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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: bwvianna
Res. :)

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Sapna,

A start of another beautiful story. Such a mysterious prologue! So many questions! Who was driving? Who was hit? I'm grinning with anticipation to know more. Really well written.

Update soon :)

-V

thanks so much V 🤗

i am happy you found it mysterious...i hope i can keep your interest up as we go along...you will find some answer about who was driving and who got hit soon...thought i hope at least one of those is surprising for you ...thanks for liking my writing...i do look forward to your comments 😃 😳 🤗

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Hi Sapna...Thanks a lot darling for mentioning me at the prologue. I absolutely adore the rock solid logic always present on your stories...I'm looking forward to another ride of twists and turns in league with the Enemy Within...now coming to the prologue the imagery was profound there I could envision the poor driver feared out of his wits by his mistress full of energizing youth...! Wow! If I could be sure of you to follow some points from the original I would hazard a guess that girl is Swara and the man she hit is Sanskar perhaps already injured following his and kavita's attack...You're welcome to prove me wrong with the first chapter waiting for it.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Updated comment on Page 1 😊

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Res. 😊 Will un res tomorrow Sapna. ..pakka. 😊

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Very, very intriguing prologue indeed. 😊 At first, when I started reading, I kind of assumed Ragini was the girl who'd coerced the driver into letting her have a go at driving the car, even with the stormy weather and poor visibility. But then, in the end, seeing her concerned reaction, her instinctive desire to help the young man she'd injured, it seemed more like Swara.

The young man is Sanskaar, dare I presume? 😊 If the girl is Swara, then the man ideally ought to be Sanskaar...but you've kept your cards pretty close to your chest, my friend. 😉

Eagerly waiting for Chapter 1. The title "Cloaked Intentions" seems to suggest a lot of intrigue and plotting. 😛 Bring it on! 👏

thanks so much Viji 🤗 🤗

you found it intriguing 😳...so job well done then 😃. I will be revealing their identifies in the next chapter...will leave you hanging their for now. But yup a lot of plotting and mystery planned ahead...hope it keeps you interested. 😃 😳

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sakura24
Hi Sapna...Thanks a lot darling for mentioning me at the prologue. I absolutely adore the rock solid logic always present on your stories...I'm looking forward to another ride of twists and turns in league with the Enemy Within...now coming to the prologue the imagery was profound there I could envision the poor driver feared out of his wits by his mistress full of energizing youth...! Wow! If I could be sure of you to follow some points from the original I would hazard a guess that girl is Swara and the man she hit is Sanskar perhaps already injured following his and kavita's attack...You're welcome to prove me wrong with the first chapter waiting for it.

Saku🤗

what can i say...love you...your stories keep me going! 🤗

i hope this one leaves up to your expectations with its twists and turns...it is a bit away from the normal SR plot...so not sure how it will finally turn out.

I am really glad it was good enough to help you visualise it 😳 yup Ramu was really scared...i will reveal the identities of both in the next one...bear with me till then 😉 😳