SwaSan SS: Cloaked Intentions

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res. 😊 Will un res tomorrow Sapna. ..pakka. 😊

Un-res

Very, very intriguing prologue indeed. 😊 At first, when I started reading, I kind of assumed Ragini was the girl who'd coerced the driver into letting her have a go at driving the car, even with the stormy weather and poor visibility. But then, in the end, seeing her concerned reaction, her instinctive desire to help the young man she'd injured, it seemed more like Swara.

The young man is Sanskaar, dare I presume? 😊 If the girl is Swara, then the man ideally ought to be Sanskaar...but you've kept your cards pretty close to your chest, my friend. 😉

Eagerly waiting for Chapter 1. The title "Cloaked Intentions" seems to suggest a lot of intrigue and plotting. 😛 Bring it on! 👏

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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Swathy

@SwathyS

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Posted: 9 years ago

waiting to find out who was the didiji and who was the accident victim 😊
And what was he doing in the woods in a deserted road

wil be waiting for the next update

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aamias

@aamias

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Posted: 9 years ago

really nice sapna. will be waiting for the next update

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ExpectoPatronum

@ExpectoPatronum

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice start! Looking forward to read this story!!!

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Preeti

@-Prithi-

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

interesting start
eagerly waiting for the update

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SIMI

@simsen23

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Posted: 9 years ago

Sapna
happy new year..dear..
New ss in new year wow... 😊
Interesting plot
plz update soon... 😊
love
simi

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Sapna xoxo
Happy new year! Gosh we are spoilt for choice this New Year's Day! Stories from Saku, Viji and you, yayyy!
This was a very well written and intensely intriguing start. You've really kept the mystery angle tight here and I can't wait to read on. I have a few random guesses as to who Didi ji is but the beauty of this is it could be a number of people. Also intrigued to know more as you said your characters and of course plot is different!
Look forward to more.

Love S X

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Akshdeep Kaur

@_akaur_

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

Interesting prologue

Waiting to find out who was the 'didiji' and who was the man that got hit by the car..

Continue soon

Happy new year :)

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Vianna

@BookWormV

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res. :)

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Sapna,

A start of another beautiful story. Such a mysterious prologue! So many questions! Who was driving? Who was hit? I'm grinning with anticipation to know more. Really well written.

Update soon :)

-V

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: swa291
waiting to find out who was the didiji and who was the accident victim 😊
And what was he doing in the woods in a deserted road

wil be waiting for the next update

thanks so much 😳 😃...you will find out who they are soon...and also what he was doing there ...will try to update soon 😃