FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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prathiksha

@prathi3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

some times i wish u never stopd

u write forever i v read foreva

nyways loved the update and u also😊

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jasw

@jasw

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

I am intrigued.. who is Ram's partner? So the war has begun! I am glad Swara has realized her love! Sanskar may need it! Lovely update, Nimmi.

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Gabriel is Rana's son. How? Whts the mystery behind this?
Who called Ram? Is it DP's political friend?
Continue soon

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mayasingh

@mayasingh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

waiting eagerly for next Chapter...

if this is war.. what are his plans...??

will Sanskar able to prove himself innocent of the blame put on him before Rana catches him...

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Shivangi

@Annei123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Lovely update!!!

Hope we get some romance in next update 😉

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

nimmi...will just res it for now

will read tomorrow...and comment

unres

I loved the way you portrayed the three what i would call for this purpose now protagonist who are entering the batter field. I loved the back story you provided for each other. Each one has been through pain and loss that has shaped who they are today. And in sanskar's case, he has more to think about since now Swara is also in the equation. I loved how you are showing their changed relation. they way she is feeling comfortable to hug him and he is returning it, getting equal comfort from her as he is giving to her.

i feel ominous about the things to come. i worry that sanskar might loss his father once again in this, before he rights things. i hope that doesnt end up being the case, but i worry Ram may do that to tilt the battle in his favour, i don't know why.

so the hounds have now been unleashed. waiting for sanskar to show them their place. after all hounds are no match for a lion. but then this is protecting his kitten and as long as she is safe, he can take any hounds.

Edited by foresight - 10 years ago

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SIMI

@simsen23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Nimmi...
U are an awesome writer bro...
I mean realy this chapter brought tears in my eyes(i am saying truth)
I felt bad for the 3 men 😕
especially little boy sanskar...oh god plz let his kitten heal him ...n he deserves a better life
other 2 dp and rana..ya they had to face too much pain,but atleast they had some good memories
And rana should think about his boy(i was shocked that he is not his actual son)
He should believe sanskar cant do this
i hate you ram prashad...hate you from bottom of my heart
i love the way kitten cares for him
plz update soon yar
feeling restless ...
Love
simi

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nissi or jesi

@Jess_Ru

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

omg omg its like watching saving private Ryan...its an extremely painful movie... and this fiction... oh god ...I felt bad for the three of them...extra bad for my angel

nimmo u made me feel bad for lucky...

aur rant karungi...do see dat above mentioned movie

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Read all three in a go nimmi ..such a heart wrenching story of three men connected because of circumstances .. Each has story of his own but their paths crossed because of destiny

Every part of angel is my fav but this would definitely stand out yaar .👏.👏I could feel the pain on each character.. Loved the way you etched the characters and linked them..awesome gal⭐️..should I say brilliant👍🏼

and last part where sanskaar shoots thar brute ..Again drifting back to atadu, starting part of movie,with kid ..cant help😆

Last but not least ..the simple moment b/w swara and sanskaar .. not a word said but spoke volumes,only she can calm down his inner storm

and so the War has begun and hounds unleashed ..looking forward

gosh I would miss angel, with every part you post ..

super ra nimmi👏🤗⭐️

Edited by lucky.m - 10 years ago