Swasan - Yeh Dooriyaan.... Part 17 & 18 Updated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Guys, I am a silent SWASAN fan here, but today's spoiler (Kavita's Entry) has totally inspired me to write something positive for our swasan . Well at some point of time I always wished Kavita's entry because it'll bring swasan close forever. So I am writing a prologue on how will the story of Swaragini go forward with major focus on Swasan story. If you like it , I will continue with the full story.
Index
PART - 1 : Page 1
PART 2 - Page - 2
PART 3 - Page- 2
PART 4(a) - Page - 3
PART - 4(b) - Page - 4
PART 5 - Page - 5
PART 6 - Page - 6
PART 7 -Page - 7
PART 8 - Page -8
PART 9 -Page 9
PART 10 - Page 10
PART 11- Page 11
PART 12 -Page -12
part - 13 - Page- 13
PART 14 - Page 14
PART 15 - Page 14
PART 16 - Page -15
PART 17 & 18 - Page -16


PROLOGUE:-
Sanskar (to himself in his lovely blue bedroom, with on hand touching his forehead) - I just dont' get it, bade papa ne is ghar se jane se kyu mana kar diya . kya reason ho sakta hai ? lakh puchne par bhi bas yahi jawab "hum majboor hai". Kya Swara ka shak sahi tha , kya sachme kuch raaz hai ... Swara ... (He remembers her smile and then the moment she doubted him ) mujhe uske bare mai kuch nahi sochna..

SWARA to sarmishtha- Maa, Ragini ne bahut tamasha kar diya hai , aaj to usne badi maa ke sath harkat karke sari hade par kardi hai . Mujhe jald se jald bade papa ka raaz pata karna hoga. She thought she will find the secret to bring peace in her family but little she knew she would open a Pandora's box which will just ruin her own life and her LOVE .. her Sanskaar...

PART - 1
Swara Unknowingly brings Kavita to MM . Everybody is shocked and turns to look at Sanskar What would be his reaction ?


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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
wooow nice continue it plzzz 😛😃😃😃
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nice start..waiting for the 1st part
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plz continue soon n dont hv gaps in updates do it soon
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Part - 1
Swara sitting in her room and playing "tum saath ho" tunes on her Guitar and thinking about Sanskaar , his rudeness and that one tear of hope which he gave to her before leaving MM.
Swara - I have to solve all this soon. I was already late in realising my love for sanskarr , I cannot stay without him anymore. Tomorrow only I have to find that veiled women.
She looks at the photograph again and suddenly notices the tattoo on the lady's hand and neck.
Swara - These tattoo looks very different , maybe i can get clue about the lady from this tattoo.
She searches on internet for the shops around Kolkata that might be involved in making such tattoo designs and she found 3 in total , which made similar patterns
Swara - Atleast I have some lead . I will start my search tomorrow morning
...
At MM :-
Annapurna - Ji , Hume samajah nahiaa raha hum is ghar mai rekar itna apman kyu seh rahe hai. Hamare bete itne kabil to hai ki fir se apni nyi pehchan bana sake. Is badtamiz ladki ki aur kitni jillat jhelni padegi hume. App hume kuch jawab to diijiye
DP (To himself) - Hume maaf kardo AP , agar humne apni jaban kholi to Maheshwai khanddan ki neev hil jayegi aur sabse jyada asar hoga ... SANSKAAR par. Hume apne bacche ko doobara nahi kho sakte.
...
Next Day :-
Swara has already asked for 2 tattoo centre about the misterious lady but got no clue , third shop was her last hope.
Swara - Bhaiya . Please yad kariye aapne kabhi dekha ho is madam ko, inhone yahi se banwaya ho ye tattoo.
Shopkeeper- Maam , roz yaha itne log ate hai , record rakhna mushkil hai and aapko na to naam pata hai na phone no. kaise track karu mai.
Swara (to herself) - Kyu har ummed tuti hui dikh rahi hai ... and engorssed in her thought she collides with someone.
Swara - I am so sorry maam
But before swara could see her , she left in a hurry with a note in swara's hand.
NOTE - "If you want to know the truth , meet me in 1 hr at following address" all your uestions would be answered
Swara - OMG , she wants me to meet her. Thank God , now i hope everything will sort out soon. Should I inform someone about it , maybe after i know the secret.
...
1 hour Later at the given address :-
It was a huge mansion just like MM more elegant and classy , full of chandeliers and glass work .
Swara enters the Mansion and is little scared of what the secret if going to be. Maid asks her to wait and offers water.
Then enters a lady , sophisticated in style (extremely opposite of annapurna) Swara stands to greet her and she indicates her to sit down.
Swara - Who are you and why am i being called here ? and how are you connected to Dp's past?
The lady introduces herself as "Kaveri Mah(eshwari )... (incomplete) Khanna"
"Was she about to say Maheshwari ?" - swara was stunned to hear that but jerked her thought off . I am just dreaming
Kaveri - I want to ruin DP , yes you heard it rigtht not because what he did to me but because what he did to that innocent girl . I wont' let the history repeat itself
Swara - what has bade papa done to you ? and whch girl . I am really sure there is some huge misunderstanding and I can explain it to you.
Kaveri - Come with me . You will get all your answers
...
Kaveri takes Swara to a room , a girl is sitting on the edge of the bed and her cheeks are soaked in tears , she looks very pale and sad
Kaveri poiting towards the girl - I found her 5 years back in a hospital declared dead. She was in come for past 4.5 years and in last 6 months since she regained her consciousness, i treated her like my daughter but i could never bring smile on her face. I tried to find the reason behind it and thats DP and his utter arrogance and hitlership. He was the cause for snatching the smile of this innocent girl and I would make him pay for it
and I am telling you this so that you can go and decalre my war on him. I will make him pay his deeds. All of them .
Swara was all atunned and shocked she wanted to know more , she couldnt see the pain of that girl. And she decides to ask her bade papa what he has done and why . She has trust on him and she knows he would have a perfect justifictaion for same.
Swara - I want to take your daughter in front of my family and make you correct by proving you wrong. My family is always right.
Kaveri - Ok ( that's what i want swara , I want "YOU" to take her to MM )
Swara calls sanskar
Sanskar - Why are you calling me ? neither i need your help nor willing to do any
Swara - I found out the secret of Bade papa , be at MM in one hour (I will sort everything sanskaar )
Precap
Swara Brings Kaveri's Daughter to MM and everyone is shocked and looks at each other . Sankaar enters MM and asks
Sankaar - Why did you call me swara ? what;s the reason
Swara - The reason is behind you...
Sankaar turns and ... KAVITAA...


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hmmm nice n mysterious update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here is the PART 2 guys , I know no Swasan scenes yet, but that's what story demands .But there will be in next update.
Do leave feedback

PART - 2

Swara enters MM and says to DP , pointing towards Kaveri's daughter (she is accompanied by her caretaker aunty)

Bade papa yahi apki majboori ki wajah thi na , le ayi hu ise mai sabke samne , koi parda nahi raha ab .

Dadi to Ragini - is chori ne to khud hi apne pairo pe kulhadi mar li aur ise is ghar mai le ayi , mhare ko to bas sanskar ka intezar hai

Sujata to AP - Jiji , ye na ho sake hai , anarth ho jayega agar sanskar ne ye dekh liya to. 5 saal, pure 5 saal bith diye usne , aur aaj ye chori yaha zinda khadi hai . kya hoga mhare chore ka

AP - Hume to kuch samajh nahi aa raha

Sanskar enters MM , and asks Swara - Kya hua tumne sabko yaha aise kyu khada kar rakah hai , ek behen hukm chalane ke liye kafi nahi thi

Swara- meri bat suno , fir tane marna , mujhe bade papa ki pareshani ki wajah mil gayi hai

Sankar - Aur kya hai wo wajah

Swara - tumhare piche hai

Sanskar turns and sees a girl in blue anarkali suit , he was stunned not by her beauty but by her mere existence. It can't be true. He is definitely dreaming. His throat is choked , he clenched his fist to control the flow of tears brimming his eyes, all those moments of past encounters him , he can feel a chill in his spine.

KAVITA ... That's all everyone could hear

Swara - Kavita? Sanskar's kavita ? she felt as if she couldn't breathe . she herself brought destruction to her own house. She felt dizzy and about to faint.

Girl ran towards sanskaar and hugged him . sanskaar I am alive , I am so sorry ofr hurting you for so many years. Tears rolled her eyes.

Sanskaar stood there , numb . He din't know what to react. He freed himself and rushed outside the house. He was not prepared . he wanted to stay alone else he would go mad . He started his car and left.

Kavi - Sanskaar , don't leave me again and faints

...

Doctor is called - She just regained from coma , any shock would be dangerous to her.

Ragini is talking to kavis caretaker and declares. She will stay in MM only unless she feels better and gets married to sanskaar . Waise bhi swara aur sanskaarr ka divorce file ho hi chuka hai

Evryone is shocked

Sujata - Ye chori yaha nahi reh sake hai .aur shadi , sawal hi nahi uthta

Ragini - Chcachiji ye hamara ghar hai , aur hamara faisla . Humne kaha tha aapse , apni jethani to hum hi dhudhenge.

Laksh- Tum pagal ho gayi ho. Bhai ke marji jane bina kuch bhi bole ja rahi ho

Ragini - Apko to khush hona chhaiye, sanskar swara ke nahi rahe to wo apki ho sakti hai

Laksh - Ragini iii!!!!!!!

AP - Bas karo . ise aram karne do . Hume sanskar ka intezar karna chahiye

...

Sanskar comes home

Ragini - Sanskar , Kavita bimar hai , doctor ne kaha hai koi bhi shock nahi le sakti. unhe apki shadi aur apke dusre pyar ke bare mai pata chalega to kya hoga, wo to yahi sochti hai ki ... app samajh rahe hai na. khair , Malkin hone ke nate humne faisla liya hai wo yahi rahengi, jab tak thik nahi ho jati . Apko koi aitraz to nahi hai na ?

Everyone looking at sanskar and hoping for him to say that yes he has problem

Sankar - NAHI ... and leaves for his room

Evryone gasped

Sujata - pata nahi mhare chore ki zindagi se bengalano ka saya kab chotega

Swara was standing in corner of the hall and crying. She was too shocked to say anything , she was more worried about sanskar and cursing herself for opening his long healed wounds.

Ragini comes there and says - ab tum khud jaogi ya aur koi tamasha karna hai . btw thanks meri jethani ko ghar lane ke liye. Sanskar ki shadi mai hum tumhe jarur bulayenge

Swara - bas ragini , use to pata bhi nahi ki ...

Ragini - Pata nahi to pata chal jayega... akhir pehla pyar hai unka , bhula thodi payenge aur karib rahenge to pas bhi ayenge

Swara leaves from there with only one thing in mind "Does sanskar still loves kavita? She never cared to ask him that "

She has to find it out and soon

Precap -

Kavita tries to get close to sanskaar but he tries to maintain a distance

Swara wants to talk to sanskar , but sanskar is not ready for it

How will swara talk to him ?

Intense Swasan moments

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Posted: 10 years ago
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jst read d both d parts
nice story
update soon n do pm m if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Guys , I am back with part 3 . It has swasan scenes . It is little longer than previous once. Hope you like it . Do leave comments

PART -3

Swara and Sanskar standing in their rooms and remembering their past moments , sanskar holding swara in arms fom hospital , fillinf her maang, real marriage , diwali scenes, kiss scene and more.

BG Music

Dilon ki mohabbat ko bandhe kyun haye re

Daayre daayre daayre daayre

Hai kyu faasle darmiyaan leke aaye re

Daayre daayre dayre daayre

Kaanch ke woh khwaab naazuk thhe humare saare, Chhune se hi tuttne lage

Mannaton mein umr bharka saath jinka manga, Humsafar woh chhutne lage

Na marna munasib jiya bhi na jaaye re, haye re

Daayre daayre daayre daayre

Both come out of their thought by the knock on their doors

At MM

Sujata - Chore tu theek to hai na ? Ye sab ke ho gaya sanskar , ye yaha kaise ? tune to kaha thaa..

Sanskar - han mom mai janta hu, pata kiya maine. Mere hospital se jane ke bad somebody took her with them . she was alive .

Sujata - Tu aaj bhi usse ?

Sanskar - Mom 5 saal, 5 saal ,mai is guilt mai jita raha ki meri kavita iss duniya mai nahi hai , iske liye maine apne pariwar ko barbad karne ki thani. Aur aaj wo mere samne khadi hai . Maa wo has rahi hai mujhpe. Itni badi galti kardi maine mom. Wo zinda thi aur mai use chod ke aa gaya. Aur bina kuch jane sabko barbad karne chal diya. Mom aaj jo kuch bhi galat ho rha hai iss ghar mai meri wajah se. Mia sabka gunehgar hu , aapka , bade papa ka , laksh ka ragini ka aur... Swara ka

He slide down the side of bed and cries , sujata controls him

He thinks swara will hate her now as he ruined her life for girl who's not even dead

At Baadi

Shomi comes to see swara and hands her food . Shona tumne kuch nhai khaya hai , thoda sa kha lo

Swara- Maa maine aisa kaise kar diya. Jis dard ko usne iitni mushkil se dabaya tha , jis dard ka marham bani thi mai , usi ko maine apne hathon se hi kured diya. (She is crying a lot)

Shomi- Shona tu ye kya bol rahi hai , kaisa dard , kise?

Swara - Ma, kavita zinda hai , aur mai hi use le ayi sanskar ki zindagi mai

Shomi- KyA? Par kaise? Shona tune sanskar se bat ki

Swara - Bas yahi to karna hai , wo mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karega ma. Kabhi nahi .

Shomi- usse bat kar fir kuch faisla le. Tu itni kanjor nahi hai aur na hi tera pyar.

...

Next Day

Swara calls sanskar and asks her to meet , sanskar agrees as he wants to make sure swara hates him.

Ragini overhears their conversation - Hum in dono ko ek nahi hone de sakte, inki MU kabhi khatm nahi ho sakti

Swara reaches MM and looks for sanskar , Uttara says he is in his room

Meanwhile, ragini comes to Kavita in guest room

R - ab tabiyat kaisi hai apki?

K- Mai thik hu aap kaun hai ?

R- Mai Ragini laksh maheshwari, is ghar ki malkin , aur apki hone wali devrani

K -( blushes)

R - Aaapko sanskar yad kar rahe the , aap unse mil kyu nhai ati , wo apne kamre mai honge

K - use thoda time dena chhaiye , he must be in shock

R- Shock nahi khushi , unka pyar wapas aa gaya hai , khush hai wo. Aap jayiye aur miliye

In sanskar's room

S - kavita tum yaha? Tabiyat thik hai ab?

Kavita comes close to him and hugs him , but sanskar don't hug her back , she senses it

K - Mai janti hu tum shock mai ho , aur tumhe ye absorb karne ke lye time chhaiye ki mai zinda hu. Mai samjhati hu sanskar.

S - nahi aisi bat nahi hai

K- Hum ek doosre se pyar karte hai aur mere liye abhi sirf yahi kafi hai ... accha chalo ye sab chodo . ek bar I love you bol do

S - Kya ? (shocked )

K - Teary eyes ? tum mujhse pyar karte ho na ?

Sanskar remembers her state and and also notices swara outside the room says "I love you " (in his mind "swara")

Kavita gets happy and goes towards the window to look outside

Ragini makes sure swara overhears all this

She runs crying from there, sanskar hears her footstep and follows to see swara, he clenches his fist and force it onto the wall "I made her cry , again, but for last time. I am sorry swara , I had to do this " and takes a deep breath.

Swara runs out of MM and cries bitterly. He still loves her.

BG Music

Kyu dard hai itna , tere ishq mai , rabba ve

AT night (MM) Ragini with Dadi

Dadi - Ke hua ladoo , itni pareshan kyu hai

R- dadi ma court ke orders aye hai , swara aur sanskar ko 6 mahine sath rehna hai , ek chath ke neeche. Hum ye nahi hone de sakte

Dadi - chinta na kar ladoo , wo ek na honge. Hamare pas aag hai "Kavita"

R- Haan dadima sahi kaha aapne

At Baadi

Shomi - Shona court ke orders hai , jana to padega hi na

Swara - par ma wo muhse pyar nahi karta, mai jakar uski mushkile aur nahi badhana chahti. Aur kavita use to kuch pata nahi , use kya kahungi , kis haq se hu mai us ghar mai ?

Shomi - Shona , tujhe 6 mahine to waha rehna hi hoga.ky pata jo tujhe dikh raha ho , wo sach na ho.

...

At MM

Swara comes to MM

Ragini to everyone - Swara ko yaha 6 mahine rehna hai , par wo sanskar ki patni ki tarah nahi reh sakti aur na hi is ghar ki sadasya ki tarah , humne faisla liya hai wo kavita ki caretaker ki tarah yaha rahegi.

Sanskar - Swara aisa kuch nahi karegi (looking at swara, expecting her to say no too)

R - Ap kavita ki firkr kijiye , swara ki nahi

S wara - mujhe koi problem nahi hai . bas 6 mahine katne hai .

Sanskar - pata hi tha mujhe , tumhe koi pyar nahi hai mujhse , bas is ghr mai ane ka bahana tha wo

Swara - sahi kaha tumne

Everyone is shocked to hear it

Swara thinks that since sanskar still loves kavita, she should help kavita get better and do her penance.

Both thinks to keep distance from each other, but they both love each other immensely. Kavita has quite a time noticed them looking at each other and hence she turns possessive for sanskar.

Also ragini instills kavita against swara trying to woo her sanskar.

At night ,

Kavita - Swara plz mere liye doodh le aoo , mujhe nind nahi aa rahi , sanskar bhi abhi tak mujhse dur bhag raha hai . she tries to gaze swara's reaction but she is neutral and goes to get milk.

Meanwhile ragini asks swara to do someother work and goes to kavita

R- arey kavita app abhi tak soyi nahi ?

K - Wo hum doodh pikar sone wale the, pata nahi swara ko itna waqt kaha lag gaya.

R- oh wo to kitchen mai sanskar,,, I mean aati hogi. Hum chalte hai aap so jayiye, use to time lag jayega

R leaves K thinking about sanskar and swara , K leaves for kitchen , meanwhile dadi manages to send sanskar to kitchen

Kitchen

Sanskar accidentally breaks glass and turns to get stuff to clear it when same time swara comes in and steps on glass

Swara - aaah ... And she slips to fall on glass

Sanskar holds her hand and pulls her towards himself , both fall on floor with swara over sanskar.

Sanskar has his hand on swara's waist and both have intense eyelock , her big watery eyes were mesmerising sanskar.she was breathing heavily. Their face was not far than an inch. her rosy lips were cliched in pain . and a hair strand was troubling her. He puts a strand of hair behind her ears.

Their moment was broken when kavita shouts "sanskar "

They both get up remeberd what happened , sanskar gets concerned about swara's leg , it was bleeding. Kavita runs off and swara forces sanskar to go behind her.

Sankar does not want to leave but swara shots at him , jao uske pas

Sankar goes to Kavita and explains her everything , kavita hugs him and he awkwardly consoles her

Swara in her room dresses her wound

Both standing at window of their room and thinking about the kitchen fall incident , a sweet smile follows on their face

BG music

Lafzon se jo tha pare, Khaalipan ko jo bhare

Kuchh to tha tere mere darmiyaan, Rishte ko kya mod doon

Naata yeh ab tod doon.Ya phir yoon hi chhod doon, darmiyaaan

Benaam rishta wo...Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo

Ho na sake jo bayaan, darmiyan

Darmiyaan Darmiyan

Precap

More cute swasan scenes

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome just love SwaSan Scene😳
Ragini😡
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waiting for more SwaSan moments

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