Frost Knight SwaSan SS, Complete pg 1 - Page 28

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Posted: 9 years ago
interesting updates Saku! telling you again, you really know how to create and hold suspense till the end!
starting with the conversation of DP and Sanskaar!
so, there was always a selfish reason of making him heir rather than him being more capable.
I just love this quality of Sanskaar, always talking straight, to the point.
and conversation of Kavita and Adya! Adya seems a warm person, not like his mother. much sorted!
"Obsession is
destructive; you and I both know a
very good example at that. " whom he was referring by these line??/
and conversation of Swara and Kavita, Swara gave the apt reply to her! Kavita is beyond the sense of righteousness. love how Sanskaar encouraged Swara silently.
and conversation with Lakshya and Swara , I literally had that grin on my face and when Sanskaar' messaged checkmate, it turned so huge! Lakshya didn't do any homework on his plans!
Swasan playing chess and discuss current situation was something really interesting!
he addressed yashodhara first time Maa but only once! why?? and I am still asking about Sujaataa! :P
So,Sanskaar got the quality from Yashodhara of straight and wise talking.
Vasundhara instead seeking love was seeking crowns. if she sought love , this wouldn't be her condition, I guess!

again Saku, Swasan scene is always so pleasurable to read!
they so fit each-other.
and Kavita and Lakshya conversation! venom and hatred oozing out from each and every word!
soo, Adya and Uttara are in love. despite this serious conversation! when you mentioned Uttara fixings her makeup and Adya watching her patiently , made me chuckled.
by the way, what an entry Sanskaar;!
bachchon ko hilaa diyaa!
Sanskaar's love for Uttara was so sweet. he didn't kept her in dilemma. and how firmly he declared his opinion!!
whoa! what an unexpected revelation! bishop is very much alive...
Well,he never wanted to marry Vasundhara forcefully , then I didn't get why Aditya was so adament on Annapoornaa's marriage to Durga??? just for a good home despite him knowing Durga loves crown more! ?
so vile, cunning Vasundhara is! for the lust of crown, she destroyed many lives ,playing with his son's feelings too...
she knows how to use or manipulate people like Lakshya! hope, he didn't pull such nonsense stunt.
I think it was Adi or Adi and Sanskaar both who listened the secret.
so much suspense!!! eagerly waiting for next update Saku and continue soon. :)
Edited by TRPS - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Saku...
Dear where are you...
Waiting for the finale ...plz update soon...
😊
love
simi
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG!! read all chapters in one go... its super addictive... you are one hell of a writer sakura!! just too good.. All the time i felt as if I'm watching a thriller movie, so vividly you described each aspect of the story.. be it screenplay, emotions, thoughts, dialogues, story, the twists, backgrounds... everything is amazing!!👏 You should seriously consider publishing your work coz more than the story, its the way you write it that makes it simply fabulous..⭐️. cant wait for the next part!! update soon pretty pls😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Saku dear...🤗 🤗

What a lovely part 12, combining the warmth and tenderness of Swara & Sanskaar, waking up together on Karva Chauth morning, to the sheer, gut wrenching tension and anxiety of the chapter finale, where Kavita is holding Swara captive; in order to bring the Ice King out of his comfort zone! This lady is the SQ personified, vile, chilly and Machiavellian. And she hasn't learned an iota from her mistakes...she says she was wounded, but this is hardly the way to nurse one's wounds which were to a large degree, self inflicted!

But to focus on the beginning---lovely, dreamy, so blissful. I loved the tender exchanges between them, Sanskaar asking, very moved, what he would do with so much love, Swara replying that she was sure he'd find an answer, but in the meantime, she adores the confused Sanskaar trying to figure that one out. 😆 😆

Sanskaar coming up behind Swara when she was looking at her reflection in the mirror, and their composite image, one behind the other in the mirror, seeming oddly complete---as if they were meant to stand together, be together through life. 👏 👏

Sanskaar saying that Swara was excellent at bullying him, but only when he let her. 😉 😳

Swara worrying about what Dida had told her, that it was ominous not to wear sindhoor on Karvachauth, fretting that she was not able to fill her maang, though she wanted to proudly proclaim to the world, that she was Sanskaar's. And Sanskaar, reassuring her, by pressing a warm, lingering kiss at her hair partition, filling the spot where the sindhoor in his name would have been applied. 😳 ☺️ That last gesture was so romantic, I have absolutely no further words to describe its beauty.

Is Akash a traitor, Saku? Seems so unlikely. Did he genuinely believe that Kavita had gone to meet Ragini in the Agarwal offices?

By the way, Kavita's statement of "Waiting for the Death", reminded me so chillingly, of the message on the resurrection stone, in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows. "I open at the close". Eerie! She is just so vile, Saku...I maintain, she is more chilling than the slimy, warty toad. She is just so cobra like...saying that she is no fan of physical wounds, what she wants is to torture Swara's soul. Has she lost her own completely? How can one be so evil?

I so hope the amphibian would discover his better side, some inner core of honor and self respect still remaining. Someone has to redeem themselves from this train wreck of lost souls hurtling towards the permafrost...But foremost, of course, I hope & pray that the Ex-IK and the Ex-SQ find their way together into the new, balmy spring, unscathed. 😊

Can't wait for the finale and the epilogue. Will you be posting today?

Loads of Love,

----Viji




Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
There is simply no point in trying to beat a winter lady...they are personally trained by SQ and always wins. Welcome Viji 🤗 When I saw your post couldn't help adding my own evil smile at the start of the chapter❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakura24

There is simply no point in trying to beat a winter lady...they are personally trained by SQ and always wins. Welcome Viji 🤗 When I saw your post couldn't help adding my own evil smile at the start of the chapter❤️


😆 I am so proud of my icy tiara and cloak made of driven snow. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum


😆 I am so proud of my icy tiara and cloak made of driven snow. 😉

Sounds cool 😉😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved it...
its getting intense..
hopefully ragini doesn't turn out the way kavita expected her..
hope ragini do some good..
and my ice king.. waiting for him eagerly..
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Posted: 9 years ago
End part was chilling kavita is now sounding the most dangerous n chilling snow queen I thought that this title belongs to vasundra bt nw I m wondering who is whose pawn /knight kavita vasus or vasu kavitas waiting fr the secrets to unveil I think kavitas revenge is not bcz of rejection vasu hv told sm lies to kavita related to her fathers death I mean the way she has cmpltly changed n came fr revenge n this can't be because of a mere rejection vasu did the sm thing with her what she did with adya swSan moments were too cute n sweet lvd it a lot update soon
Edited by Sanya17 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Saku...
Finally updated...darling..
I was waiting since a long time...
Chapter 12
it was short but sweet(okay only the love part)
I am already in swasanland and this love part just gave me extra joy..
Shankar is so romantic and swara truly loves him so much
they know about uttara(what about laksh!!they know)
And that person i hate most kavita(uff i have no words)
But my SQ is not so fool ,she went there knowingly(Akash is sanskar's man,well i hope so)
Waiting for finale...plz update soon dear
lots of love
simi 😊

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