FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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Saumya

@Saumya2102

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Hi Nimmi!

I must be an alien to you as I have never commented on your story here on IF. Well as you know Jami used to post your story on Facebook but she had not updated since a long time. She had once told me that you post it here and I finally found this story a week back and now finally I caught up with you! I really really love your story!! Action, Romance, Thriller and some comic monologues. Just the thing I wanted! Gabriel and Kitten.. Goshh I love them more than I love the show wala SwaSan. Chapter 37 was so beautiful. It really melted my heart the way Sanskar held her pinky finger and slept on floor beside her. And yaa.. can I get PMs please?

Loads Of Love

Saumya

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

heartfelt update u wrote there with all the emotional drive for apte and swasan...hope apte comes to his sense soon and think with calm mind...tfpm

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iykyk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Nimmi...🤗

Words fail me to convey that how absolutely amazing a writer you are. The utter beauty with which you have penned down the chapter have left me speechless. The action, reaction, emotion, expression... everything was to the point. Swara's sorrow, fear, anger, hysteria and finally her breakdown... It was flawless; sheer excellence.

Gabriel's confusion, anger; Sanskar's horror, rage, concern, guilt, love, affection... each and every emotion was depicted beautifully.

The way Sanskar took care of Swara and let her hold his little finger while sleeping was truly heart-warming. It was a marvellous combination of innocence, love and affection. And the lifelong promise he made to her just doubled the beauty of it.

Such a tender and heart-warming update. I'm still cocooning in the warmth that your words created. Such was the effect. The utter beauty of the magic that you have created with your words, have left me wanting more.

I'll be waiting to relish more of this awesomely wonderful work of yours Nimmi. Continue soon. Can't wait to read more. Thank you so much for the pm.

Lots of love ❤️🤗

Ashi.

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

This part was everything. Action in its best form and some really heart touching warmth in between. The last scene left me in a warm puddle! It was so heart melting! So he has finally decided on something, there is no turning back.

Continue soon Nimmie dear!

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Akshdeep Kaur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

SWASAN..!!!!! <3

Loved ittt!!! 😃 this update had everything at its best...from the fighting scene btw Gabriel and Aapte - those 5 men to Swara and Sanskaar heart touching moments...they were fabbb...❤️ ❤️

I have no words for this update..!!its amazing!! 👏 👏

It starts with SwaSan missing each other, goes to 5 unknown dangerous people coming in uninvited, Gabriel saving his Kitten, taking care of her and finishes with really beautiful SwaSan moments... They were so CUTEEE...

Aapte just attacked our Gabriel out of no where, but I understand his anger, he lost his babu, his Saabji's son who he was supposed to take care of and protect... But our Gabriel didn't do anything so don't attack him :(...

Gabriel understood that there is something wrong, and someone is trying to frame him, bit whoever he is doesn't know Him entirely, hopefully Gaby will fine the killer soon and get himself out of this mess..

Before going he also showed sympathy on Lakshya's death...

Swara is in problem so who is the first person she should call?? Her Angel of course.. Lol.. 😆

Cuz he will always come to her no matter where he is... So much love.. 😃

:( Swara got hurt 😭 but she also figured back and waited for Sanskaar to come and save her..

Their hugg..!! <3 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

And Sanskaar's promise to never leave her alone... ❤️

Their intertwined fingers are just like their destines, connected to each other...

You r an awesome, mind blowing, amazing writer.. 👍🏼 🤗

I always wait for your pm and I am always so excited to read it as soon as I can...

You r one of the best writers here on this forum... 😃

Continue soon, cant wait for more such updates...

Aksh xxx 🤗

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foresight

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

i am really happy that sanskar realised fairly quickly what the game really was. and that swara would be in danger. it was nice to see swara being so sharp and alert in this one thanks to sanskar. she has grown a bit from the naive think later act first girl, though she does act when in punching the person. i liked sansakr's righteous anger at her bruises...both are so in love with each other already and yet i don't think that is the word they are ready to use just yet. you beautifully showed swara's reactions on coming back to his house...their house as you have so amazingly put it. her wanting to beat him for leaving her and then needing the reassurance...him sleeping on the floor...i am happy trooper.

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-Ros-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

ress :p

Unresing after eternity! 😛

Well, Apte sounds a lil miffed. 😆 He found Gaby so quickly! 😲 I don't think he'll give Gabriel the benefit of the doubt... me having a gut feeling that DP will though.

Nothing can beat their cosmic connection. 😳

Go Swara! That's my girl. Kick them where the sun don't shine.

His pain, rage and guilt seeing his Kitty broken & bruised 😔... But I love he still manages to think and puts her safety about the overdrive of his emotions.

Swara's outburst. 👏 Nimmie 🤗 That was just beautiful man. ❤️ Drooling over that hug.

Gaby's baby... his kitten. Swara misses her dad a lot... she always used to follow his advice whenever she was in trouble & held onto his fingers at the worst of times for support & strength. Dads can never be replaced of course, but I feel like Mr Bose has just handed over Swara to Sanskaar. He's no longer just her guardian angel... he's much much more than that. 😳

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jasw

@jasw

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Awww... ❤️❤️❤️

So tender, so full of love .. these two...😳 and they are yet to realize their ❤️. Ahhh.. what can be said! You are such a beautiful writer ... brought out their love, care for each other in such a simple and beautiful way. I don't want this FF to end, Nimmi! 😃

Who were those 5 goons? They can't be Apte's men because Apte knew where Gabriel is! Anyways ... they were the catalyst to bring Gaby and his kitten together. I loved how the house is home now!

Loved all their hugs, fighting hug, tight hug, crying hug and peaceful hug. Gaby has come a long way .. he is equally reciprocating and in fact initiated the first hug!😳 Swara's trauma galvanized the man into a total surrender .. ok almost a surrender since he did not break into a song/lullaby!😉😆

PS. My mom used to caress my hair too when I was a kid and I used to instantly fall asleep😊

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TRPS

@TRPS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Nimmi 🤗 Jai Hind!

its good that Gaby understood the situation! *of course he would* , Apte's anger was justified, love how Gaby respected him, didn't give him back.
Well, Swara & Sanskaar's scene was so emotional. And the promise.. *yes*
already I am feeling so low, thanks to sorry scene in our serial , then Swara's condition and talks , Gaby's emotions exaggerate it.
but relief are the promise and conversation in the end between them. Swara telling about her parents and Gaby taking care of her was so heart touching! especially that promise and hug. :)
continue soon Nimmi , eagerly waiting for next update! :)
PS- He was rolling her from his toe again, seems like Kitten didn't noticed it due to emotional stress otherwise Gaby... 😆.

Edited by TRPS - 10 years ago

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Anglaise

@Anglaise

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Posted: 10 years ago

#150

Nimmie🤗🤗
Amazing Update dear! Awesome Awesome!! 🤗
oh So Apte doent know the reality.Poor Man is behind Gabreil. He doesnt even care about his pain and danger to back up with Gabreil. All he wanted us to destroy the person who took the life of lakshya and that rage made him to destroy Gabreil.. I loved der encounter. Gabreils is so so wise he sensed dat someone want to destroy both him and lakshya did this.!! Bravo!!.Now its gabreil turn to find the murderer..IK IK he will spot the murderer in his superb schematic way and I cant even guess it😆.
Oh my poor Swara suffered alot for Sanskar.How she holded herself throughout all these torture and not even mentioned anuthing about her Sanskar!❤️. BTW I loved swaras move against one of the goon😆.Aww Swara and Sanskar moments were BREATH TAKING! LOVED it!. It was super cute. Epic!.Moreover Im super duper excited this time SANSKAR hugged her even though it was to control her pain and anger he DID it. And doesnt even hesitated ❤️ .BTW he is now free from his hesitating circle right?! OMG🤗.Oh god the way he erased all her pain by reassuring her by soothing words! It was Magical.Sanskar what a Wise promise Manh! hmm how I wish U promise ' I will b around U during both ur happy and hard times❤️. I will take away all ur pains and never leave U and hold U tight in my arms wen U need me most'❤️😆.But Gabreil the Anjel did A WISE promise! And the sweetest and cutest promise ever!! with lots of silent feelings!! And Nimmie my most favourite part wer the PINKY PROMISE gesture. Omg omg It means alot .The way he hold her lil finger. Loved it ALOT.
Cutest Update dear.Amazing one. Update soon. TC🤗

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