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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

OMG!! read all chapters in one go... its super addictive... you are one hell of a writer sakura!! just too good.. All the time i felt as if I'm watching a thriller movie, so vividly you described each aspect of the story.. be it screenplay, emotions, thoughts, dialogues, story, the twists, backgrounds... everything is amazing!!👏 You should seriously consider publishing your work coz more than the story, its the way you write it that makes it simply fabulous..⭐️. cant wait for the next part!! update soon pretty pls😛

Hey dear,
I'm so thrilled to hear from you. It's always lovely to welcome new readers 🤗
Did you come all the way from reading Ice King, Snow Queen and the winds? If not I guess you should check them out, I'm sure you will love them as well.
Thank you so much dear, you made me speechless with this comment😳
love,
Sakura
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

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Hey Saku dear...🤗 🤗

What a lovely part 12, combining the warmth and tenderness of Swara & Sanskaar, waking up together on Karva Chauth morning, to the sheer, gut wrenching tension and anxiety of the chapter finale, where Kavita is holding Swara captive; in order to bring the Ice King out of his comfort zone! This lady is the SQ personified, vile, chilly and Machiavellian. And she hasn't learned an iota from her mistakes...she says she was wounded, but this is hardly the way to nurse one's wounds which were to a large degree, self inflicted!

But to focus on the beginning---lovely, dreamy, so blissful. I loved the tender exchanges between them, Sanskaar asking, very moved, what he would do with so much love, Swara replying that she was sure he'd find an answer, but in the meantime, she adores the confused Sanskaar trying to figure that one out. 😆 😆

Sanskaar coming up behind Swara when she was looking at her reflection in the mirror, and their composite image, one behind the other in the mirror, seeming oddly complete---as if they were meant to stand together, be together through life. 👏 👏

Sanskaar saying that Swara was excellent at bullying him, but only when he let her. 😉 😳

Swara worrying about what Dida had told her, that it was ominous not to wear sindhoor on Karvachauth, fretting that she was not able to fill her maang, though she wanted to proudly proclaim to the world, that she was Sanskaar's. And Sanskaar, reassuring her, by pressing a warm, lingering kiss at her hair partition, filling the spot where the sindhoor in his name would have been applied. 😳 ☺️ That last gesture was so romantic, I have absolutely no further words to describe its beauty.

Is Akash a traitor, Saku? Seems so unlikely. Did he genuinely believe that Kavita had gone to meet Ragini in the Agarwal offices?

By the way, Kavita's statement of "Waiting for the Death", reminded me so chillingly, of the message on the resurrection stone, in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows. "I open at the close". Eerie! She is just so vile, Saku...I maintain, she is more chilling than the slimy, warty toad. She is just so cobra like...saying that she is no fan of physical wounds, what she wants is to torture Swara's soul. Has she lost her own completely? How can one be so evil?

I so hope the amphibian would discover his better side, some inner core of honor and self respect still remaining. Someone has to redeem themselves from this train wreck of lost souls hurtling towards the permafrost...But foremost, of course, I hope & pray that the Ex-IK and the Ex-SQ find their way together into the new, balmy spring, unscathed. 😊

Can't wait for the finale and the epilogue. Will you be posting today?

Loads of Love,

----Viji




Hi Viji, my dear dear sis,
for some reason your evil smile makes me giggle😆
it's the eve of finale, I had to unleash some warmth as well as the chilly storm. Oh, we both know of her wounds and her extraordinary ways of healing them...this lady has one twisted mind I tell you. I wonder why Vasu thinks of her as a knight when she is such a prominent SQ herself.
If we keep holding to that little warm bubble, this storm will be over and we'll be safe. So yeah, let's focus on the start. Swara's love is such a deep and overflowing emotion isn't it? No wonder Sanskar is confused. But looking back I wonder if she does it purposely so that she gets to enjoy the company of the bewildered Sanskar😆
I always feel they're picture perfect don;t you? Whenever they stand together the space seems to fill up instantly.
Oh, we saw the length of her bullying in the winds, but true, that's because he let her.
I wanted that, I wanted that scene desperately. It was one reason why Lakshya lost his memory, so that I can make Swara not wear her Sindoor and fuss over it and Sanskar to calm her down in his own special way😳
No, no Aki is no traitor, he really believed what he said. I don;t see Sanskar misjudging those who work for him, he is loyal as Swara thinks he is.
That resurrection stone gave me sleepless nights when I first read DH, I open at the close, it was so chilly...Kavi here means somthing equal, like you will find answers but then it will be useless or something along the lines. The point is she has no intention of harming Swara physically, her intentions are far more vile as you will see in the finale.
I see you have high hopes for Mr. toad, I will let him know that there's a certain winter lady who still thinks he can spot his honor in the mud. Let's see if he heeds us or not. Either way, he won;t be gaining anything from this stunt.
The finale will take time dear, I'm so sorry to keep you waiting but have no choice actually.
loads of love,
Saku
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jisa

loved it...
its getting intense..
hopefully ragini doesn't turn out the way kavita expected her..
hope ragini do some good..
and my ice king.. waiting for him eagerly..

Thanks dear,
yes Ragini would return in an unexpected way...we'll see
IK would fight back in his own method.
I'm so glad you loved it. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanya17

End part was chilling kavita is now sounding the most dangerous n chilling snow queen I thought that this title belongs to vasundra bt nw I m wondering who is whose pawn /knight kavita vasus or vasu kavitas waiting fr the secrets to unveil I think kavitas revenge is not bcz of rejection vasu hv told sm lies to kavita related to her fathers death I mean the way she has cmpltly changed n came fr revenge n this can't be because of a mere rejection vasu did the sm thing with her what she did with adya swSan moments were too cute n sweet lvd it a lot update soon

Thanks Sanya,
like in SQ you wonder who the SQ is until the very end here you wonder who is the knight..that's the specialty of the winter tales. Everyone is chilling and cold. Oh yes, Kavi has a deeper story, she'll reveal everything just wait for finale.
I'm glad you loved the way the story is shaping up.
love,
Sakura
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: simsen23

Saku...
Finally updated...darling..
I was waiting since a long time...
Chapter 12
it was short but sweet(okay only the love part)
I am already in swasanland and this love part just gave me extra joy..
Shankar is so romantic and swara truly loves him so much
they know about uttara(what about laksh!!they know)
And that person i hate most kavita(uff i have no words)
But my SQ is not so fool ,she went there knowingly(Akash is sanskar's man,well i hope so)
Waiting for finale...plz update soon dear
lots of love
simi 😊

Simi,
I'm sorry to keep you waiting but I am busy these days. I hope you won;t mind waiting much.
Glad you loved the SwaSan moment, we need spring to deal with the storms.
Yes they know about Lakshya, remember Swara's conversation with lucky and he made a slip there, which Sanskar picked up?
Of cause Akash is sanskar's man through and through.
I will update as soon as I can.
love,
Sakura
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Sakura!!!! What happened there!!! Is Kavita actually a knight for vasundhara or is she playing her own game?? And why does Swara get trapped so easily when she hears about Ragini!! Shucks I'm really scared for her...

Tht initial scene of early morning KC day was so sweet...swasan are just so made for each other and the things they say makes me go weak in the knees...adorable duo!! Loved the way sanskaar admitted that there was no one else in the world but Swara for him and even the world knew it but only he took time to realize it for himself and now he knows clearly tht whatever he felt for Kavita earlier came nothing close to his feelings fr Swara ...he was just making do coz probably Swara wasn't around!!

They have realized laksh is being used by vasundhara too?? How does sanskaar manage it ?!! I really want it to be revealed in the finale coz m just so clueless!!

Here Swara is in danger and sanskaar?? Hope he can avert any danger to himself coz he needs anyhow to come n save Swara!!

Can't wait for the Finale!!!

Tas

Hey Tas,
you'll know more about Kavi in the finale and Swara's not trapped yet, she will be eventually and Kavi knows that.
I like writing warm scenes for them. Their spring is enchanting right? Of cause sanskar now realizes Kavita and him were never meant to be, his revenge was driven by guilt rather than love.
Do you remember Swara's conversation with Lucky where he mentioned Sanskar being Chandraraj's son? If he has lost his memory there is no way he can know that. Remember Sanskar picked this up and messaged Swara checkmate ? That was when they worked it out.
Both are in danger, we'll see what happens.
I will update as soon as I can, sorry to keep you waiting...
love,
Sakura
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Un-Res on Page 38, Saku dear! 🤗

Thank you so much Viji dearest 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: foresight

saku fantastic chapter...i will res for now. please bear with me...i am trying to catching up with my writing so comments might be a bit delayed.

Take you time Sapna dear, I am up to my nose myself so I have no complaints there. Thanks for dropping by 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi! Hello!
This is not an update, just a note to clear some confusions. For all those who find the interlinks of the families I have created within winter land confusing I am mentioning who is who, so that it will help you understand the story more.

Maheshwaris
You know the famous two brothers here.
The elder one : Durga Prasad Maheshwari, married to Annapurna Maheshwari. Father of two sons, Adarsh Durga Prasad Maheshwari and Lakshya Durga Prasad Maheshwari.
Adarsh is married to Parineeta and Lakshya was married to Ragini.

The younger one; Ram Prasad Maheshwari, married to Sujata Maheshwari. Father of *Sanskar Ram Prasad Maheshwari and Uttara Ram Prasad Maheshwari.
Sanskar is married to Swara and Uttara is dating Adya.

*In Snow queen it is revealed that Sanskar is not Ram and Sujata's son although they accepts him to be a Maheshwari, he is in fact the son of Chandra Raj Agrawal and Yashodara Biyani. (refer SQ for further details)

The Agrawals
A sister and brother here.
The elder sister; Vasundara Agrawal (Later Biyani) married to Aditya Biyani and mother of Adya Biyani.
Younger brother; Chandra Raj Agrawal. Single. Biological father of Sanskar.

The Biyanis
A brother and two sisters here.
The eldest brother: Aditya Biyani married to Vasundara and father of Adya
Elder sister (Only younger to Aditya): Annapurna Biyani (Later Maheshwari) married to Durga Prasad. Mother of Adarsh and Lakshya.
Youngest sister : Yashodara Biyani: Single. Birth mother of Sanskar.

I hope there is no more confusion. If there is please do let me know.😊
love,
Sakura

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