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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

awesome and interesting start

The man is Laksh, i thought it was sanskaar.

eager to read more.

Pm me when you update

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Nice update..well described👍🏼

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chi1tra

@chi1tra

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Very interesting. Please PM me when you update!!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

So I got Didi ji right. 😊 But the man she hit wrong! ! 😆

Lakshya Agarwal ...😊 Coincidentally, Agarwal was the family name of Annapurna's birth family, I had made up in one of my OS's. 😆

Oh oh...so this is how Lakshya is going to try to worm his way into Swara's sympathy and then affection? I'm probably prejudiced, since I love to hate the guy...but him apologising to her, for "coming in front of her car", when it was really her negligent driving which caused the accident, seems so fishy...

Unless, in a twisted way, he's actually telling the truth. 😊 He had deliberately come in front of her car, hoping to precipitate this mild accident!

The 3rd possibility is that this is just my instinctive mistrust of Lakshya talking. 😉

Waiting for the next part. 😊

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Nice!!

unexpected twist!!! thought it would be sanskar!!

No problem...

Continue soon..

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soapbubble

@soapbubble

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Aha!

Really nice first part!

Nice ambience, lots of intrigue, promising characters! And then there is that tantalising title!

This is a SwaSan story, right?!! Although I wouldn't mind a good Swalak one too 😆

Look forward to more.

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Swathy

@SwathyS

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

aww god so the person who got hit my swara's car is laksya ... waiting for more
keep writing

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written!

thanks so much 😃

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
awesome and interesting start
The man is Laksh, i thought it was sanskaar.
eager to read more.
Pm me when you update

thanks so much 😃 😳...

yes it was Laksh...Sanskar will make an entry a couple of updates down the line...after i reveal lash's plot a bit

i will pm you for sure.