FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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Richa

@navyasingh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#371

Hi Nimmi dear🤗

Yayyy so our angel is back in action. I was missing all the action part . I just love action scenes and was waiting for them. And you write them so perfectly.👍🏼

So I guess the interruption is caused by apte's or rana's mens. What a bad timing they have. 😡

Loved how angel protected and sheilded his kitten from any harm. How he reassured her and ensured her safety😃

That action sequence was good. It was my fav part.

I am really in awe with gabriel. It was really touching how He assured that ragini kiddo's ears were covered so that she won't freak out by loud voices. What an angel😊

This line was so perfect

"There is Sanskaar and then there is Gabriel. Both are perfect in their own ways. And together they made this perfect Angel."

We can see the ruthlessness of gabriel on attackers while at the same time we can see the care and concern sanskaar has for those who he now considers almost as a "family".

Poor swara. She must be felling very guilty for dragging her family into this mess. Moreover she is not able to disclose them anything about this current situation.😔

Thank god swara's family is safe and no one was harmed.😳

Can I say how understanding swara's family is. She is lucky to have such a loving family. Who says blood is thicker than water it doesnt seem like that in this case. I mean they didn't even once blamed sanskaar for leading them into such situations. Dida knows swara very well inside out after all she is her own reflection.😆

So you gave us that scene where adarsh was telling sanskaar in a big bro manner to keep his sis safe and happy😎. Thank you for writting it. I was kind of waiting for it.😆

The farewell was really touching❤️. Hope that newly formed best budies will meet again.

Glad to know that sanskaar considered that house as their home and he also said that they would return there.⭐️

This night doesn't seems to end🤔. Again they are attacked.

So we have our 1st hound here. And it is Maverick😲. Wasn'T expecting his entry at this point. I have few theories upon why he saved sanskaar . But lets see how the drama unfolds now. Btw he seems to be quite a drama queen. Will he try to flirt with swara. Well good luck there mate . Poor poor him.😆

Thanks for writing this story. It just keeps on going better and better.😃

Waiting eagerly for the next part.

Don't make us wait too long.

Thanks for this update.

Take care🤗

And love u

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Jamina Mohammed

@Snowflakes.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#372

Yet another masterpiece of you..
Maverick 😲 😲 I think he himself want to finish our Angel of Death. But you're wrong it's Swara's Angel you can't do that so easily. Nimmi siso Can I get another update today plz consider my request dear ❤️

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

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Posted: 10 years ago

#373

Very engaging update dear

the house attacked and Gaby saved swara by covering her with his body

swara's family trust sanskar for swara's life

swasan attacked again

Maverick found them

Hey just a request can we get faces for the hounds

thanks for pm

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anuja

@princess2791

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Posted: 10 years ago

#374

Hello sorry for late reply dear. First what a super bike ride there full movie scene i visuallise it. Then training by gabriel to his kitten finally gabriel start to his feeling for swara. Then whole family scene are soo sweet and cute. You are really mind reader. I always want a situation that will help to realize there feeling for each other and you gave us mind blowing sweet kissing scene. Your are great. And finally war is began. Waiting eagerly for next update. Please update soon. Thanks for pm.

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hrni

@hrni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#375

Thank for saving dida's family...awesome story... 😆

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

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Posted: 10 years ago

#376

Chapter 35

Seeing that quote made one thing absolutely certain, today someone is all set to die...either figuratively or literally. And then you have Angel of Death coming in carrying that message can you actually believe that he'll miss his mark? Gaby is back in full glorious Technicolor! And boys what a sassy entry...now tell me Nimmie...how can I not love this man to the moon and back??? Best predators are those who wait and wait with deadly precision and this one is cut from that cloth that makes him the best...what am I supposed to do with him> huh?

That entire breaching of the perimeter kicked me out of my slumber and made me see that awesome-sauce blockbuster dhamaka in front of my eyes...how plain awesome was that...from the moment where he dived into the sea to eyeing the unbreakable Maheswari Mansion...total seeti maar that was...like a cult classic movie playing out on itself with finesse and intrigue. BRILLIANT!!! Something about Gaby boy here...he is someone who thrives, survives on challenges and would not move ahead unless he is met with life threatening resistance, this is what I am talking about...men like that...not the boys you usually get in fictions but men who earn both respect and fear. No wonder this Gabriel is so feared and adored, Rana really molded a steeled predator into a double edged knife that can both kill and inspire in a second.

Next that amazingly accurate and brilliant detailed description of the battle arena that you so profoundly drew up...I can swear that I had been jumping up and down with glee like a four year old...how do you manage to spin such brilliant stuff sweets? The guns roaring and that explosion and on top of that Gabriel smirking! I'll have an angina dearie!!!!

And the predator found his mark, damn his swagger...Gaby behaved as though he was taking a stroll in the garden rather than out to hunt. What an attitude man! Why can't God make men like him in reality?? I am not asking for sun, the star and the moon here, just a Gabriel perfect to T of your description...that isn't much now is it? And I knew he would spare Lakshya for let's face it, he isn't worth the great man's time and effort. So Lucky survived the hands of this predator only to have another leap in its place! Not even in a million years could I have expected Ram to take on the role of Ravan!!! What the hell did just happen???

Chapter 36

Ram Prasad Maheshwari: that professor is capable of killing someone? How on earth did this happen and how could I not see this coming? It was always there...you had hinted at it subtly and yet...where are you my Sherlock brain?? Gone with the wind, eh? So Ram played his trick at the very end because he wanted to eliminate both the chosen heir and the fallen prince. Well played professor!! I have to give you that. So indeed he turned out to be the knife that cuts the deepest and hurts the most! Who would have thought the very man everyone dismisses to be a saint like figure is actually cut from a tougher and not mention diabolical material.

And in act worthy of Oscars how easily he made Apte believe it was indeed Gabriel, setting the loyal dog after a lion of the jungle. Lord knows how this one is going to go!! I, for one, am scared for sure...Ram seems to be hiding more monster up his sleeves...I am refusing to believe that this is going to be end in any way! Go ahead Nimmie, shock me more!

Aww so Gabriel, no scratch that, Sanskaar parts way with his Kitten...that was amazingly heart-wrenching. He is right when he says his darkness will overwhelm her, drowning her to pit she doesn't belong to. My question to you is how come a man covered in muck of the abyss still holds a heart that is all golden?? I am amazed to see this side of him as well. Feeling bad for this Kitten girl for she is so obviously attached to him. And she hugged him like I would have wanted her to and surprise there! He doesn't flinch but is blissful...if this isn't thawing I don't know what is! That was really a heart-breaking end to otherwise action-packed and beautiful update!

Chapter 37

Thank heavens that Gabriel acknowledged that Swara's absence has created a vacuum that he might not be able to fill anytime soon! Do I smell that age old saying that goes by Mohabbat Buri Bimari?? And before he could indulge deeper in his thought comes a blow, literally!! So Apte is there compromising his hideout with solid punches all thanks to the mad rage that is built inside of him! That detailed scene where Gabriel thwarts Apte's attempt of hitting him with casual grace was the perfect sized cherry on delicious, delicious cake!

And then comes the sour part for Gaby to swallow. Lakshya is dead and he is the one on whose head the sword of death is hanging for a while! I wonder how long before Gaby finds out who is the one behind Lakshya's untimely departure and precisely who hates him so much to drag him to the line of fire! I am so sure of Gaby's faculties that I have no iota of doubt that he will take away the dough, the cake, the bakery and the baker in a casual galloping of things but as of now things are not that clear and he needs to be on the run.

Marma Vidya? Is it even for real? I have heard about Kalari and its deadly accuracy in killing its victim but Marma Vidya...hmm guess will have to Google it and find out what is this lethal hold Gabriel exercises his control over! Anyways the danger is diverted, for now! Only time will tell how well his fares.

So the next one in line is Swara. I have to give it to Gaby, his instincts are dangerously sharp he immediately sensed that the danger he diverted had gone his Kitten's way and yes the phone rang! Oh and poor Swara, she probably is someone who hates those quintessential goodbyes. Her desolation was enough to prove the fact. The internal monologues that you've provided each character with is simply amazing. It shows instead of telling and that is so pristine and pretty. I am losing out on words here sweetie! If I could, I would smash myself through my laptop screen and engulfed you into a bear hug!

So Swara has Gabriel's instinct rubbed on her and can fend for herself for a while. Cool! She has made her move and Gabriel is set to make his. But alas in between we have those five scoundrels to take in. God the second she was caught and was being pounded, I had all sort of gruesome images being sprawled over my eyes. Thanks god Gabriel made a time entry or else I don't even wish to chart that fearsome territory. But then this hell cat had to give it back, ah that mighty kick...I am happy now! And then of course, in a blink of an eye, Gaby's Kitten was safe and sound..Just the way he would want her to be. Yes she has a few cuts and bruises but then she is alive and kicking and most importantly is with him!!

I could almost feel that gush of torment that must have washed over Gabriel. His precious little Kitten was hurt and hurt in a manner that he had not thought possible until a few moments ago! Something vital in him has snapped open to let this girl in and now there is no turning back. His guilt at having left her guard-less and vulnerable speaks volume about this curious sea-change glowing over him. I honestly am at loss of words here...how to reply to something as poignant and beautiful as this one? The emotions are creeping into their skin and we are left to marvel and savor this extremely tender moment. I don't think I have enough words left in my bag to let you know how I feel, especially after this one sub-conscious declaration of what his Kitten means to the man in talk!

I am loss of words Nimmi, will be back soon!!

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TRPS

@TRPS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#377

Nimmi! 🤗
Pheww!! all are safe but not home...hope, Gaby didn't get hurt in that mess!!
err!! I don't believe this new guy who just made an entry. that awesome line, you were talking about him or Swara??? well! me on the side of Swara!
again saying, how thoughtful caring Gaby's actions are!!!
Swara defines his personality with her monologues so well and vice versa!
let's see how Swasan will deal the situation now!
Update soon Nimmi!

Edited by TRPS - 10 years ago

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nida

@mystery75

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Posted: 10 years ago

#378

ohhh

so now the real WAR begins😈

cant w8 for THE ACTION

and GABY'S awesome monologue...just love his actions and monologue😆

1st hound is my fev among them MAVERICK but not more than GABRIEL 😉

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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#379

Can't get enough of your updates

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Purbi

@Purbishona

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#380

Nimmi 🤗
chapter 46
what a surprising entry of Ragini😆😆
Nice bonding between SanGini😳
Sanskar is a ladies charmer, and his monologues hilarious😆😆😆
he did a good job of babysitter
AdRi were cute..
Dadi is so modern, I am liking her character, giving kissing lessons to Swara..😆😆
SwaSan kiss OMG ☺️ another surprise in your bag.. I love surprises..😳
Sanskar lost all his controls this time..

chapter 47

The magical moment broke by the guns
Sanskar protecting his kitten with his body, he loved her so much.😳
Then the hunting started, I loved the actions
the whole family was so good
Sanskar's care for baby Ragini, putting headphones , so touching..
you deserve an award for your magical writing..
Now Maverick arrived, one of the hounds.
Lets see what is in store for us!😃

Edited by Purbishona - 10 years ago

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