ..how?aise cliff hanger ..kyu??..I just hope it some one from family not any of 4 hounds...It was such a perfect moment ..their kiss though strictly for *ahem*..scientific purposes😳😆

When you said sangini ..I was like ab ragini kaha se aagyi but you could not have made ragini more sweeter atleast in your angel .11 month old kiddo😆

Good adarsh and pari has Some lines in your FF😆 and dadi was like super awesome ..good taste in Men😆😆

More shades of sanskaar ..loving them ..and of course his girl..kitten

with every update loving angel more and more ..superb update ..when is next part coming...??? waiting

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