OS: All that I do, I do for you... - Page 6

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Shruti😃

Okay this was a great new year morning read.

Firstly...🤣no hankies were being offered to her. great touch. thats swasan specialty after all. Kavita can have all the face tissues she wants. Buy them yourself kavs.😡

and guests and fish begin to smell after 3 days. I can just imagine how sujju would have nodded at this.😆

I adored the swara who said that I do not regret bringing kavita back to sanskaar..after all he needed to know she was alive...but Kavita will be a dheet if she interferes between swasan now. Both wanna be together.😭

She is alive great😊. But the love is over and done with. It did not work out. its not like sanky cheated on her🤢

and people move on. sanky certainly did not expect that her deadbody would run to him one day and cling on

if she has any sense she will let go. otherwise swara will have to run behind her with a broom i expect.

Loved it. and as always to the point writing.👍🏼

love--

medha.

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Bravo Shruti...👏 👏

You tackled a plot line which I'm sure, is as appealing to SwaSan fans as rotten fish more than 3 days old. 😆 And hats off for writing so elegantly, fleshing out Swara's determination, her resolve to win Sanskaar back. I particularly loved Swara's reactions towards Kavita. That white hot, possessive fury---how on earth could Kavita even think of claiming Sanskaar? He was and always would be Swara's, and Swara's alone. 👏 😳 That reaction was so sweet to read, Shruti. I will hold on to this, if, God forbid, the show portrays Swara as being a sacrificing mahaan, trying to reunite Kavita with Sanskaar. 🤢 (I really hope they won't go down that track, and reading this OS, has give me renewed hope. I heard the CVs stalk our forum, so hoping they read this! 😊)

That quote from Notting Hill was so very apt here. 😊 Loved the way Swara clearly explained to Sanskaar why she was trying to set things right for their family---its because she knows whatever hurts the family, hurts him too. She considers them her family as well, because of her relationship with him. Why couldn't they show this clear articulation on the serial. 😕

And your concluding para---I just loved, loved, loved this line: ""She wasn't sure but if she knew her husband even a little bit then she could bet that she had just earned a lifetime of a right to gaze into those eyes & study all that was reflected in them in greater details.""

You made my New Year morning more special with this one. 😊 I think I've made no secret of the fact of how much I abhor the resurrected Kavita track, but your OS gave this hackneyed melodrama a very refreshing twist. A massive pity, that the chances of seeing such a sensible treatment on the show, are next to nil. 😕

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

The Sherni is BACK!!!!!!

Originally posted by: PriyaThakur

superb os

Originally posted by: sameer24

hey thr im f9 jst a bit confused with this back frm death drama...i was dissapointed with feriha's lies hence i turned to swaragini bt nw yahan bhi wahi haal hai atleast feriha will push nd claw those who irritate her...BTW swara ki maternal grandmaa kahan hai ?? Ive started watching this she frm KC bt thr is no sign of hers

oh i think she was close to swara if not for swara she should come back for dadi to knock sm sense in her..anyway are you watching AFK ? I really miss zehra thr she was truly the soul of the show...BTW belated happy new year mere zehen se nikal gaya wish karna :(:):(

Lanny...😆😆😆 I am on roll today 😛😛
I may sound like parakeet but I wish this could have happened in show.
Just like your other OS, I loved Swara characterization here too... Ummm ... actually I loved her here more... because you know... She gave back to someone so good... It just made my shipper heart some sadist pleasure... 😆😆😆 But really how I wished Swara wouldnt have caved in front of someone so easily... That someone is still a PIA for our beloved couple and for us poor viewers.Really loved your writing Lanny... do write more... 😳
Love
Nitzy😳

Originally posted by: ..NightDragon..

Lanny...😆😆😆 I am on roll today 😛😛
I may sound like parakeet but I wish this could have happened in show.
Just like your other OS, I loved Swara characterization here too... Ummm ... actually I loved her here more... because you know... She gave back to someone so good... It just made my shipper heart some sadist pleasure... 😆😆😆 But really how I wished Swara wouldnt have caved in front of someone so easily... That someone is still a PIA for our beloved couple and for us poor viewers.Really loved your writing Lanny... do write more... 😳
Love
Nitzy😳