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SIMI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Sakura...
Wuuu chapter -10&11...wow bro superb
😊 so many secrets revealed...
Okay first the romance between swasan was awesome..its emotional too
then kav-lak convo...i hate both(thats laksh's secret he has not lost his memory)
Then uttara-adya..hmm..great angle ..to story
and sanskar knows the truth(aditya is alive)
Its true vasundhara was never part of the winterland...a vile lady.. 😕
its always vasu who had created problems in everyone's life
and now she thought laksh is her knight ..poor lady he is just a pawn infront of my ice king and snow queen...
Excited for next upadate ...plz post it soon
love
simi 😊

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karthika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

dont do this laksh how can vasundara lied to everyone that her husband is died even to her child. waiting for the finale and epilogue

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Sanya17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#263

omg what was tht!!! So many twists so adya n uttara lvs each other, poor uttara gt trapped btwn bro nbf though i hate both kavita n laksh bt i lvd their cnvrstn n thn the biggest twist aditya biyani is alive i was cnfused about the relationships of the seniors bt nw gt it i think adya is gonna chng sides which will be d rsn of vasus downfall n laksh he trnd into cmplt villain it was chilling i feel swara will sv sanskar bt will end up getting hurt especially whn laksh is d one who is trying to kill sanskar this will b a punishment fr laksh n sanskars thought about hw he always ends up hrtng swara this too gv me d sm feeling dat swara is going to be hurt update soon otherwise we r not gonna let u stay in peace with our pms n comments😉 lvd it a lot

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maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Excitement building up!!! Thts an understatement!!!

Wow what awesome duo of chapters Saku!!! Firstly i couldn't believe Uttara was so deeply involved in this winter land too tho I think she and adya are unwilling participants longing to be in their own spring land...

Vasundhara is a bigger and more dangerous snow queen than Ragini even...I would say Ragini wouldn't come anywhere close!

Kavita seems more of a pawn than a knight but Laksh!!! So finally he shows his true colors...kill sanskaar shall he!!!! 😡

I love ur inclusions of small sweet swasan scenes between this intense winter war giving us hope for a blooming spring soon!!

Aah Mr Biyani is alive and since adya will find tht he will choose his side too...has tht made vasundhara decide to kill sanskaar but hope he is two steps ahead to keep himself and Swara safe

Love the direction and ur pace Saku...u r an awesome storyteller!!!

Love Tas

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

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sorry saku. read it, loved it but will comment tomorrow. have been a bit packed.

unres

i loved that first interaction between swara and sanskar. how his guilt is eating at him and the only one who can heal him and heals him everything is swara and to be fair visa versa. the other person's pain hurts them the most and the other person is the most effective healer for them. loved how you portrayed their bond, their emotions and their comforting each other.

they were spotted by the ones who are likely to be most impacted by their intimacy. the two knights interesting knew each other long before they joined to fight the same side. that really make me wonder when did laksh find out kavtia was alive, someone i feel it was long ago. long before sanskar knew it. and that make me wonder about him as a person. that he opportunistic and emotional is given, you have shown that through well. he is driven by his desires without realising what his action will really lead to and what kavita say will come be true soon. very soon i feel. esp since he now wants to kill sanskar.

that kavita has shades of vasu doesnt surprise me. i felt you very subtlety started to show that side of her in the last update. she like vasu is a women scorned who is out to take revenge and burn everyone in its path, taking pleasure in it. not like sanskar was ...laden with guilt.

i thought there would be something between adya and uttara, i didnt know it was going on for sometime. i wonder if vasu is aware of it and hence pushing kavita on her son, because she doesnt want her knight to turn sides. when you showed someone listening into the conversation for a moment i felt that it was sanskar who had already bought adya to show him the truth. may be i was wrong, it was sanskar only apparently??? or could it be both and they are attacked by laksh and that turns adya around about his mother?

i felt that vasu had some hand in her husband;s murder, but girl, you have kept him alive how wonderful. and the entire way you have shown that incident is beautiful.

loved the uttara and sanskar scene as well

i am looking forward to seeing how sanskar comes out of this...

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RAONE8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Awesome twist👏

Aditya biyani is alive n vasu is created problems in evry1s lives

loved d tender swasan moment

lets see what laksh vil do... hope he does not succeed in his endeavours

cont sooon

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Swathy

@SwathyS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#267

omg the last update was something so many things coming out
And lakshya he is absolutely mad
Waiting for more

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Mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#268

OMG awesome chapters Sakura

I just loved the amazing twists and turns

I am seriously addicted to your stories

I loved the Kavita's and Lakshya's discussion

The Adya and Uttara date and Sanskar's intervention in it

I am not shocked with the new twist of Vasundhara's

I had a doubt that you Aditya may be alive

The past story was just awesome

Thanks for the pm

Waiting for the next update

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#269

Saku dearest 🤗 🤗

I've commented on Nest and Knights of the Same Color (Chapter 10) in my comment on Page 35 (Un-res'd). I have to rush off for some urgent work now, so will un-res this post later today, for my comment on Chapter 11.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

Un-Res, dear 😊

Chapter 11: Some very intense revelations here indeed.

Brother: I really liked the calm, elder brotherly way Sanskaar handled Uttara. Once could really get a vibe of how much he genuinely loves her. When he calls her Doll, I was deeply moved, it reminded me of how my elder bro addressed me (and still does😛). He calls me the equivalent of Doll/ Gudiya 😊-- in our mother tongue--Tamil.

I liked the ease and gentleness with which Sanskaar queried Uttara about what she wanted, which side she would pick. Though she did declare she was on his side, Sanskaar does realize how much that would tear her apart, since his Doll really, genuinely loves Adya. And in his sister's interest, he, though he might be tempted to tear Adya limb from limb, calmly asks him what is Adya's price for peace, what does he want to stop this ultimately futile and pointless war of egos and wills. And the way Sanskaar tells Adya that his mother lied...so firmly and in full grasp of his facts...That's our Sanskaar!!!

Cat and Mouse: This detour into the past really was tantalizing, Saku. 😊 So that's how Aditya played the game...He does love Vasundara sincerely...but he is not above using the temptation of the crown to sway Durga Prasad into adhering to his engagement with Annapurna. Certainly a Chanakya...Vasundara might think she is one, but it is her husband who seems to be more like the master strategist. She is just plain vile!

I get the feeling both Durga and Vasundara were more in love with the trammels of power and position that really with each other. (Though Vasundara might have possibly loved him a tad more than he loved her...am not too sure there, you could enlighten me).

I loved the one liner Aditya threw at Vasundara here "He can either have you or a Queen, Be either your Husband or a King". 😊 Sadly for Vasu, but perhaps obviously for everyone else, Durga chose what Aditya knew he would choose...

Ghosts Living in Shadows: Saku dearest, you know, I was kind of expecting that Aditya would be alive. 😊 Remember I asked you in a comment sometime back, who had signed those papers Vasundara was demanding? It didn't seem like Durga Prasad at all, though the opening of the next section seemed to suggest it was. You replied that indeed, it wasn't Durga----and I had been thinking that perhaps, after all, Vasundara was not quite the black widow (Oh, black in heart she is, certainly...but not a widow!! 😛)

The way you disclosed through that monologue of Vasundara's, how she had played with the lives and loves of the Maheshwaris and the Biyanis, and even her own brother's life...My God. She's so vile, so selfish, so cunning. She is not a gray character anymore, nothing can excuse this level of scheming and vindictiveness.

So I presume Sanskaar was there? Did he bring Adya along to show him the truth as well? But then Adya would no longer stand by his mother right?

Darkness: My already non existent regard for Lakshya went a level lower. He feels by removing Sanskaar from the scene he can make Swara return to him? And feels no compunction taking the life of his cousin, who has been like a brother to him through all their childhood and teen years, and even after their recent bitter estrangement, has made efforts to reconcile with him? Aaarggghhh...Amphibian alert!! 🤢 I just hope that some innate sense of honor and decency, might stay his hand in the end.

Of course, I know you won't let Sanskaar die! 😉 😛 He is more than capable of staying two steps ahead, and he has Swara with him as well...and who knows, Kavita or even Adya might foil Lakshya's plan? But still I do wish that he himself, might not take that final plunge into the bottomless pit...

You'll let us know in Chap 12 I guess 😊. On Monday? Can't wait!!

Love,

---Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago