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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: aamias
really nice sapna. will be waiting for the next update

thanks so much dear 😃 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: KawalArora
interesting continue plz

thanks Kawal 😳 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ExpectoPatronum
Nice start! Looking forward to read this story!!!

thanks so much 😃 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
interesting start
eagerly waiting for the update

thanks prithi...glad you liked the start 😳 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
Nice start..
continue soon

thanks so much Jidnysaa...glad you liked the start...will update soon 😳 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: princess_tara
Interesting

thanks so much tara 😃 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: simsen23
Sapna
happy new year..dear..
New ss in new year wow... 😊
Interesting plot
plz update soon... 😊
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happy new year to you too simi 🤗

thanks so much for finding the start interesting...hope i keep your interest alive in all the parts 😃 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Interesting start

thanks dear...glad you found the start interesting 😃 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Hey Sapna xoxo
Happy new year! Gosh we are spoilt for choice this New Year's Day! Stories from Saku, Viji and you, yayyy!
This was a very well written and intensely intriguing start. You've really kept the mystery angle tight here and I can't wait to read on. I have a few random guesses as to who Didi ji is but the beauty of this is it could be a number of people. Also intrigued to know more as you said your characters and of course plot is different!
Look forward to more.

Love S X

thanks shruti 🤗

Happy new year to you too! I am pretty much in the same place as you...spoilt for choice...ended the day yesterday reading recompense 😳.

I am really happy your found this interesting and that i could keep the mystery alive...that is my fav genre so i end up going more in that direction i guess. you are right the didi and the ma could be so many people...i hope i surprise you at least with one of their identities.

i like the saying nothing is what it seems...and it so applies to this one 😆

thanks for your wonderful comments 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: _akaur_
Interesting prologue
Waiting to find out who was the 'didiji' and who was the man that got hit by the car..
Continue soon

Happy new year :)

happy new year to you too aksh!! 🤗 how have you been? 😃

thanks for finding this interesting...you will find out who both of them are...though i hope to surprise you with the identity of at least one 😳 😃

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