Frost Knight SwaSan SS, Complete pg 1 - Page 15

Originally posted by: jerrenkarthi

oh no she is playijng games using kavitha, sharmista unknowinglg helped their enemies

Awwwesssme Saku!!
for me , Sanskaar denying Annapoornaa, Swara's fight for Sanskaar, then Sujaataa's advice and then Swasan's confrontation stole the limelight in each update. 😊
first I was so afraid that papers on which Sharmistha took her sign wasn't of divorce. sometimes my Mind run so negative. but I had faith on Sanskaar. pheww!! they were the paper of shares. but still!!
and last was so painful, this was the something Swara had to vent out.
those lines of Sanskaar!!
Since when have your fate and mine
been two different things?'
and
No, I lost my love the day I let
Shermishta auntie take you away.'
Sigh!! so poignant!
then Swara's realisation!! Sigh!! :)
Sorry for the late comments Saku! and short too! but I am not a good critic reader either 😛 nowadays so busy with studies till June, but don't want to miss your stories!; here, I am saying again. :D

And brilliant updates Saku! Hope, Swara takes decision in "Swasan's favour ". 😊

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res 😊 Me first!!!

Un-Res

An action packed, nerve jangling, poundingly exciting chapter. 😊

Loved the confrontation scene between Sharmishta and Swara. You know I have a mild resentment against Sharmishta from the IK/SQ days. 😆 So though what she said was out of genuine concern for her daughter, I loved the way Swara stood up for her love and her marriage, and told her mother very clearly, not to cloud her judgement through the faulty prism of her own bad experience. Sanskaar was never, and never would be a Shekar Gadodia!

Loved that thought of Swara's that no one had the right to insult her love, not even Sanskaar himself! But Saku, one doubt which arose in her mind actually struck me too. Why is Sanskaar staying there at all? At the end of SQ, he wanted to leave the "Winterland" forever, didn't he? He didn't want to be the Ice King anymore, staying there. And he wanted Swara to love him, away from what he considered an accursed place. The decision to love him back and leave, or to forsake him and stay, was left to Swara, and she chose, memorably, saying Melt Me . She was prepared to give up the mantle of the Snow Queen, too.

So why is Sanskaar staying back now, listening to (or at least considering/pretending to listen to) Annapurna's preposterous requests, showing such deep concern for Lakshya (who I am still sure, is faking memory loss). He always planned to leave with Swara, right? So what changed? Why can't they just leave together?

But while they are there, That whole bit about him pretending to be indifferent to Swara, not too bothered about the near fatal accident she had, driving her scared away from him, just in order to keep her safe from the malignant Shakuni shadowing them, was just awesome. A wonderfully well thought out plan by Sanskaar. But, Vasundara has seen through that, that canny serpent. 😆 So she has had her heart broken previously is it? Dare I ask, by whom? Did she fall in love with Durga Prasad perhaps? 😊

She really is a Chanakya, correctly identifying that the person Sanskaar wants to keep the safest, will be the one he keeps furthest away from the theater of battle. And she plans to harm his love, in order to break him. Man, this vile woman. And pretending to be a lover of peace, while making these devious plans...really deluded!

I loved the conversation Sanskaar had with Sujata. It was so poignant, the way he said that he loves with all his heart, mind and soul, and he knows no other way to love! So deep, so potent is his adoration, so very, very Sanskaar! And Sujata's words were a much needed dose of perspective---it was when Arjuna was at the other end of the Kurukshetra battlefield, that his beloved son Abhimanyu was slaughtered. Would wisdom prevail on Sanskaar to get Swara back with him, to face the winter storms together? They can ride out all that Vasundara, Kavita, Annapurna, Lakshya, Adya and Ragini throw at them---if only they could stand together...😕

A thought struck me which I scrapped you as well. 😊 That conversation of Sanskaar's with Sujata, asking how she would feel were Yashodara to return. I feel you just might be hinting of a parallel in the present generation. 😊 Vasundara might be blackmailing Sanskaar with trumped up proof of "Kavita" being alive...obviously the fake who has had plastic surgery to look like the original one. And Sanskaar, completely, passionately, irretrievably in love with Swara, wants to shield her from that pain?

Lovely, Saku. Do clarify the earlier doubt I had if possible.

Love,

Viji

Hi dr Saku😃

When I had first read Shomi getting swara to sign those papers, I was worried they were divorce papers. I am glad they aren't. That would have been even worse betrayal of swara because of her fears. this too is to cover herself up but I am glad swara heard it and also heard that sanskar was put in a fix. As swara said, it is not solution, but at least she knows the truth. i loved how even the gentlest interaction with sanskar can melt her and douse the flames that drive her to hurt herself. some things that stood out for me - sanskar saying that he lost his true love when he agreed to stay away from her because of his promise to shomi. i am glad he realise that. also the way he realised that their fates were never separate. both sanskar and shomi tried to keep swara away from the burden of the crown and chess games...without realising that the queen is involved in the battle and has her own burden to bear which even the king cannot protect her from. loved the end bit where he says, she is not weak, he is because he cannot see himself without her. 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hi Viji,

Yesterday we discussed out doubts and solved them so I won't be repeating that conversation here..The only thing I would say regarding that would be I'm amazed by your power to see through a certain plot and get many clues hidden within it. Truly you're a master when it comes to reading between the lines.

I used a heavy dose of your perceptive while I edited the chapter five. You've been so much of a help, thank you very much darling🤗

I wanted Sujata to be a little more understanding than what she is on the show and gave her a motherly instinct to know Sanskar's heart at the moment. Her advice had been spot on as the fifth chapter will explain.

Coming to Vasundara, yes her heart was broken once, please don't ask me by whom because I won't be telling you...that's Vasundara's secret to reveal. But she is a Chanakya and had recognized every weakness of her enemy perfectly. Battling her along would perhaps not be Sanskar's cup of tea, he would soon need Swara's help there.

Of cause IK and SQ would join against the troop of Frost Knights in the coming chapters and battle for their spring.

I want to know what your thoughts on the much predicted fifth chapter are, but since you're busy at the moment I would wait until you find time.

Till then thank you so much, your words always inspire me and I love you for that...no, I love you anyway!😆

Loads of love,

Saku

Part 5 it was amazing👍🏼 it was tough situation for them bt the way they handled it they again proved they r the king n queen brilliant update

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

🤗 🤗 Its always a pleasure to discuss our fics and theories with you Saku dear. 😊 Very glad and proud to have helped in such a way as I could...in fact you telling me that I did, made me feel very happy. 😊

I will be un resing my comment on your wonderful chap 5 in just a bit. 😊 Oh the SwaSan moments...

Awesome update Sakura

Sharmista had done what 😲 both to janki and swara
Its for her mistakes that swara is now suffering and Shekar is a man with no heart ...
AS fro Sanskar i agree with swara we have to have faith in the ones we love many a times we try to shield them and what we end up doing is hurting them more

Why is kavita back and what does she want..

So you are saying Swara Sanskar are like ☯️ that they are complementary, interconnected and interdependent. Where one cannot exist with out the other ..If one is not there other cannot survive

waiting for Next part