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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 4 is updated now :)
Edited by Sakura24 - 9 years ago
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Res 😊 Me first!!!

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An action packed, nerve jangling, poundingly exciting chapter. 😊

Loved the confrontation scene between Sharmishta and Swara. You know I have a mild resentment against Sharmishta from the IK/SQ days. 😆 So though what she said was out of genuine concern for her daughter, I loved the way Swara stood up for her love and her marriage, and told her mother very clearly, not to cloud her judgement through the faulty prism of her own bad experience. Sanskaar was never, and never would be a Shekar Gadodia!

Loved that thought of Swara's that no one had the right to insult her love, not even Sanskaar himself! But Saku, one doubt which arose in her mind actually struck me too. Why is Sanskaar staying there at all? At the end of SQ, he wanted to leave the "Winterland" forever, didn't he? He didn't want to be the Ice King anymore, staying there. And he wanted Swara to love him, away from what he considered an accursed place. The decision to love him back and leave, or to forsake him and stay, was left to Swara, and she chose, memorably, saying Melt Me . She was prepared to give up the mantle of the Snow Queen, too.

So why is Sanskaar staying back now, listening to (or at least considering/pretending to listen to) Annapurna's preposterous requests, showing such deep concern for Lakshya (who I am still sure, is faking memory loss). He always planned to leave with Swara, right? So what changed? Why can't they just leave together?

But while they are there, That whole bit about him pretending to be indifferent to Swara, not too bothered about the near fatal accident she had, driving her scared away from him, just in order to keep her safe from the malignant Shakuni shadowing them, was just awesome. A wonderfully well thought out plan by Sanskaar. But, Vasundara has seen through that, that canny serpent. 😆 So she has had her heart broken previously is it? Dare I ask, by whom? Did she fall in love with Durga Prasad perhaps? 😊

She really is a Chanakya, correctly identifying that the person Sanskaar wants to keep the safest, will be the one he keeps furthest away from the theater of battle. And she plans to harm his love, in order to break him. Man, this vile woman. And pretending to be a lover of peace, while making these devious plans...really deluded!

I loved the conversation Sanskaar had with Sujata. It was so poignant, the way he said that he loves with all his heart, mind and soul, and he knows no other way to love! So deep, so potent is his adoration, so very, very Sanskaar! And Sujata's words were a much needed dose of perspective---it was when Arjuna was at the other end of the Kurukshetra battlefield, that his beloved son Abhimanyu was slaughtered. Would wisdom prevail on Sanskaar to get Swara back with him, to face the winter storms together? They can ride out all that Vasundara, Kavita, Annapurna, Lakshya, Adya and Ragini throw at them---if only they could stand together...😕

A thought struck me which I scrapped you as well. 😊 That conversation of Sanskaar's with Sujata, asking how she would feel were Yashodara to return. I feel you just might be hinting of a parallel in the present generation. 😊 Vasundara might be blackmailing Sanskaar with trumped up proof of "Kavita" being alive...obviously the fake who has had plastic surgery to look like the original one. And Sanskaar, completely, passionately, irretrievably in love with Swara, wants to shield her from that pain?

Lovely, Saku. Do clarify the earlier doubt I had if possible.

Love,

Viji


Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sharmista was not wrong in what she said ... well what is sanskars motive she could not know and for someone watching from outside well it was not a good picture he made...

Sansakr's enemy this time is not small..And she sees everything .. Hopes he dodnt underestimate the enemy

And What sujatha said its a warning not only for sansakar but to us too is it.. to get ready for some heartbreak
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Posted: 9 years ago
one more amazing update part 3 the begining of the war the beginining of another storm of winter which is coming to unleash the king n his queen
i loved sanskar n annapurna interaction i hated annapurna how cd she be so selifish to ask something like this but i do understand why she asked loved sanskars reply to her "u loved me like a son but u are my mother" " i owe her to no one"
hope sanskar will find some solution n swara don't hv to act as laksh fiance because i strongly feel this is what laksh wants but i am keeping my faith on sanskar i hope he will come up with some good solution that keeps laksh away frm swara at the same time laksh too don't get hurt otherwise what use sanskar's intelligent n witty brain would come 😉
sacrifice n selflesness n foolishness r different sacrifice or selfnlessness is great virtue but sacrifice or selflesness should not turn into foolishness n sankar knows that
Edited by Sanya17 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sakura
superb one chapter 4
So sanskar knows everything...all actions were taken not considering lakshay but kavita
love u IK...but felt bad for swara 😕
lovely swasan moments from past were so romantic.
Sanskar knows about kavita...but his heart is for swara...he has predicted the storm.
But sanskar should not underestimate the SQ ...she is capable of protecting the IK too
excited for all updates
love
simi 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
When I read the start I thought I was Swara and Sanskaar but it turned out to be Sharmishtha's dream.. Pheewww..
I loved how finally Swara told her mother what she actually felt
And the slap ouuchhh I so want Sanskaar to confide in Swara and fight together but when we love someone we try to keep them as safe as possible...
And I wonder why Sanskaar asked his mothers opinion on how she would react if Yashodhara is to return...
Waiting to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Sakura darling
The update was as usual fantastic
I loved it
Sharmista is right from her point of view
I hope Sanskar proves her wrong
I loved the way Swara showed her trust on Sanskar and fought with Sharmista
I loved the flashback romance
Sanskar I hope he doesn't do anything stupid to hurt Swara
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon



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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful part as always...i liked the background on shomi...she is plagued by monsters of her own and is equating her state to her daughters, worried for her. loved how swara gave a clear differentiation, though she herself is plagued with some fears, she wasnt okay with any one saying anything about her love. sanskar keeping swara away to protect her, without telling her about it, worried that she might not agree, backfired. sadly he had to show her the SK version...i wish swara gets to a stage when she isn't scared of him. liked that she didnt want to be the snow queen again...i hope destiny allows her that leeway. i loved the mother son conversation. she is truly his mother by heart here at the end of the day, and despite his gene's his is ram's son in every way that matters. i loved how sujata said that arjun being away was the time when abhimanyu was attacked. he is right in wanting to protect his queen, but queen needs to know how to wield his sword and protect the castle while the king is away on the battlefield, should the enemy attack. hope sanskar finds a way to make that happen. loved the part as always. 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
well i loved the update swasan flashback swaras sharp yet realistic reply to shomi sanskars want to protect her i loved it
bt honestly i dont like swara to be weak not even infront of sanskar thats the thing i liked about snow queen both were honest , sharp strong n positive
in the accident part i felt angry on sanskar he is hurting her too much he is trying to protect her bt he is not understanding that he is making her feel as unwanted as her father did he is nt undrstndng that kpng her away is not any solution it will bring more danger to her i did not expect this from him
swara is already brkn she wont be able to hndle ice king once more n with kavitas re entry he will have to pay for hurting her he had already once snachted the family swara gt nt by birth bt she hd to create a bond n put effort to be a part of this family he had already once snached that in his revenge quest if he continues this behaviour then definitely swaras trust will broke it will make her rethink about her decision
Edited by Sanya17 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter five updated :) I'm sorry I am a little busy but I will reply to each of your sweet comments in a while.

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