SS: Ignorant Crossroads - Page 17

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Sharon,

In the entire update, I found Laksh the most level headed and realistic person. And in a very amazing manner. Swara is too idealistic and Ragini is slightly philosophical while Sanskaar, he really does not know that he is simply running away not being free. For freedom means responsibility.

And it was the way they stuck to their principles that they reached where they are, at the ignorant crossroads.

Swara adamant that she is right and confident to prove it, always

Ragini, the perpetual peacemaker who has put her peace of mind at stake

Laksh always willing to put others expectations of him first, till he has realised that he can never expect to have any expectations of his own.

Sanskaar, believes his happiness is paramount and does not believe in bothering if that effects anybody else's happiness

And all have been selfish, in a way, sometimes consciously and at times thinking they were being selfless. But they are fortunate that life has given them a second chance by putting all four of them at the crossroads.

Here is hoping they chose well and chose wisely.

Wishing you a very Happy Diwali. May the light always be with you.

Best,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Sharon,

I loved it, despite my obsession with wanting a concrete "and they lived happily ever after" ending, I liked the way you ended it - on hope that finally all of them have chosen the right path.

I will get back for a detailed comment. Too sleepy to type a coherent reply.

Good night

Nyna

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice

Originally posted by: raaz19

Lovely update and enjoyed the ending...

Love the way they work things out and the way they both said what the feel. ..true not all happy ending have to be so clich...

The maturity shown at the end was a breath of fresh air...loves how you did not change there believe even at the end...

Take care razia

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Sharon...

Well i have read many stories with happie ever after endings...but the way you twisted story.. it was unique n quite different...happy ending still we got...but it was brilliantly conceptulised...mostly in every story leading jodi patchup n misunderstanding clear..but you showed different side...loved it...

Swasan were on verge of breakup..i was hell scared n worried as it was last part...but you give another dimension..swasan decided their fight...arguments n opinion will not affect their relationship n they will accept each other as it is...no change...n i loved this alot..enjoyed alot...thank u...

Will we get epilogue...???

Love

Talia

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Hi Talia,

Thank you for your comments .

I am glad that you liked the ending.

I wanted a conclusion for Swara and Sanskaar suitable for their characters . They are independent, successful modern couple who have given each other space to keep their opinions and keep them separated from their relationship.

As for epilogue, I am at loss of ideas. If you want a particular scene or any issue you feel wasn't clear in the story, let me know. I will try to weave something around it.

Cheers

Sharon