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RUQAIYA10

@RUQAIYA10

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Shruti😃

First off I love that quote from Notting Hill. Its such a simple line conveying a universal feeling. All women want is to be loved and yet men still think of us as complicated beings. 😆 So when I imagined our Desi Julia Roberts utter that line to our very own Desi Hugh Grant( Our Sanskar is just as affably charming and charismatic as the English actor was in his younger days. I know he has significantly aged😃) I couldn't help but break in to a wide toothed grin.

I liked that Swara straight away cut to the chase, stated her intentions clearly and was adamant on staying in the house to win her love back. Noticed the dry and sarcastic reproaches to Kavita. 😆 That 's definitely a Sanskaresque quality!

Sadly I don't see this happening in the show. Or it just might who knows! The Swara in the show is known to always do the right thing but it all depends on how she perceives the whole scenario.

Fab writing Shruti
Wishing you a very Happy and Prosperous New Year.
See you in 2016😃🤗

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928730

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

stop it yaar these kind of amazing works are making me hate this show more nd more
ON TOPIC:excellent OS bt aisa kuch nahi hoga show me im damn sure...
I jst hope the makers show sm human emotions in swara jealousy,hatred or evn lust..LOL

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Shruti 🤗

I am so happy I woke up to the last day of 2015 to this. Perfect antidote to the negative and depressing crap we are having to tolerate. This was beautifully written and I loved it. What I wouldn't give to see a Swara like this. I also want to specially applaud you for this as I know how you struggle with aspects of Swara's character but you managed to really delve into her psyche so wonderfully and even more so, you projected her as totally dignified and a really deserving person. I loved how you had her explain why she behaves the way she does- which is so realistic and I totally see her that way too. Also I really liked that she dealt with her love so maturely. Its always hard as a writer to do justice to characters who are not your "favourites" and of course the true test of one is doing just that; you did that with aplomb so kudos for that. Needless to say, I felt like smashing Kavita's head in (lol!!) and locking SwaSan in a room with the key thrown away until they announce that Swara is expecting!! 🤣

Lovely work hon! Xoxoxo

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AWESM_GAL

@AWESM_GAL

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Hey...superb yaar i just love d way u wrote it...n its very soothable to us in current situation...

But honestly yaar i don't want something like dis to happen in d show...swara is not ragini n she should'nt be...if u love someone let him free to take his decision...let him decide whom he wants to live wid...so swara should not haq jataoing like dis jab tak sanskar na chahe...

But dear u should continue dis...plzzz...

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Woaaahhh.. This is something that I wish to on my screen and I m damn sure, if such thing happens, every ounce of Sanskar would believe Swara and than he would b the one protecting them from the world.. Swara wouldnt have not do even a single thing.. But If Only, This Happens !

This was really a blessing in disguise n m literally Overwhelmed 😆
Thanks for such an amazing story babe that fulfills our wishes so nicely !

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mridulakrishnan

@mridulakrishnan

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

goshhh,,its awesome dear...i just loved it ... i know this is not going to happen in shown..they will separate swasan...but its really nice to see something like this...love u dear for giving this os...

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Kamala05
Lovely OS Shruti .
I loved the way you described Swara's thoughts . This Swara is not Mahaan , she is just a possessive lover . And if we perceive this work separately from the crap episode , Swara's reaction is perfect . I loved her touching confession to Sanskaar and her fitting reply to Kavitha.

However if this happens in the show I won't be happy as I want Swara to stay away from MM till Sanskaar gives her confidence that he still loves her. They are not like normal husband and wife, their life is too complicated as of now, so Swara cannot behave like a wife who have rights on her husband.

Thank you so much Shruti for the PM.

Thanks Kamala.

Guess you will be getting your wish on the show after all😆

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: foresight
👏 👏 👏
beautiful shruti. Like this no bars hold swara who goes and grabs what is only hers...her sanskar. loved loved loved it. i think sanskar would as well if she did this in the show, he was really proud of her when she gave it back to ragini. if only we could have such intense scenes in the show as well

thanks sapna

ya if only...

though the latest TM video confirms nothing even remotely similar is gonna happen🥱

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Vaibhi.
Nice OS 😊
Thanks for PM

thanks Pubi

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Shruti,
Just finished reading your OS and your take on Swara is really commendable - I really admire women who are strong and willing to take a stand without being desperate or arrogant - it is a pity that the CVs do not believe in such women. It was good reading about a Swara who is clear in her thoughts and in her actions especially in light of how she is portrayed on screen - as a weepy, self sacrificing person.

Hi Nyna

Ya unfortunately CVs only know 2 types of characters; the overly good & the overly bad🥱 there is no grey shade anywhere & if at all they manage to find it they make sure they either reform the character to a saint or destroy it by turning it into a satan

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