Swasan - Yeh Dooriyaan.... Part 17 & 18 Updated - Page 5

nice update dear n thanku for pm

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awesome update
yeh cheap idea kavita ka tha kya???
awww sanskaar he trust her n imp is swara knws this
omg precap sounds interesting
raglak team up

I read all parts in one go it was amazing. Continue soon cant wait to see Swasan together soon

Nice update . Can t wait to see swasan .

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Hi Guys, here's next part.

I want a suggestion, do you guys want me to end this FF in maybe 3-4 more parts or want me to continue it. Your comments would be really useful and also tell if you liked the part.

Enjoy the read

PART - 9

Sanskar gets a call "wo mil gaya hai ?, perfect , use lekar MM aa jao"

Sanskar call everybody to hall

Swara was standing in a corner , feeling embarrassed after yesterday's incident

He pulls her and brings her to the centre and says " Kavita ne kal bahut bada ilzam lagaya tha swara pe , and sabne man bhi liya , bina kuh puche, bina kuch mane. Aur aaj mai sabit karunga ki ek bar fir humne swara ko galat samjha."

He makes swara face her back and slowly removes hair to one side to show her neck "he lovingy caresses the needle mark on her neack " someone drugged her , via needle and hence she does not remember anything"

Kavita in little frustration , but this does not prove anything, what about the photos

Sanskar " madhav , use andar le aoo" madhav brings a guy in MM , he is the same one in photo

Sanskar " Tum is ladki ko jante ho pointing towards swara? He looks at kaveri and says han " to batao iska naam kya hai " ji swara " swara aage? He gets nervous sankar holds his collar ans asks again "tum ise jante ho "' the man blurts out seeing the rage in his eyes, nahi sahab mai nahi janta , mujhe ye sab karne ke paise mile the . "'kisne diye the paise " before sanskar could make him speak on kaveri's indication the guy ran out of MM , laksh tries to catch him but he was gone.

Everyone consoles swara and leave for their room.

Sanskar comes to swara who is standing as statue. He again careses the mark on her neck and put her hair back in place . he then caresses her cheeks , swara looks at him with teary eyes.

Swara" you din't say anaything to me yesterday bcoz you wanted to prove me innocent ? you believed me ?"

Sanskar" I always did and always will"

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Kavita is crying bitterly in her room

Kaveri comes there and she hugs her

Kavita " aunty , sanskar kabhi mera nahi ho payega, wo us swara pe trust karta hai par mujhpe nahi , mai uske bina kaise jiyungi aunty. "

Kaveri " tu chinta na kar , teri shadi sanskar se hogi aur wo bhi 3 din ke andar "

Kavita " par kaise ?"

Kaveri " tu kuch mat soch , kal subah tak teri shadi ki tayyari hogi" tu aaj mere kamre mai hi so ja

(mujhe ye karna hi hoga , wo bhi kavita ko bina bataye"

...

Kaveri is shouting and calling everybody to hall

AP - aap chilla kyu rahi hai

Kaveri - aap dekehngi to aap bhi yahi karengi , sanskar ne jo kiya hai wo accha nahi kiya

Sujata - aisa ke kar diya mhare chore ne

Kaveri drags sujata and brings her to kavita's room , everybody follows

Sujata - kavita so rahi hai , isme hum ke kare and then suddenly she turns and they see sanskar also in bed , with kavita

Everybody shocked and they turn to look at swara , she could not believe her eyes

Kaveri announces " ab ye shadi 3 hafte mai nahi , 3 din mai hogi , ragini tum tayyari karo " Aur han kavita ko iske =bare mai koi nahi batayega , hum nahi chahte wo aur sadme mai jaye"

...

After a while , sanskar gains his consciousness, and finds himself in kavita's room with kavita sleeping near him . he panics and gets out of bed . this wakes Kavita up and he asks"' mai yaha kaise ?'

Sanskar tumhe yad nahi

Sanskar " nahi mujhe nahi yad , mai last time apne kamre mai tha"

Kavita "when you came in my room , you were drunk and then you tried to... and pretends to be shy

Sanskar goes out and hears DP " Sujjata , ye shadi to 3 din mai hokar hi rahegi , hum sabne apbi jo upr dekha , uske bad yahi sahi hai "

Uttara - "par bade papa , swara bhabhi ka kya?

Sankar comes in his sesnse" everybody has seen it , swara too ... No ,no ,no I need to talk to her par kya kahoge usse jakar , that you were sleeping with someone else, that you claim to love her but cheated on her " no , its your punishment Sanskar , leave her alone, you have hurted her enough"

...

Sankar leaves for his room

Swara is pacing up and down in her room , "sanskar can't do this in his sense , I know it very well , but I also know in his guilt he will agree to get married . I need to find out a way to get him out of this trap" mujhe usse bat karni hogi"

Sanskar's room , swara enters and see sanskar sitting on the edge of the bed , with his head in hishands

Swara " Tension mat lo , mai sab sahi kar dungi " he looks up and she holds his hands

Mujhe pata hai ye sab chal hai kavita aur kaveri ki

Sanskar " nahi swara, kavita aisi nahi hai , wo aisa kabhi karne ki soch bhi nahi sakti. Meri galti hai swara aur mai use aise nahi chod sakta"

Swara " To tum ye shadi karoge ?"

Sanskar " waise hi kavita ki zaindagi tham gayi hai , aur aaj jo maine harkat ki hai , uske bad mera use apna lena hi thik hai , han mai tumse pyar karta hu , par ye bhi sach hai ki maine tumhe dhokah diya"

Swara " tum itne mahan kabse ban gaye?"

Sanskar' tumahri sangat ka asar hai "

They both smile and cry at the same time with their forehead touching each other

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Kaveri to Ragini " Hume in papers pe sign chahiye"

Ragini " aur kya hai in papers pe ,"

Kaveri " yahi ki tum MM ki aadhi jaydad , kavita ke nam kar rahi ho , akhir wo bhi is ghar ki hone wali bahu hai , uska bhi haq hai "

Ragini laughing " aur hum aisa kyu karenge"

Kaveri " kyunki , tum malkin rehna chahti ho apna badla lena chahti ho , aur is ghar se dhakke marka baha rnahi nikalna chahti " she holds her hand tightly and pains ragini suddenly laksh comes and frees ragini of kaveri

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Ragini is pacing in her room up and down , "Dadima ye kaveri hume apne isharo par nahi nacha sakti "

Dadi- lado ke karenge hum

Laksh sitting on the couch says " ahem , mai madad kar sakta hu , agar malkin chahe to and laughss

Ragini " hume apki koi mada nahi chahiye, aur hum ap bar bharosa kyu kare?

Laksh " akhir property to mere papa ki hai

Dadi lado , lele iski madad , warna sabkuch chala jayega"

Laksh ' sahi kaha dadi , par meri ek shart hai ,

Ragini kya ?"

Laksh " is kamre mai tum meri har kahi bat manogi"

Ragini thinks for a while and says " thik hai "

Laksh "' to mission 1 - ye shadi rokni hogi , na hogi shadi , na transfer hogi property. And I know koi hai , jo haamri madad karega

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Swara; room

Swara - Laksh " r u mad? Hum ragini ki madad karenge

Ragini " dekho swara , hum jante hai tum bhi nahi chahti , ki sanskar ki shadi ho , to bas usi mai hamari mada karo"

Laksh " bhai ke liye hi sahi , ek bar fir swaragini ban jao "

Precap

Marriage preparation starts

Ragini , Swara and Laksh on their mission to stop the wedding

Raglak moments

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Superb updates..so much twist nd turns.. 👍🏼

nice one...swara will save sanskar like he saved her...looking forward to it.

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Hi Guys ,here's next part , it's more on Raglak's bonding. Thanks you all for supporting me to continue with the FF , will try to make it more interesting

PART - 10

Kavita's room

Kavita " sach aunty , sanskar aur gharwale is shadi ke liye man gaye ? par 3 din mai shadi kyu aur kaise kiya aapne ye sab ?"

Kaveri " wo sab mat socho tum , aaj sham mehandi hai , kal sangeet aur padso haldi aur fir shadi , tum uski tension lo, finally tumhe tumhara pyar milne wala hai "

Kavita happily hugs Kaveri

Kaveri goes outside MM someone seems to follow her , it was ragini

She reaches a garden restaurant and waits for someone , a girl comes Kaveri hands her huge amount of money and says " dubara hume call mat karna , aur jitni jaldi ho is sehar se chali jao " ragini clicks a picture of the girl

...

Raglaks room

Ragini " hume lagta hai kuch to gadbad hai , kavita ka shadi ke liye chaukna , aur kaveri ka us ladki ko itne paise dena , ho na ho uss rat sanskar ke sath kavita nahi koi aur tha , aur kaveri bas sanskar ko phasa rahi hai"

Laksh " par wo aisa kyu karegi ? sanskar se kya dushmani hai use?

Ragini " use ye property chahiye , jo kavita se asani se hasil kar sakti hai , isliye ye shadi jaruri hai" ab age kya karna hai

Ragini turns to face laksh , who was standing at the edge of bed , they both fall together on bed and they have intense eyelock , they remember their pre wedding frindship and recent happenings and get seperated .

Laksh " filhal so jao , kal kuch sochte hai

Laksh takes his bottle to drink , ragini comes and tell" aaj hum bhi piyenge , laksh is hsocked in the time ragini takes the bottle and starts gulping, after a while both get drunk

Laksh talks about how his rejeted ragini time and again , how sweet she used to be , Ragini talks about how much she used to love laksh and what she has becomes now, she does not wants to do all this but there's nobody to undertsand her and lover her. Both look at each other , they get very close and mesmerized by each other , suddenly ragini breaks the eyelock and goes to sleep , laksh also sleeps

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Ragini and Laksh wake up and remember the happenings of last night , both realize that there might be some goodness left inside each other and both decide not to humiliate each other.

MM has been decorated in green ad light pink curtains and flowers for the Mahanadi ceremony . swara and sanskar has avoided each other since their previous meeting as swara don't want to hurt sanskar

Guest have arrived and AP , Sujata , Uttara and pari are serving drnks to guest as they used to do in new year part and else, Ragini comes " Ma , chahciji , Uttara , bhabhi ,ap sabko ye sab kanre ki jarurat nahi hai , thy look at each other , ghar mai shadi hai , hum chate hai , aap sab usme dhyan de , ye sare kam baki log dekh leneg, kaka ,inse trays lijiye aur serve kijiye" and she leaves

Laksh sees all this and smiles

Sujata to AP " jiji , ab ye ke naya natak hai ?

AP " pata nahi sujata , chalo mehandi ki tayyari karte hai

Sujata " ke tayyari jijji , aapne sanskar ko dekha hai , kaise murjha gaya hai mhara chora

AP " Chinta mat karo , hum bharo sa hai looking at swara, wo sab thik kar degi"

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Mehnadi function starts , kavita is wearing a light pink lehnga and sanskar is wearing a bottle green kurta and looking dashing as the kurta constrast his bright skin color. He is standing in a corner with laksh and adarsh , when swara enters the hall , sanskar could not take his eyes off her she was wearing a light green saree with her hair open and an angelic smile spreading oevr her face.

Laksh and adarsh tease sanskar, he could not take his eyes off her in the entire function.

Kaveri asks sujata to bring shagun ki mehandi , and she brings 2 cones

Mehandi girls try to apply mehandi on kavita , but it does not work , she asaks swara to give her hand to try it on her , and asks her name and hence writes s on her palm. Kavita sees this and rebukes mehandi girl to spoile her shagun ki mehandi and asak swar to wash her hands

Pari , Uttara and AP who was seeing all this , Pari to AP " Ma, shagun ki kenhandi akhir swar ke hi hathon pe lagi "

Swara was washing her hand when she sees sanskar in kitchen , she goes there an shows her hand

Sanskar " kya kar rahi ho?"

Swara " ye dekho ,

kya ? half infinity?"

Swara " what ? no , its s'

Sanakar oh , for swara "

Swara "nahi , well han but kuch aur bhi ho sakta hai ...

Sanskar rebukes her and asks her to go

Swara " sanskar , mujhe mere divorce ke sath almony chahiye "

Sanskar "mockingly, mere pas paise nahi hai swara,par aur kuch chahiye to mai jarur dunga"

After a pause

Swara" mai chahti hu , ki agle 3 din , mai tumhe wo sari khusiyan du , which you deserve , which we deserve

sanskar gets sad " aisa kuch nahi ho sakta swara , kyu khud ko takleef de rahi ho, meri mano to chali jao yaha se, ye sab karne ki jarurat nahi hai "

Swara gets teary eyes and is leaving , sanskar feels bad and says cleaning her tears pata hai , kehte hai , mehandi ka rang jitne gehra hota hai , uska hone wala pati usse bahut pyar karta hai , I want to see the color "

Both look into each other's eyes which had promise to keep each other happy forever

Precap

Raglak and Emotional Swasan moments,