OS: All that I do, I do for you... - Page 4

Originally posted by: RUQAIYA10

Shruti😃

First off I love that quote from Notting Hill. Its such a simple line conveying a universal feeling. All women want is to be loved and yet men still think of us as complicated beings. 😆 So when I imagined our Desi Julia Roberts utter that line to our very own Desi Hugh Grant( Our Sanskar is just as affably charming and charismatic as the English actor was in his younger days. I know he has significantly aged😃) I couldn't help but break in to a wide toothed grin.

I liked that Swara straight away cut to the chase, stated her intentions clearly and was adamant on staying in the house to win her love back. Noticed the dry and sarcastic reproaches to Kavita. 😆 That 's definitely a Sanskaresque quality!

Sadly I don't see this happening in the show. Or it just might who knows! The Swara in the show is known to always do the right thing but it all depends on how she perceives the whole scenario.

Fab writing Shruti
Wishing you a very Happy and Prosperous New Year.
See you in 2016😃🤗

Originally posted by: princess_tara

Beautiful OS

Originally posted by: sameer24

stop it yaar these kind of amazing works are making me hate this show more nd more
ON TOPIC:excellent OS bt aisa kuch nahi hoga show me im damn sure...
I jst hope the makers show sm human emotions in swara jealousy,hatred or evn lust..LOL

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Shruti 🤗

I am so happy I woke up to the last day of 2015 to this. Perfect antidote to the negative and depressing crap we are having to tolerate. This was beautifully written and I loved it. What I wouldn't give to see a Swara like this. I also want to specially applaud you for this as I know how you struggle with aspects of Swara's character but you managed to really delve into her psyche so wonderfully and even more so, you projected her as totally dignified and a really deserving person. I loved how you had her explain why she behaves the way she does- which is so realistic and I totally see her that way too. Also I really liked that she dealt with her love so maturely. Its always hard as a writer to do justice to characters who are not your "favourites" and of course the true test of one is doing just that; you did that with aplomb so kudos for that. Needless to say, I felt like smashing Kavita's head in (lol!!) and locking SwaSan in a room with the key thrown away until they announce that Swara is expecting!! 🤣

Lovely work hon! Xoxoxo

Originally posted by: anjum78

Hey...superb yaar i just love d way u wrote it...n its very soothable to us in current situation...

But honestly yaar i don't want something like dis to happen in d show...swara is not ragini n she should'nt be...if u love someone let him free to take his decision...let him decide whom he wants to live wid...so swara should not haq jataoing like dis jab tak sanskar na chahe...

But dear u should continue dis...plzzz...

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Woaaahhh.. This is something that I wish to on my screen and I m damn sure, if such thing happens, every ounce of Sanskar would believe Swara and than he would b the one protecting them from the world.. Swara wouldnt have not do even a single thing.. But If Only, This Happens !

This was really a blessing in disguise n m literally Overwhelmed 😆
Thanks for such an amazing story babe that fulfills our wishes so nicely !

Originally posted by: mridulakrishnan

goshhh,,its awesome dear...i just loved it ... i know this is not going to happen in shown..they will separate swasan...but its really nice to see something like this...love u dear for giving this os...

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice.. 😊

Originally posted by: Sanavi

What an amazing interpretation of CV's mind. U surely made the standards high which the CV's won't be able to reach. Poor CV'S nd poor SwaSan shippers.
Nyways the OS is really good. Loved hw Swara ceased to be Mahaan nd thgt only abt her nd mainly Sanskaar.